FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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just finished reading it...
my love u have gotten better at writing FFs
carry on...cuz as u n i can see... everyone luvs it ^_^
keep updating okay
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 3

Maan: dadi aap kuch sunati nahi ha I can't stand this any more Geet why don't you tell dadi
Geet : dadi plz aap meri baat suna
Dadi : Geet I will listen your love story when you will be fine let me first tell media people you are fine
Geet felt helpless she want to grab bedsheet to hide her pain she grab Maan hand. Her eyes was closed and a tear roll down her eye she want to hide her self from world. maan suddenly looked at her she saw her face .his anger vanish.her soft touch made him powerlees .
Dev & his wife who had entered room to meet their bhabi got stunt to see geet laying in bed .Maan saw them & ask them to stop .Plz meet her later.they quickly left the room.
Dadi came back : Maan I asked DR we can take her home Our home.
Maan but dadi.
Dadi : maan you what me to get sick
Maan khurana couldn't say any thing as one was his strength and other was his weakness
Geet : who was listening their conversation quickly open eyes & stare at Maan.
Maan :looked at her but didn't said a word. Pat her hand she let it free. He walk out of room.
Still media people were out there ,Sasha was handling them, they all rush to ask maan
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Maan: I just want to tell you all this is my personal matter & I want you all to stay way from it .
Sir is she your wife as your grandmama told us .?
Maan: wanted to say no but both faces came in front of his eyes . Geet teary eyes hopeless face and dadi Sparking eyes with full of joy and happiness… he paused cleared his throad ." Yes she is my wife.Mrs.Geet Maan,Now plz don't distrube us."
Sasha about to faint .dev quickly moved out of hospital.
Dev to his wife "we cant stay here any more if we stay they Maan will not forgive me .. you call didi that your mom is sick we have to rush to canada."

Maan enter room saw dadi sitting near Geet & talking to her she stop as she saw him." Car is waiting lets go " geet still shock what he is doing & why?
Dadi : smiled & kissed geet fore head " Maan I will go & make arragement after all my bahu is coming first time to her home you bring geet"
Maan :ok smiled he himself want sometime alone with geet.
Geet was scared he will now shout at her .Maan came close to her &sit he very slowly said "Geet I don't know I did right or not but I can't break dadi heart we will try to tell her . you are staying in pinky home same way you can stay in mine."
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Geet shocked at Maan new face . she mummer " chot to mera sir per lagi ha why he is behaving like this"
Maan heard what she said but ignored as he wanted old Geet back.
Dr came in: " sir you can take her but be very carefull no mental stress she need rest. (she checked her again geet was feeling shy infront of Maan. Maan saw her shy face he went out. Dr : ask him to rest ,
He had given you blood and didn't had anything God bless you both. Geet shocked to hear that..

They reached home didi was waiting for them she asked to Maan to pick her in his arms and enter home as she is still sick
Geet ;" dadi I can walk "
Maan: shhh let me I will not drop u
As they enter…. She proceed the ritual .( when bride enter first time to susral.)
Dadi : Maan take her to your room
Geet : looked at Maan
Maan: whisper do you trust me
Geet: smiled she placed her head at his shoulder . she saw blood stain there .. she closed her eyes & recollected what had happen in office.
Maan enter his bed room the envirment was different small candles were placed at a inch distance and white orchid was decorated very perfectly , both looked at each other. Maan laid geet in bed & quickly left the room. as he could not stand that any more

rest at page 6 plz read 😳
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nadiya... nice :) continue pls :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: febinyusuff

Nadiya... nice :) continue pls :)<div></div>

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: naddiya26

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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
update quickly yaar
love your story
if possible by tmr..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww that was so beautiful
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Posted: 15 years ago
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remaining PART OF PART 3

Geet could heard Maan talking to dadi out side " iss sub kai kya zarooat thi" suddenly there was silentout sided.
Geet felt she is secure her she placed her hand on stomach " baby you are safe now" she was drowsy she slept.

Maan knocked the door but didn't get response he whisper" i have to knock to enter my on bed room door
Geet had changed my life completely " maan wanted to take his clothes from his cupboard he quietly enter the room his room look very different geet was peace fully sleeping on his bed the candles light effect on geet face made Maan paralyzed
(back ground music)
You're just too good to be true.
Can't take my eyes off you.
You'd be like Heaven to touch.
I wanna hold you so much.
At long last love has arrived
And I thank God I'm alive.
You're just too good to be true.
Can't take my eyes off you.
He walk to geet he could feel the light was disturbing her he started blowing candles every time he blow he trun back to see what effect it on Geet cute face he cont stare and smile at his on thought
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago

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