FF: you are mine! part7 on pg-16 - Page 6

Originally posted by: anju7777

OH MY GOODNESS! ABSOLUTELY MINDBLOWING YAAR!!!!!!!!!! SUPERBLY WRITTEN!!

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PART 2 - "main bilkul pagal hochuki hoon" that was hilarious

mujhe geet sey milna hoga....abhi!"--- awww Maan doesn't give a care about anyone in the world or what they say he just wants to be with Geet no matter what! 😃

OMG MAAN enters her house through the window??????? 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲
What? is this true? oh my oh my!!! i am shocked hehehe but he has done it once berfore in Hoshiarpur 😆 Nothing can stop munda Maan from getting to his Geet....

WOW Kya imagination hai apke! 😃

Keep writing + all the very best for the next part! your doing an AWESOME job!

AMAZING.. plzz do continue :)👏

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

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i loved it!!!!
i am so happy that i came home and got to read two awesome ffs!!😳😳

Feels awesome 😛

Great part.....really enjoyed it.....aur yaar aaj Sunday hai!! Kaal Geet ayegi!!! I am so happy yey!!⭐️

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omg uzma ur amazing!

i love all 3 parts and now i'm eagerly awaiting for the 4th!!! uffff maan makes me blush, and maneet make me laugh SO much!! "geet.. tum.. tasty" and the cheeni joke at the end.. 😆 😆 😆 ur tooooo goood!!! i can soooo see this on maneet its perfect!!!! i lovvvvve it! and i love geets boldness thats new! but soo much fun!! uffffffffff uzma.... !!! i have all the more reason to love maneet - these lil scenes are soooo awesome in my head.. they;re just fabulous!! u'v stuck to their original characters soo well as well.. hayyye fantastically written of course cos i can imagine everrthing soo wonderfully!!! cannnnotttt wait for the next part!!!
lotssss of love and jhappis,
Saz
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Originally posted by: Chotii

omg uzma ur amazing!

i love all 3 parts and now i'm eagerly awaiting for the 4th!!! uffff maan makes me blush, and maneet make me laugh SO much!! "geet.. tum.. tasty" and the cheeni joke at the end.. 😆 😆 😆 ur tooooo goood!!! i can soooo see this on maneet its perfect!!!! i lovvvvve it! and i love geets boldness thats new! but soo much fun!! uffffffffff uzma.... !!! i have all the more reason to love maneet - these lil scenes are soooo awesome in my head.. they;re just fabulous!! u'v stuck to their original characters soo well as well.. hayyye fantastically written of course cos i can imagine everrthing soo wonderfully!!! cannnnotttt wait for the next part!!!
lotssss of love and jhappis,
Saz
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Uzma, awesome, i have read so many FF's and this one was the coolest :)

Thanks,

Neha

Originally posted by: nehaahmad

Uzma, awesome, i have read so many FF's and this one was the coolest :)

Thanks,

Neha