One fine day... (Maan/Geet One Shot) 25 Jul

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: XAiShBaBy08X
Differently written. I simply loved it. You are a good writer.

Thank you very much! For liking the story and appreciating the writer :-)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

plz continue.. .plz add me to ur pm list!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: rusha4003
Sookie .... one word for this ... AWESOME ...

Loved it that you wrote Maan's perspective .... it was intense / passionate / heart-warming ......

Is this a one-off or do you intend to continue ???

My opinion ... you should continue !!

Plzzzzz....

Thank you so much for your kind words!
As mentioned in title of post, its a one shot. :-) Sorry there.
Its about getting a glimpse of their day to day life from Maan's perspective with a subtle twist in the end :-)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: hapinezz13
beautiful Sookie!!

Loved the day from Maan's eyes!!

Thank you! I love Maan's eyes and here we are :=D

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

I want to know how you see things from Geet's side. Hope its not too much to ask for.😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Sofna

OMG This is simply Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb.................Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..........!!!!!......👏👏👏👏👏

Thank you sooooo much :-)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: anu.happy4ever
Sookie!

I cant believe you are hooked up with this series. Maan/Geet VMs and now we have Maan/Geet one shot.

Nevermind that, I am only interested in your writing anyway 😉
Nice one shot. Everything was complete in itself. Angry young man has transformed into a sweet charming fellow here 😛 Liked the way his mind is caught in a dilemma..

Wow! Reading something like this from you! It was like a treat..after your much complex, morbid stuff. hehe

Anu

Anu!

I am watching this series till next season starts you-know-where. :-) Also its two months till the shows I watch return on television. So till then, I do need something to talk about and write about, no?

I think there is a shade of both angry young man and sweet guy in this OS. Yeah, the place where the two traits cross, causes the dilemma.

Yeah, all my previous stuff has been little morbid, complex or essay type :-) I was reminded of my old writing I did for AR and decided to give similar treatment to these two. Glad it turned out well.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania
i thought you lost interest!!!
good that you didnt
this was a great piece...felt like i was watching a movie...beautifully written. Another one without conversations! :D
good characterization....loved that tic tac toe part a lot!
thanks for the pm
Sur

Hi Sur!

No!!! I have not lost my interest yet. Maan's eyes are still holding me back :-)

Yep. Not writing conversations are kind of good. Less effort required :-)

You are welcome fr the PM!

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