He fumbles at your spirit... (Maan/Geet OS) 27 Jul

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Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

fantastic👏

loved iT!!!!❤️

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

He fumbles at your spirit
As players at the keys
Before they drop full music on;

Sookie, this was absolutely brilliant.

I liked how you looked at the whole situation from a third's persons point of view. You are right in saying that for an innocent bystander, the interactions between Maan and Geet might seem warring. But the level of intimacy that these two share springs from an immaculate trust in each other.

And the title is perfect. The poem by Emily Dickinson (I think you were inspired by this) perfectly suits them both.

I like your flow of thoughts. It makes for a wonderful read.

Thanks a ton for the pm.

Your breath has time to straighten
Your brain to bubble cool --
Deals one imperial thunderbolt
That scalps your naked soul.

Love,
Ash

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: meggs
a lovely one shot... i really enjoyed reading it😊

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it. :-)

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Hmmm!!! :)

Reserved.

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Hey Sookie!!!

Wow!!! I asked for one and you gave two. Thats so nice of you. Kudos dear!!

Wondering what and how? Well, I asked you from Geet's view, you gave from daadi's and also added a bit of Geet's too.

Opposite attract, at the same time distract each other from the routine. Thats interesting. Lovely again S.

PS: What about Sasha's POV? 😉. Hahaha! I know its a very bad joke.😛😆

Edited by Prasanthi - 15 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Nirjhor105
it's really nice to see Maan-Geet interaction from his grandmother's point of view.I always loved your writing, and today too

Thanks! Yeah I wanted to do something different with this OS so I gave granny POV.

Thanks mucho for liking my writing :-)

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: naddiya26
superb dear speechless

Thank you so much!

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: maanmeet8
hats off..... !!

my adjectives will be short enough to explain it ....i absolutely loved it ....!!!!!!!!

u hav really created something....

fantastic..!!!!

Thank you so much! Your comment made me really happy. :-)

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Doodle

@Doodle

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Sookie, I think am writing to you for the first time....

AMAZING...A piece of brilliance...Believe me your perspective at Maan and Geet equation have opened the blocked windows to the other side of my understanding.

Now I am starting to understand them in a different way. Wow...Thanks you again.

P.S. Pl PM me in future if you post some article.