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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: pickle6586



@red: abhi thoda interesting banao. and wait geet should not confess so fast. let maan woo geet to get her back. and let her confess about her past now before maan confesses so that he does not feel betrayed. because maan confessing and then geet telling him about her past is a little too cliched u know!!! just an idea. ultimately its ur call wht u wanna write. but whatever u do , i'm sure it will rock!!!
still cant get over the coffee X-rated thoughts!!! 😆

soumya! tumhara idea sar ankhon perh!!
i will definitely do that!---jhapiyaz and chummiyas fer the idea!
and the coffee bit 😆😆😆--
once i add in more x-rated thoughts u will get over the coffee one then!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: uzmakhan


soumya! tumhara idea sar ankhon perh!! awww....chooooo chweeeettttt .....i'm glad u like it..!!!! awww....thanks uzma ...... 🤗
i will definitely do that!---jhapiyaz and chummiyas fer the idea! thanks honey...!!!!!!!
and the coffee bit 😆😆😆--
once i add in more x-rated thoughts u will get over the coffee one then!😆
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣



can't wait.... uzma..... !!!!! can u update real soon????

-soumya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: pickle6586



can't wait.... uzma..... !!!!! can u update real soon????

-soumya

😆😆😆 tarsa tarsa kay update kerongi!! hahahahahaha😈
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

😆😆😆 tarsa tarsa kay update kerongi!! hahahahahaha😈



omg....u're so evil 😆!!!!!! tarsa tarsa ke update karoge haaaann????theek hai...!!! 😉... karna kya hai..baitke tarsoongi...!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

ROFL at the Alladin pants 🤣 it just give me a very funny image of him as Alladin 😆😆 Drashti will make a very pretty Jasmine 😳😳

