A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154

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*mittu*

@*mittu*

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

I have no idea how I missed this ff. This is really great. Can you please add me to your PM list. Waiting for your next update.

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_SuMmEr_LoVe_

@_SuMmEr_LoVe_

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

sweet update...

maans changed so much ^_^

ufffffffffff waiting for ya next update

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

aah.... tht's kinda cute....!!!! maan aur masti???? shaadi ke baad badal chuka hai, mr khurana!!!! 😉

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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Wow!

Wonder if Geet is really going to wear some high society clothes. Maan's reaction would be worth a million dollars then!

So Geet easily convinced Mr.Chopra, looking forward to the reception. Wud be interesting to see Maaneet shop together before the reception.

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

thanks a lot!!

See..the thing I'm trying to show beyond all else is that Geet is the only one who could bring out Maan's fun side..ab toh bhangra bhi kar liya.salsa,bhangra,dhaba,rain dance ho jaayega...

I'm trying to show that behind his stern persona...he's a guy who's passionate and madly in love with his wife :)

If you guys want it to be something else..Change jaldi ho gaya? thoda slow pace karun??
plzz let me know!!

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Anum

@anufa

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

supeerrrbbbbbB!!!!!👏

update soon....n add me to ur pm list!!! plzzzz

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: geet.a
thanks a lot!!

See..the thing I'm trying to show beyond all else is that Geet is the only one who could bring out Maan's fun side..ab toh bhangra bhi kar liya.salsa,bhangra,dhaba,rain dance ho jaayega...

I'm trying to show that behind his stern persona...he's a guy who's passionate and madly in love with his wife :)

If you guys want it to be something else..Change jaldi ho gaya? thoda slow pace karun??
plzz let me know!!

u're right , geet is the only one who can make maan experience things that he seems to have forgotten long time back or simply ignored them...!!!! so , u're doing the right thing...!!! 😛

i guess the pace is fine. u should continue. gal can u add me to ur PM list. i do not want to miss an update. its really really interesting.!!!! 😳

and yes, one more thing, u can make geet call maan "sir" in the office and call him by his name at home. i guess that would surprise him a little !!!! i guess i'll have to read your other previous updates again to see if geet ever called maan by his name. if she did, then ignore this!!!

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

COntinued

Sasha is snooping around in Geet's office

Sasha- Toh Miss Geet..tumne kar ke dikha hi diya
Geet- kya?Dekhiye, aap baar baar yeh sab kya bolti hain?
Sasha- chaalaaki mat dikhao. Main tumhara asli roop samajh chuki hoon..Bhole bhaale boss ko shaadi mein phasa kar,saara naam,saara paisa..sab kuchh hadapna chahti ho na tum

Maan- SASHA!
How DARE YOU insult my wife??!!

Geet- woh Sir,

Maan looks at her
Geet tries again- Rehne dijiye Maan..chaliye. please
Maan- tum jaao gaadi mein baitho,main aata hoon

Geet goes and Maan talks with Sasha

Maan- Sasha- tumhari himmat kaise hui ki tum Geet ko, MRs GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko kuchh bolo? What has she done to you? tum itna kyun jalti ho usse?
Kyun ki tumme woh pyaar,woh bholapan, woh khoobsoorti nahi hai? ya woh meri patni hai isliye

A very stunned Sasha- But MK,main toh..

Maan stops her with her hand
Maan- Last warning de raha hoon.. Mere kaan hamesha yahi lage rahenge,toh keep your opinions to yourself and treat Geet as you would treat a queen. End of story.

Maan goes, leaving behind a near-to tears Sasha in his burning wake

In the Car,
Maan takes off his waistcoat, and his tie,opens a few buttons.
Geet quietly switches on the AC

Maan looks at her, suddenly realises that she is scared

Maan- tumhe thand lagti hai na..it's ok. Main thik hoon

Geet- Woh..Maan..aapko gussa aaya hua hai isliye thanda karne ke liye..

