A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Aww.I'm sorry...not even a little bit hindi?

I will keep it in mind for sure :)

@ mittu- sowie darling! my best friend has come to india for some work for a day, so..I'm trying to spend time with him...will give you a long long next part,pakka promishe!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
loved the update geet...gud that Maan came there in time and listened to all Sasha was trying to say...loved that dialogue of maan..."treat her like a queen"...aww he so loves her....
and our innocent Geet trying to cool off Maan's anger by swithching on the AC of the car....i want this scene in the show....it wud be fun....
as for the length of the updates...i don't mind short parts if you can update this fast😉...mean two updates in a day are equal to a long one....jst don't make us wait for long...
edit:..thnx for the pm😃
Edited by amotlymileo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
wow kia story chal rahe hai MRS. MAAN SINGH KHURANA 👏
GREAT UPDATE 😊... THANX FOR THE PM 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
luvd the update, dont know how i missed this ff, btw i m a huge fan of the self dialogues of maan tht u write😊
plz add me in ur pm list, tht wud make sure tht i dont miss on anything....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Update-

At the mall

Maan gets out fast and goes to Geet to open her door..

Geet- Maan...will you please step aside so I can get out

Maan- 😲

Steps aside, shaking his head after opening her door..
They go inside and Geet says

Geet- Aapko kya kya lena tha? aapne Mr Chopra ko bola tha na?
Maan- haan..woh..um..Let's buy your clothes first

Geet-par Maan.Oh ok, I will go with your advice, so you lead

Maan gets angry that Geet had assumed he would know about women clothing

Maan- Geet..you think I walk around in women stores buying clothes for girls?

Geet- nahi..woh main..I didn't mean that. I only meant..

Maan- I'm not the type. If we like something, we will buy it

Geet- UFF, why did I come shopping with him

Maan- what do I buy for her? what could make her look more beautiful

Suddenly they pass a lingerie store and Geet starts walking fast

Maan- Geet..ruko..please walk slowly..it's not healthy for the...

He breaks off

Geet thinks its the first time he has talked about my baby..She corrects herself, our baby and starts walking slowly

Maan spots a very beautiful black dress with red trimmings..with double straps and just above knee length

He thinks this would suit Geet very well..but still
he stops Geet and shows her the dress

Geet- I can so not carry that off
Maan- Have you even tried? C'mon let's go and you can show it to me

Geet- But..
Maan- No buts

He steers her into the store and Asks the saleswoman to give Geet the dress

She wears it and feeling extremely self-conscious, calls Maan inside..

Maan...

His heart beating so fast whenever she used that beautiful voice of hers to say his name hesitantly, he goes to her, and is stunned

Geet- Please..say something
Maan- there is nothing to say.. It looks beautiful on you. You don't look beautiful in it..but it looks beautiful on you. Lets take it

Geet is stunned by what Maan said..

Geet- you mean, I don't look good in it?!

Maan- nahi. You look good.But different. Lets take this and lets go from here. I have an idea

They buy it and Maan takes her to another shop where he sees a very beautiful red suit with zari work, it's anarkali style and he loves it

Geet- yahan kya?
Maan- yeh kaisa laga?tumhare upar bohot achha lagega
Geet- par..you don't even like red?
Maan- yes, I know..dont tell me about myself. But there is something in that dress. Please, just try it once..
Geet- i will,but people wont like it on me
Maan- To hell with people.

They go in, she tries the dress, and Maan almost dies..hyperventilates

Maan- how beautiful can someone look.. Meri laal pari..meri Geet..kitni khoobsoorat..hey Bhagwaan..I'm so lucky I have her in my life. Her inner beauty, and her ability to love shines through in that dress. It's made for her

Geet feels shy at the admiration in Maan's eyes and nudges him

Geet- Maan..thik hai?
Maan- haan? yes, perfect. absolutely perfect

They buy it and then Geet asks

what will you wear?

Maan, who hadn't thought about it at all says..something

Maan- why do yo u ask?
Geet- ...because I was thinking..people would expect us....ahem..to ...

Maan- let's find something for me if you want

Geet- okay

They find Maan something matching..

Something Indian attire...He had decided that if Geet would wear Indian, so would he.no arguements..

He had a great time looking at Geet fussing over him and his clothes, the fitting and everything else..

He loved it and thought if she had asked him to, he would have worn anything..or nothing..

blushing at the direction of his thoughts, he snapped back to the present and after taking everything..they were about to exit when Maan again stopped Geet

Geet- kya hua? Forgot something?
Maan- yes. You haven't eaten anything
Geet- it's ok.let's go home and eat.
Maan- no. we're eating now.
Geet- Maan..I don't feel like eating
Maan gives his no arguement stare to Geet and says she doesn't want to eat any burgers or pizzas

Maan- hmm...ohk great!let's go
Geet- wow..his mood changes soo fast when he's with me. God knows what he's thinking now.. UFF

She sits in the car and without noticing where Maan is taking her, she closes her eyes and dozes off

Maan has a hard time concentrating on the road ..

"she's so tired.." he sighs to himself,wishing he could do something to alleviate her tiredness

When Geet wakes up about half an hour later, she finds herself in familiar surroundings

Geet(amazed)- Maan...yeh toh wahi dhaba hai....


haha,that's it..sorry for bringing back the dhaba ..but i cant stop thinking of it...

comments and suggestions plzz!!

love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
maan shopping pe aesa hujata hai 😃 i m sure red mai geet bht achi lage ge dhabba ...hehehe 😆 yeh to waqi dono kabhe nahe bhulen ge 😉 good work yar 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
that was a killer update n thnks 4 d pm😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
read all parts. it's awesome ff. pls pm me when u'll update.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
dear geet.a
thank you very much for your lovely ff 👏and also considering my request.😉
best wishes😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
geet,

its amazing... geet's pregnant , but maan has lot of mood swings..!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

loved these parts :

Maan gets angry that Geet had assumed he would know about women clothing

Maan- Geet..you think I walk around in women stores buying clothes for girls? .....hahahaha so typical of him to say that....!!!!! i can imagine his angry face and expressions and geet going clueless when he's angry...!!!!


Maan- Geet..ruko..please walk slowly..it's not healthy for the...

He breaks off

Geet thinks its the first time he has talked about my baby..She corrects herself, our baby and starts walking slowly .... awwww....our baby.... chooooooo choooooooo chweeeeeeettttttt !!!!!!! i expected maan to react to it or say something there !!!


good job geet!!! so now they are going to re- live all those dhaba memories again.....gosh.. that's so amazing...!!!! 😳

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