😆 actually i dunno wat u call those pants!!..😳😳😆
wenever i see maan in 'em i jus rememeber "aladdin"!!!😆😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg omg omg omg that was fantastic 😛 maan sed i love u 😍
cant wait till ur nxt update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
Part 4 recap: geet gets coffee fer maan and herself, maan refuses initially buh then drinks it...geet feels nostalgic, maan feels realli bad fer her, comforts her and then..loses self control and confesses!!!😳
Part 5:
maan holds her hands near his heart, rests his forehead on her forehead, closes his eyes and sayz "I LOVE YOU".....
geet's eyes are closed as well...tears begin to roll down her face...never did she in her wildest dreams xpect to hear these words from him😳....she dint pay much head to how and why he sed all that...she seemed extremely lost in that moment....as if time will stop fer these two here..forever....she 4got her motives fer coming to delhi and all the hardship she endured in the past....it lukd as if she jus wanted to live fer that moment and die in his arms....
as a second thought, she felt she waz dreaming...she opened her eyes fer a reality check, and not so surprisingly she found out that this all waznt a dream buh it waz definitely a dream come true!😳
she smiled slightly luking at his condition, his expression-his body language-his closeness wid her....everythin spoke how much hes in love wid her...😳
geet managed to let go of her right hand from his strong grip onli to caress his face and express her hidden feelings fer him...those feelings which she bottled up inside her since hoshiyarpur...those feelings she thought were nothing more then respect fer him...those feelings she thought were meaningless...those feeling she never thought cud be love...buh today she realised that those feelings were onli of LOVE fer him....
she waz abt a centimetre away from touchin his face, buh then dev's picture flashed in her mind! 🤢her weddin night, her last moments wid him on the airport and the last time he sed i love u to her...!
geet's slight smile seemed to vanish in thin air...she began to get flashbk's of her dreadful past...the way she waz deceived...the inhumane way she waz treated...
this made her come bk to her senses....😕
geet aggressively moved her other hand away from maan's grip and pushes him back....
she begins to cry like hell and luks exasperated....she hyper-ventilates, puts her hands on her ears and quickly shuts her eyes in an attempt to 4get dev's i love u scene.....
maan on the other hand is left traumatized!! he has never seen geet reactin like that...he moves closer to her immediately and tries touchin her (worried)..."geet kya huwa...geet tum thek toh hona..??"
geet pushes his hands away, shez infuriated "dour rahoo mujhse....."
maan feels extremely dejected...he realli cant believe wat hes hearing...he doesnt noe wat to say, how to react or above all that, how to stop her from crying...he cant bear tears in her eyes!
"geet....mujhe batao toh huwa kya....kya main hoon wajah tumharay in ansoon ka..??"😕
geet doesnt respond, shes jus crying like crazy...
maan: (gets teary)---"geet, akhir kuch toh bolo na"
he tries touchin her agen, buh she brushes his hand offf...
she moves a feet or two away from him and falls down on her knees...she holds her head and is still crying like crazy....
maan is standing helplessly in the same place...he feels as if hez at fault fer geet's condition.....
geet: (gets hold of her crying and finally speaks, still tearing abnormally)..."kyun maan....kyun tum mere zindagi main aae...kyun mere jaan bachai...mujhe marnay he diya hota...."
maan is so friggin cluesless..he doesnt say anythin..woh sirf ussay dekh raha hai aur apnay aap ko kous raha hai!
geet: "tum meray barain main kuch nahi jantay!!! kuch bhi nahi....agar tummey meray ateeth kay barain main pata chalayga...toh tum aik pal bhi meray paas nahi rukhna chahogey"
pauses...luks lost...remembers darji's words...
"kyunkay galti toh hamesha larki ki hoti hai na..."
maan is xtremely puzzled...he doesnt get that where did 'its alwayz gurls mistake' cum from?? he still doesnt speak back..
geet gather strength and gets up...shez still facing his back on him...
shes weeping no more, and has an expressionless face..."meri shaadi huwi thi maan.." (pauses)
kekta style; dishum dish! (effect of glass breakin on maan's face-)---😆 -[oii dont laugh! its a serious scene!!]---
maan seemz devastated😭😭😭😭...fer the 1st time in life he feels like the biggest loser in the whole world...he closes his eyes in despair..geet's words echo in his mind, tears rapidly roll down his eyes....he doesnt haf the strength to hear anythin more...yet he doesnt say anythin....he turns, facing his back on geet, so she doesnt see him cry😭
our wounded geet continues "haan, yay sach hai kay meri shaadi huwi thi, meray liyay canada sey rishta aya tha...us larkein ney mujhe sapney dikhae--mujhe aik achay jeevan ki umeed dilai...laykin (pauses)...woh mujhe chor ker chala gaya...🤢🤢
usne mujhse sirf meri jaedat kay liyay shaadi ki thi...shaadi kay dousray din, woh mujhe airport perh aakelay chor ker chala gaya...aur abh......main uske bachay ke maa bannay waali hoon" she leans on the sofa, puts her head down in embarassment and begins to shed tears heavily agen..😭😭😭
maan is left numb....he feels as if sum1 is poking a thousand pins at once in his heart...hes luks completely shattered, not because geet at a point belonged to sum1 else or shez pregnant wid sum1 else's child...he luks deadened because he cant belev that sum1 played arnd so horribly wid his gurl's life...😕.....
sorry guyz...i made the after affect of maan's confession realli depressing....buh the situation calls fer it....i cant ignore the bit that geet's preggy!!
dont throw chappals at me fer this part!!
next part will be happi happi....(i guess😉)---
Edited by uzmakhan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
I'm speechless!!! I read the whole thing abhi...sooo cool!!!

Plzz pm me when you update!!!

LOVED IT!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
thanx hun!😳😃
part 5 is on pg 11!
lemme noe wat u think of it!😲
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

omg omg omg omg that was fantastic 😛 maan sed i love u 😍

cant wait till ur nxt update

😃😃😃😃
realli happi u liked it!!😳
part 5 is up!
pg 11!
it gets a bit emotionally sad, so plzz dont kill me fer this!🤢
xoxo

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