A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago
Maan is walking in full-speed,like he usually does and bumps into Geet who has stopped...

(it's the funny-music scene 😆 )

MAan-GEET! Do you stop out of habit? Do you LIKE bumping every ten seconds?

Geet- No need to shout. I have no interest in bumping into you purposely...If you would only look ahead while walking and not every side..you will maybe start realizing that you are not the only person on EARTH!!

Maan- 😲 ahem...I will keep that in mind( sorta embarrased)

Geet gestures towards the house with her eyes

MAan gestures back asking her what

Geet- UFF...The party is still going on..and I was supposed to be in pain..so you took me to the doctor and he told me to eat some sweets, so we went and ate

Maan raises himself up to his full height and says to the air above his nose
MAan- MAan Singh Khurana kabhi bhi jhooth nahi bolta

Geet- Yeah...LIAR. Fine, anyways, I will say the first part, you say the part about sweets,thik hai?

MAan and Geet go in to find people genuinely worried and Dadi pretending to be

Dadi after spotting them both, thinks
Dadi- Uf..They should not really be left alone. Always, koi na koi gadbad karte hain. On one side is Maan- always angry, and unpredictable. And on the other Geet- Sweet and unpredictable..I guess they have fought. Again.

She gets surprised and confused as soon as she sees the sweets
Dadi to Maan- Maan..aap paagal hain? We told you to go take her to the hospital..and you have brought back gaajar ka halwa and (looks into bag)- rasmalai and Daal ka halwa!
Really Maan..We are flattered but seriously...

Maan glares at Geet and then Dadi and says
Maan- Samjhao Dadi ko. I'm going to explain everything to people
Geet- suniye...
Maan turns with his heart doing flip-flo
Maan- kya?
Geet- please tick to the story I told you

Getting irritated, he leaves Dadi and Geet alone

Geet- Dadi..Woh, I was hungry so we went to the dhaba and then..I wanted to have gaajar halwa, I was craving it and Maan said he will take me to the best, so we went to Rajendra Nagar and ....

She doesn't mention Dev or their argument
Dadi knowing Geet is hiding something lets it be and smiles gently at her
Dadi- Geet..it's ok. Maan is taking good care of you. He doesn't trouble you na?
Geet- Dadi..Maan does take very good care of me. As for troubling me- well..that is what he loves to do most. But it's okay, I'm getting used to it now

Maan coming back
Maan- Getting used to what?
Dadi- MAan- apki biwi toh bohot achhi hain.. she doesn't say anything bad about you at all
Maan feels a little smug and says
Maan- Maan Singh Khurana...

Dadi and Geet complete his sentence
DAdi and Geet- kabhi kuchh galat nahi karta...

But Geet thinks back to their car conversation and how lightly Maan took it. Her anger and hurt visible on her face as lights dim and the music starts. She looks at Maan, and searches his face for any kind of explanation, and seeing none is about to move away when he pulls her close(gently remembering the baby) and

Maan- We need to dance first..of course.

the song..(Dil de diya hai...jaan tumhe denge)

Geet- FINE.
Maan whispers in her ear
Maan- Geet please. Don't be mad at me. I was being sarcastic.
Geet- why can't you ever say what you think??

Maan thought about it and asked her
Maan- Do you?

Feeling flustered, she says
Geet- Don't change the topic. If we are talking, we are talking about this.
Maan- Okay. Geet- do you want to know about Dev now at the party when anyone could overhear us or when we are alone?

Geet- fine. I can wait till we are alone and till I hear you out. I'm angry with you
Maan-I think you should give me the benefit of doubt and trust me.

Geet- Maan..It's taken a long time for me to trust anyone..please don't break that trust

Without breaking the eye contact, Maan goes to his knees, holding both her hands in his

He says softly

Maan- Geet. I promise you today. I will never break your trust. If you think there is something I'm not telling you, ask me before getting angry- because I'm not used to sharing my emotions or my thoughts.

Geet is very very surprised to see this strong man who is her husband on his knees promising her honesty and looking at her like...like it matters to him what she thinks about him
She starts to smile but catches herself at the last moment and thinks if they have to make this work, they must work together and then, head full of Maan's words, lost in thoughts, she dances her first dance with her husband

Maan can barely make sense of what he said or did. How could he be so impulsive? HIM..he has never been like this..okay, scratch that-he has been crazy since Geet..it's like his life starts and ends with Geet
and now this..oh well, the point was that he had to make her understand..and now he will tell her the truth


After the dance, and the ever-lasting dinner, Maan realises that he actually loved the dhabha food, much better than all the weird stuff he had been having for years and loved sitting in the dhaba atmosphere where everyone acted as they wished. At least, people didn't pretend somewhere in this world

His eyes searched for Geet and found hers on him as well, waiting to know the truth.
Geet thought to herself- I wonder why he looks at me like that..even if for a second...but then

Geet (to herself)-Arre are you mad? He has eyes, obviously he will look at people . Do Adi, Pinky and Mr Chopra think this way when he looks at them? Well..Pinky maybe..but Adi and Mr Chopra definitely don't. Then why are you making so much out of a look. Now toh you should be extra careful because you have been betrayed even with words before. Believing someone is the hardest thing ever and yet you're trying to believe him- who glares at you like he will eat you, who screams at you at every opportunity, and yet who takes care that you have all that you want.. But Geet...what do you want?

Geet places a hand on her abdomen and smiles
Geet- I want my baby to be happy and as long as that is happening..I can face anything

Head held high, she proceed to go to Maan's side and say goodbye to all guests.

Maan whispers in her ears as the last couple of guests start to leave..making her tingle with anticipation

Maan- bas..thoda aur time...
Geet( to herself)- oye..stop it Geet...He means the talk. Stop reading too much into his lines

Okay guys..tell me how you found it...

Sorry if it's short..
love ya
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Posted: 15 years ago
So sweet!!! Really nice...very short!! Please continue!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
luved ur update.. pls continue soon..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow...... So Sweetly written.... Maan Singh Khurana on his knees, in front of Geet......😍 😍 😍....
Also loved the Dadi thought about Maan ( angry and unpredictable) and Geet ( sweet and unpredictable)..... So both are unpredictable..... Chalo, one more thing in common 😉......

Ann.
😍

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Posted: 15 years ago
good work
Please continue😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
There first argument!!!! The second update is so sweet as well. Great work as usual!
Edited by neha2005 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG. MAAN SINGH KHURANA ON HIS KNEES 😍 I LOVED this update! continue soon! 😃 and thanks for the pm 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it loved it loved it a lotttt.. pls continu soonn...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Haaye it was really nice one
Liked it
Maan is gonna tell her the truth good
N went on his knees n promised that was shocking but damn sweet😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg ...wowowowowo
i really loved this pat
maan on his knees...ufffff....faints yaar
now i cant wait for the next update
dont take too long k

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