FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Enjoyed reading your posts... but please edit and cut out the memory loss part na ,pleeeez , otherwise it is going so beautifully , please continue...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i loved it do continue .... but can we please do it without the memory loss


and @chulculli 10-15 bacche woh bhi Nt aur Dev palenge ... achhi saza hai.... doosra janam🤣
Edited by jamoshi2507 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
geet lost memory....

u r being ekta!!!😆

jokes apart do continue!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
wow i dont want maan to find out abut tht geet's pregnancy like tht...cuz thts goona be real bad...n on top of tht geet's memory lose wow thts a shock....i like ur prediction but i actually dont want tht to happen....tht will be real BAD!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Please continue 😊

Originally posted by: chullbulli

kaunsa walla ..maneet ki football team wala...are yaar hanso mat socho ...socho humare pyare maneet 10 12 bachoon ke saath..saari ki saari ladkiyaan aur woh bhi geet ki tarah chatar patar...maan abhi bolta hai ki main paagal ho jaoonga...yeh socho geet jaisi betiyon ke baad maan ka kya hoga...😉😆



nah ! I was talking about this one
"MSK...new lethal drug out in market. "
😛
but the one you mentioned is just hilarious
🤣
just imagining Maan with his daughters like Geet
🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

PART 2
Thanks for liking my post . As everyone asked me not to use memory loss track . i am not adding that. do comment on this part.


At office.
Daadi : i want every news channel should broad cast this news Maan is missing for last 6 hours .she announced as media people were present at Party

Dev : whisper to his wife bhai is with his sectary must be enjoying daadi is just worried.

Sasha: yeh geet bhot taaiz cheeze ha

Adi: Sasha tum har baar haar jati ho

Sasha : looked at him in anger.

Daadi: you guys will just gossip .no one will search for Maan

At hospital.
Maan : in state of shock after hearing Geet is expecting . He walk to her bed . (flash back ... while his back to home how he found Geet in forest wounded & his brother were trying to kill her ) "hmmm iss ki wajha yeh thi aik generation aapni batee ko maar rahi ha aur dosri .....Geet you are really brave"

nurse : sir while you sit here i will come in five min

Maan: he sit on stool next to Geet bed
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nurse : plz keep your hand on her drip hand she is moving ,its needle will come out.
Maan: hesitated but put his hand on her hand . staring at her innocent face . whisper " Geet now get up aagar tum bolo na tou mujhe ajeeb se lagta ha." he felt some moment in her hand.


nurse saw Maan news flash on Tv . she quickly picked up phone and dialed Daadi number.
Mama you son & his wife is at our Hospital .

Daadi :ok i am coming. Dev Maan aapni biwi ka saath ha..... i know maan is very responsible there must be some thing more important than his work.

Dev : biwi
Daadi : haan biwi ... pochti hoon ja kar Maan se...... woh hi larki ho Maan kai biwi.

Sasha : about to faint


they All reached Hospital

Geet: mummer mein na kya kiya ha bola na sir

Maan: quickly jumped from his sit : Geet aankhee khulo.pat her face

Geet: open her eyes saw Maan too closed to her bending on her face.she could feel his breath they both stare at each other for few minutes as He looked in her eyes
Geet: aah
Maan: kya hoya he came back to life .He pull back him self.
Geet: my head
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Daadi was look at them she enter Room at the same time."wah beta shadi bhi karle aur mujhe ko bataya bhi nahi."

Maan :cleared his throat at Daadi sudden Question. " daadi aap ghalat samaje rahi ha"

Daadi walk to Geet and kiss her fore head ...." meri tamana thi ka tum Maan kai biwi bano."

Maan: aap meri baat to suna daadi...
Daadi aab bus Maan hum tumhari aik baat nahi suna ga.. Aaj tum na hum ko do do khushi dee ha. aik bahu aru dosra hum per daadi bana wala ha.

Geet: shocked looking at Maan & daadi.
Maan: Daadi aap
Daadi : Maan hum ko khush hona do. aur jhoot na bolo.

At same time dev & his wife enter room

To be cont

sorry i have some prob i not able to add long parts in 1 post

if you like do tell me i will cont
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Posted: 15 years ago
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liked it 😊👏👏

daadiji bhi kamal karthi hai😆😆
chalo maan aur geet will be together i hope it to happen😛
waiting for the update😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chullbulli

geet lost her memoryu cracked me up here dear lost memory...not yet dear not yet...woh to next year ki baat hai jab kisses hugs and maan geet ke babiees (kitne...hmm 10-15) ho jayenge tab for a change geet ki memory loss hmmm nahin doosra janam... i think itne saare bachon ko paalte paalte dono ....tishummm mar jayenge tab..doosra janam lena padega ,....aur aur ... dev aur nain tara ki sazaa yahi hogi ki woh saare bachon ko paalenge...🤣 aur naya janam lekar maneet phir se romance karenge....to bolo sahi hai na..


ok dear no memory lost

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