One fine day... (Maan/Geet One Shot) 25 Jul

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

wowow. that was an AWESOME OS. just loved how their emotions were depicted and how aptly this suited Maan and Geet. You're an awesome writer :)

~Naina

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Angel-Pebby
To be fair, yes, I've read it... but I'm not in mood to comment.
But, for your solace, I liked it... Detailed review will follow later..

Talk to you later! ;)

Take your time girlie...Will wait for your comments. :-)

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ash08

@ash08

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Sookie,

How on earth did I miss this?

One word, beautiful!!

You know how they say that you have to live every moment of your life. Thats what his shot portrayed to me. Every minute of Maan and Geet's life in their office - albeit be it a day. And I love the title. Reminded me of George Clooney and MIchelle Pfieffer.

I love the way the story flows - nothing flamboyant, nothing dramatic. Just a normal turn of events in the day with certain things that make it oh so eventful. It was like a soft breeze on an autumn morning caressing your tresses when you are in the park with a hot steamy cup of coffee.

And I loved the way the story ended. End of today, but a bright morning tomorrow. So much faith and so much anticipation. And the way Geet just closes her hand over his - fabulous. It was a moment to experience. Isn't life all about that? Experiences?

Thank you for writing such a wonderful shot. And if it is not a big trouble can you please pm me when you write next for I would not want to miss reading your writings.

Cheers,
Ash

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XAiShBaBy08X

@XAiShBaBy08X

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Differently written. I simply loved it. You are a good writer.

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: imshveta
Dint I tell you you should try writing abt Geet-Maan
it was awesome. But I will comment in detail later

love
Shveta

Yes you did Shveta :-) Thanks for dropping by.

Will wait for your comments...

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sri_4
Hey sookie*
Great one..ManEet ..seems like u r addicted to it..😆..

It is worth adddicting..loved it to bits..the small gestures of maan are something worth to watch n now to read..his angry..his smile..his confusion..u have displayed his emotions greatly..

Looking forward for more..

Good wishes..

Sri:-)

Hello Sri,

Thanks for liking this :-). Actually I am only addicted to Maan's eyes. Damn those eyes!

More...hmm..Depends on how this week is going to progress...I have to update others too you know :=)

Thanks!

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Raisa

@radiant_raisa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

I loved how you expressed the scenes, nicely done 😊

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Lovely!! Thats the first thing came to my mind as I finished reading. Just too good Sookie. Could actually visualize them all through. Thanks for the pm!

Thank you Prasanthi! You are welcome for the PM! :D