One fine day... (Maan/Geet One Shot) 25 Jul

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Lovely!! Thats the first thing came to my mind as I finished reading. Just too good Sookie. Could actually visualize them all through. Thanks for the pm!

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ammygurl
Yay!
If I am not wrong, This is your first Maan-Geet OS!
Cool! It's one of the best creations I have read lately and even though I have admitted some where that I don't like experimenting beyond Armaan Riddhima.. I made a good choice in exception! :)
Nice one! Perfectly imaginable and soo Maan Geet!!! :)
And tic-tac-toe- ing during a meeting? That's something very VERY common amongst us students too.. :)
Good one!
Write more..
Ananya

Thanks Ananya. Yes, this my first Maan-Geet OS. Well, during meetings much complex games are played - like politics and bureaucratic ones but I used something simple as tic-tac-toe. I think playing in a class is vastly different from playing during meetings, don't you think so?

Thanks,
S

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her_story

@her_story

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

loved it so much sookie... i hav read a few of ur ffs in the fanfictions forum too...u r an amazing writer..am really glad that u wrote 4 geet...loved this..do write more..

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@spln

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

the title made me think of geroge cloony right away - and it took me some long seconds to recall the title of the movie i was reminded of - one fine day!

not half as eventful, i daresay, but a nice easy read - not fussy, not obscure! i like the transfer of her anomaly trait into him - with each time he ignores his two thoughts ... also, i notice, u keep real dialogs away - i think that works for the better for this particular piece ...

i wish it would compel me to watch the show, but that doesn't happen yet - and yes, i reiterate, ur being 'the anomaly' by ur ridicule of austen, and liking of this show!!! =D which concludes to but an obstinate stance on ur part! someday, thy shalt have to see light!

cheers,
nj

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simran1285

@simran1285

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

well, well, well look who it is😆

ok sooks I'll be honest..for a few days now (especially since you Pmed me the maaneet vms) I have contemplating asking you to write something, a piece, a ss or a ff on geet. Can I say I am pleasantly surprised to see my wish so soon on paper.

now what do I say about this piece...I was hypnotized and completely enthralled the entire time...it was beyond beautiful, it was in a weird way quite magical.

your vm was morbid but I only saw sunshine in this😉 thanks for the PM, otherwise I would have missed such a brilliant piece.

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simran1285

@simran1285

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: spln
the title made me think of geroge cloony right away - and it took me some long seconds to recall the title of the movie i was reminded of - one fine day!

not half as eventful, i daresay, but a nice easy read - not fussy, not obscure! i like the transfer of her anomaly trait into him - with each time he ignores his two thoughts ... also, i notice, u keep real dialogs away - i think that works for the better for this particular piece ...

i wish it would compel me to watch the show, but that doesn't happen yet - and yes, i reiterate, ur being 'the anomaly' by ur ridicule of austen, and liking of this show!!! =D which concludes to but an obstinate stance on ur part! someday, thy shalt have to see light!

cheers,
nj

aahhh thanks NJ I was wondering why the title was so peculier and really you don't watch geet, wish you did it's a welcoming change after the current life of AR and DMG

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Nirjhor105

@Nirjhor105

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

very nice, beautiful and sweet one shot. every word was so special. thanks a lot for writing this. i am glad you write on them too

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

i like the flow of ur writing it show the journey of 2 ppl in a day their feelings, thoughts everythin is penned down very well was looking 4r sumthin like this...........glad found it

nice work dear!!! if u tend to write sumthin else do pm wud luv to read:)

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Nice OS
Jus loved it

Loved the way u expressed wat Maan feels for Geet n cares for n all

Thank you! Glad you like it. :-)

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: paaal
wow u did a fantastic job. The way u described their emotions was really awesome. U did a wonderful job. Hats off to u. Lovely.

Thank you very much for your comments. And many thanks for stopping by. Glad you liked it. :-)