Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 16

@ dolphin...and i could not myself from laughing when your dhan ta nan..came...it was so..bloody till that point...i had felt the blows in my solar plexus....you just turned it around...

smashing..keep it up...

Originally posted by: Nimz-KMH

Vrush! tum ham sabko dheere dheere pagal kar do gi😉😉 Loved it! You describe everything so beautifully and the picture we get while reading is just perfect! 🤗🤗

I love the way you included that song to match up with the words/feelings.😊 Waise, I just wrote another chapter of my story and also included a song in there! 😆 when I read your update....i was like..😲...hehehe! 😊

keep updating....😊

ah nim i read yours..and commented there as well.. will read the latest now...

i have one for you..as well...read and comment pls..

this is even more bold then the ones i have done so far...

Originally posted by: rushtrip

@ dolphin...and i could not myself from laughing when your dhan ta nan..came...it was so..bloody till that point...i had felt the blows in my solar plexus....you just turned it around...

smashing..keep it up...

Hahaha, it was indeed to lighten up the moment and make it filmy. I couldn't find a better word than dhan ta nan. Isn't that what happens when cops come in the middle of a fight scene...just out of nowhere. LOL

yeah so true....ekdam filmy...its cool..do write more...

you know it is a pleasant departure from my soppy tales...i like the action...

a fighting maan...how...maanish...

wow Vrush.......it was very well written!!!! I read it open mouthed and love the lyrics of the song u posted!!

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

wow Vrush.......it was very well written!!!! I read it open mouthed and love the lyrics of the song u posted!!

oh if you see the song...you would know..what that song is like..it is so sensual..and this song came in 89...so..there...i had been stuff of my fantasy for a long time...

Wow Vrushali (I hope that is ur name) it was amazing! I mean so real, I could literally see the scene enacted in front of me! With them this is how we imagine them to be, passionate, romantic, desire exploding to its optimum & yet there is that over powering LOVE that is underlying in this heat of physical exploration!

Originally posted by: lghosh

Wow Vrushali (I hope that is ur name) it was amazing! I mean so real, I could literally see the scene enacted in front of me! With them this is how we imagine them to be, passionate, romantic, desire exploding to its optimum & yet there is that over powering LOVE that is underlying in this heat of physical exploration!

Excellent piece of work. U kind of gave words to what we all dream about Geet & Maan & obviously never ever will witness anything remotely similar to the scenario.

Thank u for this. And all I can say is poor Maan, only to realise it was a dream after his wonderful voyage to Geet-dom!! 😆 He better work hard to make his reverie a reality! 😉

Once again brilliant.

Lana.

thank you lana...yes Vrushali is my name..and i assume Lana is yours...

yep some one on the forum talked about power of love..and yes...that is there so strong a bond a between them that physical coupling transcend the mere act and culminates into meeting of souls on a higher plane...

Well, my eyes went on the stat warning after I finished reading the part..😕Tab tak toh bahut dair ho chuki thi! 😆

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Well, my eyes went on the stat warning after I finished reading the part..😕Tab tak toh bahut dair ho chuki thi! 😆

haila abs your are so cute..