One fine day... (Maan/Geet One Shot) 25 Jul

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: phoenixgirl
loved it so much sookie... i hav read a few of ur ffs in the fanfictions forum too...u r an amazing writer..am really glad that u wrote 4 geet...loved this..do write more..

Hello!

I am glad to hear that you have read my other works too. Thank you very much for appreciating my writing. Geet is new and I wanted to experiment.

Thanks,

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: simran1285
well, well, well look who it is😆

ok sooks I'll be honest..for a few days now (especially since you Pmed me the maaneet vms) I have contemplating asking you to write something, a piece, a ss or a ff on geet. Can I say I am pleasantly surprised to see my wish so soon on paper.

now what do I say about this piece...I was hypnotized and completely enthralled the entire time...it was beyond beautiful, it was in a weird way quite magical.

your vm was morbid but I only saw sunshine in this😉 thanks for the PM, otherwise I would have missed such a brilliant piece.

Thanks Sims. I did VMs because I wanted to learn how to make them. :-)

Good that this came out as a surprise.

Awesome adjectives there Sims. Glad you liked it :D

What can I say? I have a thing for morbid stuff :D You should visit my Death Talkies thread :

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Nirjhor105
very nice, beautiful and sweet one shot. every word was so special. thanks a lot for writing this. i am glad you write on them too

Thank you! This is my first OS on Geet. I am glad you liked it :-)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: scorpiangyal
WOW thats really amazing!

Thank you! :-)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

OMG This is simply Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb.................Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..........!!!!!......👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Sookie!

I cant believe you are hooked up with this series. Maan/Geet VMs and now we have Maan/Geet one shot.

Nevermind that, I am only interested in your writing anyway 😉
Nice one shot. Everything was complete in itself. Angry young man has transformed into a sweet charming fellow here 😛 Liked the way his mind is caught in a dilemma..

Wow! Reading something like this from you! It was like a treat..after your much complex, morbid stuff. hehe

Anu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Superstar, how you doin? I literally recalled this and had a read again. It was still that same superb stuff, it used to be day before. :P

I don't really watch Geet, and never ever have watched 'Ramayan', so I was seriously not very familiar with Maan; but here I could really imagine him with ever pasing word you wrote. This was one peice I'm gonna remember for long. Carefully penned down, and nicely summed up.

I liked them playing tic-tac-toe during the meeting, this is what I could do in one my history classes.. but never really did yet. :\

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing.

(OCD!!! ) :l

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo
i like the flow of ur writing it show the journey of 2 ppl in a day their feelings, thoughts everythin is penned down very well was looking 4r sumthin like this...........glad found it
nice work dear!!! if u tend to write sumthin else do pm wud luv to read:)

Hello! Thank you very much for the comment. I am glad you liked it :-)
I have written many OS and few series (some even complete!). PM me if you would like to read them.

Thanks!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Naina2127
wowow. that was an AWESOME OS. just loved how their emotions were depicted and how aptly this suited Maan and Geet. You're an awesome writer :)

~Naina

Thank you very much Naina :-) And many thanks for appreciating the writer :=D
Glad you liked the flow...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

i thought you lost interest!!!
good that you didnt
this was a great piece...felt like i was watching a movie...beautifully written. Another one without conversations! :D
good characterization....loved that tic tac toe part a lot!
thanks for the pm
Sur