FF: you are mine! part7 on pg-16

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

uzma ..I am falling short of words to praise you......👏👏
would love to see such scenes in Geet as well..😳...I just loved the scene where Maan wipes milk marks off geet's face☺️☺️Its choooo
sweet to see Maan drinking coffee from geet's cup and that too from the same part.......haiiiiiiiiiii Mar Jawaan.....😍😍 hey yaar I am waiting for the next part of the story....update kab hoga....😆😆

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#62

just read d 4 th part, jitna bhi tha was awsm, luvd d 2nd part d most😊
hope u do update soon, n if u do have a pm list add me in that.

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@anufa

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

confession!!!!

yaaayyyyy!!!

update soon!!!!
n pm me!!!😊

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

i've jst read da whole thing nd all i can say dat it is amazing... plz add me to ur pm.. cant wait for da nxt update😊👏👏

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: namita25
uzma ..I am falling short of words to praise you......👏👏
would love to see such scenes in Geet as well..😳...I just loved the scene where Maan wipes milk marks off geet's face☺️☺️Its choooo
sweet to see Maan drinking coffee from geet's cup and that too from the same part.......haiiiiiiiiiii Mar Jawaan.....😍😍 hey yaar I am waiting for the next part of the story....update kab hoga....😆😆

awwies dear!😃

thank u sooo very much!

i love the coffee bit too😉....it wud be awesum if they show atleast the coffee bit in geet!

btw part 4 isnt complete yet!! i will update soon hun!

thanx once agen!

jhappiya and pappiyas fer u!

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uzma

@uzmakhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: sarita21992
just read d 4 th part, jitna bhi tha was awsm, luvd d 2nd part d most😊
hope u do update soon, n if u do have a pm list add me in that.

part 4 isnt yet done sweety....

and hmm i wonder y u like part 2 the most😉😉😉😉😉 ...

ok i wll try makin part 4 more romantic fer ya!😳😉

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: anufa
confession!!!!

yaaayyyyy!!!

update soon!!!!
n pm me!!!😊

hehe yah maan is gonna confess in this part---i will update soon and pm yah as well!

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

uzma...

the updated version of your FF rocked..!!!! looks like maan is on a self-control loosing spree everywhere. he's about to confess....omg...omg....!!! that's so amazing... waiting eagerly for part 5!!!
loved the part where he sips the coffee from geet's mug. , i definitely got X-rated there. 😉

and the last part where he pins her against the wall and pulls her even close to confess ...omg..omg... i can completely imagine the intensity and passion of maan singh khurana in that scene..!!!!!!

update soon !!!

-soumya

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: pickle6586
uzma...

the updated version of your FF rocked..!!!! looks like maan is on a self-control loosing spree everywhere. he's about to confess....omg...omg....!!! that's so amazing... waiting eagerly for part 5!!!
loved the part where he sips the coffee from geet's mug. , i definitely got X-rated there. 😉

and the last part where he pins her against the wall and pulls her even close to confess ...omg..omg... i can completely imagine the intensity and passion of maan singh khurana in that scene..!!!!!!

update soon !!!

-soumya

yay m soo glad u liked it!!!😃😃😃😃

the coffe bit waz written in such a way--that it did sound a bit x-rated😆 ("moving his hand down😆).....

and oh yah maan is gonna confess in this bit!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

geet main kab confess kerainga???😕😉

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

yay m soo glad u liked it!!!😃

the coffe bit waz written in such a way--that it did sound a bit x-rated😆 ("moving his hand down😆).....

and oh yah maan is gonna confess in this bit!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

geet main kab confess kerainga???😕😉

@red: abhi thoda interesting banao. and wait geet should not confess so fast. let maan woo geet to get her back. and let her confess about her past now before maan confesses so that he does not feel betrayed. because maan confessing and then geet telling him about her past is a little too cliched u know!!! just an idea. ultimately its ur call wht u wanna write. but whatever u do , i'm sure it will rock!!!
still cant get over the coffee X-rated thoughts!!! 😆