FF: you are mine! part7 on pg-16 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

OMG..!!!!! OMG...!!!! OMG....!!!!!

totally hilarious dear....!!!😊 please continue it soon..... 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sweetcherry96

OMG..!!!!! OMG...!!!! OMG....!!!!!

totally hilarious dear....!!!😊 please continue it soon..... 😊

thanx dear!😃
part 5 on page 11!
read that too!!
i will continue soon!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
uzma thanks sweety for the PM......🤗🤗
I am really liking the way your story is moving ...I have been looking forward to Maan's confession to apni kudi......Haiiii...loved the way he said those three magical words to her😳.....and now Geet's traumatic past is making things difficult for her...thanks to that dhokebaaz...😡😡....loved the way you showed Geet's pain.......i just hope Maan supports her now .......
waiting for the next part.....and plz is baar don't make us wait so long.......😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: namita25

uzma thanks sweety for the PM......🤗🤗
I am really liking the way your story is moving ...I have been looking forward to Maan's confession to apni kudi......Haiiii...loved the way he said those three magical words to her😳.....and now Geet's traumatic past is making things difficult for her...thanks to that dhokebaaz...😡😡....loved the way you showed Geet's pain.......i just hope Maan supports her now .......
waiting for the next part.....and plz is baar don't make us wait so long.......😳

ur mot welcum dear!!!😃
i like the confession bit too..hehehe
yupz, geet past will def. affect her future...part 5 hadta get a bit emotional cuz maan needz to noe the truth!
and i dint want him to hear abt it from sum1 elses mouth cuz this onli piles up misunderstandings!!
hmm...lets see wat maan will do noe!😉
and realli sorry fer makin u w8 so long!
i will def. update it soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
uzma,

omg omg omg u also made maan confess....!!!! i too did that in my FF..!!!! 😉 looks like maan is confessing every where....😆 pata nahi serial mein kab karega...!!!

anyways, coming back to the post..... yaar... confession was too good and she almost confesses to him but saala dev beech mein aa gaya...!!! uski tuo aisi ki thaisi...😆
and then she tells him she is married... 😭

but ur typical kekta descriptions made the whole scene a comedy one for me.. glass breaking on maan's face..... i kept laughing fo rfive minutes and evn now i am...!!! 🤣

ab chal yeh tuo bata...maan kya karega??? please usse devdas mat banana... i'd hate to see him that way...!!!!!

hello uzma ji, ab jaake meri FF padiye...!!! just kidding...
but i still cant get over the kekta style uzma...!!!! 😆

yaar...kekta ke chakkar mein, maine ek X-rated scene ke baare mein bhool gayi...she was about to touch his face , tumne use roka kyun??? are maan khurana ka face touch karna ka mouka baar baar thodi na milti hai????

jaldi update karo...!!!

-soumya


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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: pickle6586

uzma,

omg omg omg u also made maan confess....!!!! i too did that in my FF..!!!! 😉 looks like maan is confessing every where....😆 pata nahi serial mein kab karega...!!!

anyways, coming back to the post..... yaar... confession was too good and she almost confesses to him but saala dev beech mein aa gaya...!!! uski tuo aisi ki thaisi...😆
and then she tells him she is married... 😭

but ur typical kekta descriptions made the whole scene a comedy one for me.. glass breaking on maan's face..... i kept laughing fo rfive minutes and evn now i am...!!! 🤣

ab chal yeh tuo bata...maan kya karega??? please usse devdas mat banana... i'd hate to see him that way...!!!!!

hello uzma ji, ab jaake meri FF padiye...!!! just kidding...
but i still cant get over the kekta style uzma...!!!! 😆

yaar...kekta ke chakkar mein, maine ek X-rated scene ke baare mein bhool gayi...she was about to touch his face , tumne use roka kyun??? are maan khurana ka face touch karna ka mouka baar baar thodi na milti hai????

jaldi update karo...!!!

-soumya


😆😆😆😆😆
yaar kekta ka tv perh itna lambha dominance raha hai kay dishum dishum *glass breaks*
aisay scenes perh yayhe yaad aata hai!!😆😆😆
yaara u noe wat i waz jus scrolling bk few pages and u suggestted that i shud make geet's reality cum out first and then make maan confess😕---m soo sorry---i completely forgot abt that!! itnay dinno baad update ker rahi hoon kay bilkul dimag sey nikal gaya!!🤢 i feel soo kamini right now!!Cry
sorry sorry! bilkul dimag sey baat out hogai!!😕
and ohooo ....yaara dont worry...geet ko agey face touch kernay kay bohooot maukay milangay!!
maan aur devdas...hmmm.....mujhe kya pata kya hoga???😉😉😉😛 maaneet lala land main jaker he maloom hoga na!!😆😆
wahan sey aaker bataongi kya huwa😉😉😉
and yesh me gonna read ur FF now!😃
its goin fantastic!👏⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
Awesum part man
Loved it
Atlast Maan knws Geet's truth
Lets c wat he does
Plz pm wen u update next time
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Awesum part man

Loved it
Atlast Maan knws Geet's truth
Lets c wat he does
Plz pm wen u update next time

yay u liked it!😃😃😃😃
i thought u ppl will throw tomatoes and potatoes on my head thru ur pc screen fer makin it so depressin and emotional!😆😆
i guess i went tooo far!😆😆
okies dear, me will pm u once i update!
xoxoxo
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

😆
yaar kekta ka tv perh itna lambha dominance raha hai kay dishum dishum *glass breaks*
aisay scenes perh yayhe yaad aata hai!!😆😆😆
yaara u noe wat i waz jus scrolling bk few pages and u suggestted that i shud make geet's reality cum out first and then make maan confess😕---m soo sorry---i completely forgot abt that!! itnay dinno baad update ker rahi hoon kay bilkul dimag sey nikal gaya!!🤢 i feel soo kamini right now!!😭
sorry sorry! bilkul dimag sey baat out hogai!!😕
and ohooo ....yaara dont worry...geet ko agey face touch kernay kay bohooot maukay milangay!!
maan aur devdas...hmmm.....mujhe kya pata kya hoga???😛 maaneet lala land main jaker he maloom hoga na!!😆😆
wahan sey aaker bataongi kya huwa😉😉😉
and yesh me gonna read ur FF now!😃
its goin fantastic!👏⭐️⭐️



its okay...uzma.. i think maan confessing first and geet's truth coming out is probably good...so dont worry about it...i'd like to read what would happen next....😊.....
yeah u updated after a long long time...!!! i actually scrolled back a few pages to see if i missed any parts but know i dint. ...
hey, u better write another part soon today....!!!!! 😉 ....this time break a glass on geet;s face too...why bechara maan. only....!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

soumya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pickle6586



its okay...uzma.. i think maan confessing first and geet's truth coming out is probably good...so dont worry about it...i'd like to read what would happen next....😊.....
yeah u updated after a long long time...!!! i actually scrolled back a few pages to see if i missed any parts but know i dint. ...
hey, u better write another part soon today....!!!!! 😉 ....this time break a glass on geet;s face too...why bechara maan. only....!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

soumya

😆😆😆😆 i think geet will get dishum dishum *glass breaks * once she gets to noe abt maan's past!!
another part today!! likh toh rahi hoon....if its readable lol then i will surely update it!
xoxo

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