Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 17

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Wow...that was a bold write up. I was also hoping to write some romantic moments, but I don't think I want to write such a bold scene. Nonetheless, great job with your writing!

Originally posted by: ash08

Vrush, 🤗

The first one was beautiful.... The song is very nice and was very apt to the situation... Yes, the phase of learning your feelings and trying to find logic in everything you do is the best phase of falling in love. Been there, done that. It is like a warm cup of coffee on a beautiful winter morning.... so much comfort in that.. And you brought out the feelings so beautifully..

The second one - Let me get my hormones in control. It was a dare?? You passed with flying colors darling!! It is not easy to put down to words the feelings, emotions and those desires that every one of us have when you want somebody. What you wrote was perfect without even a slight hint of vulgarity....... I hope I am making sense here. I am just slightly disappointed that it was Maan's dream. 😆

Love,
Ash

Originally posted by: rushtrip

ah...the dream was of course a camouflage..i donno if they will ever consummate their love...that is still far far away in the distance...

thank you...i felt..that they are right now struggling to voice their feeling even to themselves...Maan stopped himself mid sentences...Geet had her hand on her mouth when she realised she had almost kissed him if he had not moved...and was aghast at herself...i guess the first inklings makes one want to run far away..but...an unknown thread pulls you closer..to the object of your thoughts..

hmm second one..was yes kinda..prodded to me to write...i had already done is this love and i got a reminder that i have write what i threatened when they asked for more...
so yeah..and thanks...i think...making love is such a sublime act that one should sully it with crudity...i look at the emotions involved in the act...not describe the act...we all know about the birds and bees...pointing the obvious is futile... i like to delve what makes one want to be with this one person...open up so completely that one is bare not just physically but to the soul..to share...a moment...that literally is a little death...and very death creates a life...
oh now i have rattled on....

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Very well said ....I'd have hated it if you had described the act rather than the emotions...that would have sound crude & vulgur...but you chose your words so well that it captured the entire beauty of the emotions involved...but the part that it was all Maan's dream came as a rude shock...pouts...😆