FF: you are mine! part7 on pg-16 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: namita25

Wow uzma great going......👍🏼 loved to see Maan reflecting on the changes that has come in him.... bas ab aur kina time lega to realise the fact that he is in love.......😆 It was nice to see Geet thinking about Maan😳 and then she had the guts to stop Maan and finally convince him to eat Biryaani.......and that too with her hands😳.And the part where Maan bites geet's fingers was howlarious...especially Geet's comment "lagta hai app apnay puranay badlay lay rahey thay"🤣🤣.So Geet has succeeded in manaoing Maan to stay until the rain stops.....loved the way she ordered him to do that....poor maan had no other option but to do what his lady asks him to do.😆

shukriya shukriya!!😃
yupz maan and geet are hafin mixed yet affectionate feelings fer each other! no worries--soon sum1 is gonna realize they are in love! u hafta w8 fer the next bit fer it!😃😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
hello uzma,

looks like the only thing u've doing the weekend is writing your FF. good job. you'e been saving a lot of lives on the forum (including me). otherwise, i hate weekends. never hated them so much before entering the lalallalala land of maneet!!!!! 😍

i loved the last line "coffee peena chod di " and she answers back, saying 6 cubes of sugar this time. lovely!!!!! 😆... can understand how scared maan is , of geet's coffee. maan singh khurana kabhi kisi se darta nahi hai, aur aaj coffee se dar raha hai...... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

i also liked how he holds her fingers close to his lips and then presses them against his own, when she bites her fingers in anger....!!!!! 😳 kinda cute and a little X-rated!!!!!

looking forward for part 4...!!!!!!

-soumya


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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: pickle6586

hello uzma,

looks like the only thing u've doing the weekend is writing your FF. good job. you'e been saving a lot of lives on the forum (including me). otherwise, i hate weekends. never hated them so much before entering the lalallalala land of maneet!!!!! 😍

i loved the last line "coffee peena chod di " and she answers back, saying 6 cubes of sugar this time. lovely!!!!! 😆... can understand how scared maan is , of geet's coffee. maan singh khurana kabhi kisi se darta nahi hai, aur aaj coffee se dar raha hai...... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

i also liked how he holds her fingers close to his lips and then presses them against his own, when she bites her fingers in anger....!!!!! 😳 kinda cute and a little X-rated!!!!!

looking forward for part 4...!!!!!!

-soumya


😆😆u guessed it right, i spent 48 hours of ma weekend in lala land!!! and u noe wat....i never get bored there nor do i feel like leaving that place!😆😆Embarrassed
--i dunno y buh i feel like includin the coffee bit in everythin---😆---this bit makes it own place in every part--evn if u read my previous 2 predictions, in both of them i haf included the coffee bit--😆cant get enouf of it😉--
and m glad once agen u liked it--part 4 will be up soon---😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

part 3 was bouncer.........maan fightin wid his emottions.......geet feedin maan.......he's so scared of coffee chalo khurana kisi se toh darta hai...lol

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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

part 3 was bouncer.........maan fightin wid his emottions.......geet feedin maan.......he's so scared of coffee chalo khurana kisi se toh darta hai...lol

😆😆😆 maan coffee sey nahi, balkay geet ki coffe sey darta hai!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sarita21992

dyinf for part 3, plz update soon......😊

part 3 has been added dear!
do read and lemme noe wat u think of it!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey really interesting, lol
really like how maan just cant get geet out of his head
you should continue this, its good, lol and its about maneet 😃
Maheen xx

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lol, really liked part 2,
esp how maan was just going after geet, and then gets hurt ouch
lol, but then ofcourse, geet gave him first aid 😳
cant wait for the biryani part now lol
do continue soon
Maheen xx


gr8! m realli glad u liked it!😃
the biryani part is up!!😃 hope u like this bit as well!
do gimme ur feedbk fer it!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
hey lol, part 3 is jokes
i cant believe it, geet is actually ordering maan around, and he's listening to her...shocking [:O] lol
and aww really liked the biryani part, lol now im hungry 😛
anyway cant wait for the coffee part now 😆 lol
do continue soon
Maheen xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
👏👏

i loved it!!!!
i am so happy that i came home and got to read two awesome ffs!!😳😳

Feels awesome 😛

Great part.....really enjoyed it.....aur yaar aaj Sunday hai!! Kaal Geet ayegi!!! I am so happy yey!!⭐️

👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
it's awsome yaaar...i just read all parts. specially loved the last part.loving the comments you add with bracket

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