Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 50

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Bring me to life

Geet had run away. Run away from him, no in fact she had run away from what he made her feel. She did not know why she had said that? Why being with him made her forget everything. Everything that had happened to her, faded into oblivion, obliterating the rest and leaving her alive, aware of only one thing, one person Maan.

She did not know what life had in store for her, the hardships she had faced not at the hands of strangers but her own family was going to haunt her for life. If they had not wanted to get her married off, if they had not hurried into the matrimony, she would have had a different life. Perhaps thinking of a man like Maan would not be off limits. She now stood on a brink, a precipice where telling him everything would make her even more vulnerable to him. Could she trust her heart to guide her right? Could she trust herself with Maan? She knew what he had said when he fed her today, the kiss was branded in her mind. She gingerly touched her lips, the swelling reducing but still there as a reminder of what had happened between them.

She had run to outhouse, her room, to look into the mirror to confirm her fears. She saw a girl in the first throws of bliss. She felt elation at knowing that Maan thought so much about her. She had felt awakened. She felt alive where he had touched her with his hands, with his eyes and with his lips. She knew he brought the dreams and they were in color, multicolor. She had lived a nightmare and now he was there to save her from herself, her responsibilities.

Just then, Maan walked into the room. She stared at him through the mirror. She knew he came for his answers, answers she was unable to give. He looked at her with questions he had asked and the ones he had not voiced.

"Geet!" he called out her name as if it was his very breath. She turned hearing the need in his voice. Hearing an answering need inside her. Deep inside her. She looked into his fathomless pools of desire washing over her, in waves that rose to drown her in them.

"Chale jaaiye Maan, yahan se chale jaaiye!" she choked even unconvinced to her ears, she heard herself plead. He came and stood in front of her, looking at her strangely. She did not know what he was thinking.

He just took her in his arms, muttering, "Tum mujhe ye keh ke jaa sakti thi, Geet, tum mujhse door jaa sakti thi Geet." He hugged her, like having her in his arms was like first ray of sun after a dark moonless night. He wanted to savor her nearness, feel her next to him to know that she felt the same as him.

He asked her, "why did you run away Geet? Why when we had just shared something profound? How could you admit to liking it and then leave. What kind of a person are you Geet, to deliberately hurt yourself and me. We have something precious, something I want to cherish for life."

She kept silent, letting him take it out she thought. He was almost feverish in his need to know why she had run away. How does one explain things to someone, about her situation, especially when that person is Maan? Till date he had been her shield, him between her and any harm that came her way. He had let go of important client, deals too many things to count and belittle. She was indebted to him for life. Well, this life that she has was courtesy him. She had been saved and now she had to save him from making the biggest mistake in his life. She had to keep her away from him. But she had told this to herself over and over. How to convince him she wondered?

He had tightened his hold on her when he had felt her shiver, running his hand on her back to give her warmth. She felt a tingling inside her. A stirring of her senses. He had started to kiss her forehead, along her hairline. He was devouring her softness, she felt light kisses rain on her face, her cheeks, chin, her jawline, her nose to finally find the destination, her lips as if he were prolonging the moment to kiss her to relish it longer. He kissed her deeply, pulling her into him, leaving no room between them, not even air. She responded. She let him plunder her mouth like he was a king out to conquer the most coveted kingdom and claim it as his. She felt his tongue dance with hers and she joined the dance that was both rhythmic and sensational. She felt sensual, from his touch. He breathed her name over and over as if a chant that had become his very life. He kissed her neck, her throat, pushing the dupatta away so that he could touch her pulsating skin at the base of the neck.

She felt herself melt, like butter under a hot knife. She felt she would end up in a puddle at his feet, her feet seemed to buckle under her. It was Maan who held her there, almost taking her weight on him. Her arms had moved around his neck and she found the springy softness of his hair tantalizing.

He untied the thread on her neck at the back of her dressed , as he ran his hand on the exposed back. Needing more, he reached the zip and drew it down, putting his warm hand on her skin. Her eyes jerked open at his touch. She struggled to push him away. He seemed out of control. She finally found enough strength to put her hands in between her and his chest and pushed hard.

Maan drew back, as if he was drugged. He asked her silently with his eyes the reason for her stopping him.

