FF: you are mine! part7 on pg-16

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

plz keep visitin maneet land n cum wid such fab ideas!!!! 😳😳

jus lub it it's funny, touches emotional side of character's and i love the dialogues esp....... where geet says "chup bilkul chup: i so want geet to dat some day on screen......lookin 4rwrd 4r part 3 plz do pm wen u add next one😊

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

hey really interesting, lol
really like how maan just cant get geet out of his head
you should continue this, its good, lol and its about maneet 😃
Maheen xx

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lol, really liked part 2,
esp how maan was just going after geet, and then gets hurt ouch
lol, but then ofcourse, geet gave him first aid 😳
cant wait for the biryani part now lol
do continue soon
Maheen xx

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payalprasad

@payalprasad

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

simply awesome!!!!!!!!!

would really love to see this hapenning.😊

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Anum

@anufa

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

plzz plzz plzzz

continue....soon!!!!!

wat a part!!!👏👍🏼
👍🏼

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Brilliant...breath taking!!, actually could imagine!, MAANEET!!!
Grt work..waiting...

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

dyinf for part 3, plz update soon......😊

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

hello uzma,

loved part 2 as well !!!! very nicely written.....👏

but one thing i wasn't sure of, would maan ever do something like entering the house through a window ??? i found that a little funny and as u said a little too filmy!!!! 😆

and make him confess in part 3 yaar, if nopt to geet atleast to himself... !!!! 😉... well, i'm just joking.. u're doing a fabulous job. so continue with your ideas...!!!!!

-soumya

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veryberry01

@veryberry01

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Too good yaar really awesome :)

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

haiiiii........uzma thanks for the fodder dear.....🤗
well this part too as usual is stupendous...👍🏼..Maan actually entered Geet's place through window.....I must say he has gone crazy😆🤣awwwww...I really liked the way Maan wiped off the droplets from Geet's face☺️☺️ 😍Ahhhhh.. I can imagine the whole scene here😍
😍 and Geet healing Maan's wound was really very sweet too 😳
I am now waiting for the third part.....😍😍 so plz update it asap

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: pickle6586
hello uzma,

loved part 2 as well !!!! very nicely written.....👏

but one thing i wasn't sure of, would maan ever do something like entering the house through a window ??? i found that a little funny and as u said a little too filmy!!!! 😆

and make him confess in part 3 yaar, if nopt to geet atleast to himself... !!!! 😉... well, i'm just joking.. u're doing a fabulous job. so continue with your ideas...!!!!!

-soumya

thanx tonssss soumya!!!😃

😆😆😆i noe maan entering thru the window waznt sumthin xpected of him--buh its cuz of the series of events which made him do sumthin not "maan-ly" type😉😉

geet dint cum fer work, the fone line waz busy and then she waznt opening the door!!!

he waz actually very desperate to see her!😳😆

he had no other option then the window😆😆😆

oooooo....confession is a gudd idea....thanx! i will surely include in the coming parts!

and thanx once agen fer the lovely comments!😃