Maan smiles a small smile,barely noticed by Geet

Geet starts chit chatting and Maan loses himself in her, just listening to her,he thinks

kitna bolti hai. kya karun main iska...aur iske bolne se bhi mujhe koi irritation nahi hoti..iski har ada par pyaar hi aata hai.

Geet is thinking
Maan gusse mein itni jaldi aate hain..abhi chup ho jaati hoon..

She goes quiet

Maan looks at her
Maan- kya hua? aage kya hua?
Geet- aap sun rahe the? woh aapne kuchh response nahi diya isliye I shut up

Maan- nahi. Tum bolo, main sun raha hoon..I like listening to you

It was a simple line said by Maan but touched Geet to the core

Geet looked at the handsome profile of her husband and thought to her self,

"what a strange man..and yet...a good man"

tell me what you think guys...

so sorry for the short parts :(

if u guys want the length to be increased i can..but main monotonous reading nahi karna chahti that's why..short parts :)

suggestions welcome

love

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*mittu*

@*mittu*

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#39

That was such a short part. I am craving for more. Sasha deserved each and everything Maan said to her. I feel she will still try to do something to Geet.

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bahane

@bahane

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: geet.a
COntinued

Sasha is snooping around in Geet's office

Sasha- Toh Miss Geet..tumne kar ke dikha hi diya
Geet- kya?Dekhiye, aap baar baar yeh sab kya bolti hain?
Sasha- chaalaaki mat dikhao. Main tumhara asli roop samajh chuki hoon..Bhole bhaale boss ko shaadi mein phasa kar,saara naam,saara paisa..sab kuchh hadapna chahti ho na tum

Maan- SASHA!
How DARE YOU insult my wife??!!

Geet- woh Sir,

Maan looks at her
Geet tries again- Rehne dijiye Maan..chaliye. please
Maan- tum jaao gaadi mein baitho,main aata hoon

Geet goes and Maan talks with Sasha

Maan- Sasha- tumhari himmat kaise hui ki tum Geet ko, MRs GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko kuchh bolo? What has she done to you? tum itna kyun jalti ho usse?
Kyun ki tumme woh pyaar,woh bholapan, woh khoobsoorti nahi hai? ya woh meri patni hai isliye

A very stunned Sasha- But MK,main toh..

Maan stops her with her hand
Maan- Last warning de raha hoon.. Mere kaan hamesha yahi lage rahenge,toh keep your opinions to yourself and treat Geet as you would treat a queen. End of story.

Maan goes, leaving behind a near-to tears Sasha in his burning wake

In the Car,
Maan takes off his waistcoat, and his tie,opens a few buttons.
Geet quietly switches on the AC

Maan looks at her, suddenly realises that she is scared

Maan- tumhe thand lagti hai na..it's ok. Main thik hoon

Geet- Woh..Maan..aapko gussa aaya hua hai isliye thanda karne ke liye..

Maan smiles a small smile,barely noticed by Geet

Geet starts chit chatting and Maan loses himself in her, just listening to her,he thinks

kitna bolti hai. kya karun main iska...aur iske bolne se bhi mujhe koi irritation nahi hoti..iski har ada par pyaar hi aata hai.

Geet is thinking
Maan gusse mein itni jaldi aate hain..abhi chup ho jaati hoon..

She goes quiet

Maan looks at her
Maan- kya hua? aage kya hua?
Geet- aap sun rahe the? woh aapne kuchh response nahi diya isliye I shut up

Maan- nahi. Tum bolo, main sun raha hoon..I like listening to you

It was a simple line said by Maan but touched Geet to the core

Geet looked at the handsome profile of her husband and thought to her self,

"what a strange man..and yet...a good man"

tell me what you think guys...

so sorry for the short parts :(

if u guys want the length to be increased i can..but main monotonous reading nahi karna chahti that's why..short parts :)

suggestions welcome

love