"Stop it!" she said. "I can't do this!" she thundered back when he frowned.

"Geet! Why, why are you doing this? Tell me why tell me one thing with your eyes and then your lips they lie!"

"My eyes! What do you see Maan is nothing but wishful thinking on your part. We have nothing between us. Nothing."

"Yeah? He drawled sarcastically, "what just happened that was nothing too? You did not feel anything just then? And before you think of lying Geet, this me, Maan you are talking to, so think before you reply."

She said, "Yeah you want your answers. I will give them to you! yes it was something, but no I don't want to do anything about it! Before you ask why. Because I can't. I have no right to feel like I do. To feel the way you make me do. It was snatched from me Maan. I have responsibilities that you won't even begin to fathom."

"What responsibilities Geet? What why are you saying this? I want to know, no I demand to know what is it that makes you want to throw away what we have. What?" he roared almost losing control of himself, his fist clenching, his jaw working.

She said, "Because I am pregnant!" And runs out of her own room, escaping the look he must have on his face.

Bring me to life – Evanescence - lyrics

How can you see into my eyes like open doors?
Leading you down into my core where I've become so numb
Without a soul, my spirit sleeping somewhere cold
Until you find it there and lead it back home

Wake me up
(Wake me up inside)
I can't wake up
(Wake me up inside)
Save me
(Call my name and save me from the dark)

Wake me up
(Bid my blood to run)
I can't wake up
(Before I come undone)
Save me
(Save me from the nothing I've become)

Now that I know what I'm without
You can't just leave me
Breathe into me and make me real
Bring me to life

Wake me up
(Wake me up inside)
I can't wake up
(Wake me up inside)
Save me
(Call my name and save me from the dark)

Wake me up
(Bid my blood to run)
I can't wake up
(Before I come undone)
Save me
(Save me from the nothing I've become)

I've been living a lie
There's nothing inside
Bring me to life

Frozen inside without your touch
Without your love, darling
Only you are the life among the dead

All this time, I can't believe I couldn't see
Kept in the dark but you were there in front of me
I've been sleeping a thousand years it seems
Got to open my eyes to everything

Without thought, without voice, without a soul
Don't let me die here
There must be something more
Bring me to life

Wake me up
(Wake me up inside)
I can't wake up
(Wake me up inside)
Save me
(Call my name and save me from the dark)

Wake me up
(Bid my blood to run)
I can't wake up
(Before I come undone)
Save me
(Save me from the nothing I've become)

I've been living a lie
There's nothing inside
Bring me to life

Exactly...exactly what i had envisioned...i am so glad that we are so intuned!! Thanks for a brilliant scene...and a cliffhanger....nooooooooooo!! Poor Maan....we now need to investigate his response to what he just heard....what will he do...will he chase her down and demand an explanation...or will he use the bits of her past that he knows to draw incorrect conclusions.............uff...they have so far to be at his point....my heart truly beleeds for both of them....kyun ke kismat ne unki kahi ka nahi chorra!!!

sorry everyone..i did not respond to your comments..
but i have been feeling a little low..about the situation of Maaneet and the reason is of course the scene above...
i needed to get that out of me..

will write to all in the morning...

Originally posted by: rushtrip

sorry everyone..i did not respond to your comments..
but i have been feeling a little low..about the situation of Maaneet and the reason is of course the scene above...
i needed to get that out of me..

will write to all in the morning...

Feel better..and sleep tight...we will talk tomorrow!!

Hey vrush....firstly take care...sleep well...

Pregnant.....i wish this wasn;t the case...but anyways....i feel bad for Maan....he is going to explode n feel betrayed!!This actually scares me....MSK going bonkers on Geet!!

Vrush 🤗 a big tight hug to you.

Take care girl and hope you feel better soon.

Loved the first one. Maan branding Geet with a love bite. That is totally Maan.

And the second one - My heart cries for these two. To be so near yet so far. And that cliffhanger? Honey, you should write a continuation when you feel better. I want to see how Maan reacts!!

Aww.........heart breaker of an epi.......luvd it fully vru....ur just too amazing for words...👏 mk glad atleast Geet admitted that she did feel smthng.....

No words... absolutely no words..... you are too good , just too good...there are no words to express ...just a desire...make them come closer.... thru all the troubles lying between them... make them come closer...