FF: you are mine! part7 on pg-16 - Page 4

yes rally awsum plss continue can't wait😍😳😉👏

Originally posted by: namita25

haiiiii........uzma thanks for the fodder dear.....🤗
well this part too as usual is stupendous...👍🏼..Maan actually entered Geet's place through window.....I must say he has gone crazy😆🤣awwwww...I really liked the way Maan wiped off the droplets from Geet's face☺️☺️ 😍Ahhhhh.. I can imagine the whole scene here😍
😍 and Geet healing Maan's wound was really very sweet too 😳
I am now waiting for the third part.....😍😍 so plz update it asap

awwhhh....dat was sweet!!!!

plz update soon!!!!

n pm me wen u do so!!!

O g uzma g thank u ,thank u,thank u,thank u.weekend guzarne k liye is kisam ki doze kafi zarori he .
part 1 is cute but part 2 is superb and maneet and their concern for eachother👏
really like when geet saidgeet luks at him angrily..."bas sir...chup!! abh bilkul chup!!" 😍🤗
in part 3
sukar he maan ko yaqeen aya tat he now feels like a human, not a robot on duty 24/7.. 😆

Originally posted by: cute-aly

O g uzma g thank u ,thank u,thank u,thank u.weekend guzarne k liye is kisam ki doze kafi zarori he .
part 1 is cute but part 2 is superb and maneet and their concern for eachother👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
really like when geet saidgeet luks at him angrily..."bas sir...chup!! abh bilkul chup!!" 😍🤗
in part 3
sukar he maan ko yaqeen aya tat he now feels like a human, not a robot on duty 24/7.. 😆

maan comes to the tv lounge, and shouts "geet...geeet!! main jaa raha hoon".....

geet comes out wid the biryani dish in her hands..."app khana khaye baghir ja he nahi sakhtay"

maan: (angry luks) kyun? tum mujhe rokogi?

geet: (wid assurity)-"haan!" mujhe kuch nahi sunna....aap table perh aaojao..😉

maan: (infuriated) "tum mujhe order dey rahi ho! tum jaanti ho main tumhara....

geet: (interrupts)....meray boss hongay office main, yahan nahi....(goes near him and pulls him towards the table,daym this gurl is dominating😉)---abh aap yahan betho, aur bolo maine kitna acha khana pakaya hai" (smiles widely)--- too cute 👏👏👏

geet: (annoyed)..."uffo sir!! jo maaza hath sey khanay main aata hai woh in chammach kantay sey kabhi nahi aata...(gets an idea)--app try kerkay toh dekhay!!! app ko alag hi swadh aayega!!"

maan: (feels eww,hesitates)..."main aur haath sey..??"

geet: (luks at his hands)---"ohoo app kaisay khaogay...aap ko toh choth laggi huwi hai👏👏......(widout asking him or widout any hesitation she pushes her chair near maan and his plate close to her)--main khila deyti hoon" waooooooooooo is k liye to meri tarf se app ko🤗...

"tanna maray baghir inko sakoon kahan milta hai"😆😆😆😆😆


really really cute and superb 👏👏👏👏👏👏

pleasure is all mine.
hope zyada lambe comment se app pareshan na hoon kyok mera to dil kar raha tha aik aik dilogue pe comment karne ka😊

Originally posted by: cute-aly

pleasure is all mine.
hope zyada lambe comment se app pareshan na hoon kyok mera to dil kar raha tha aik aik dilogue pe comment karne ka😊

Uzma,

Totally outstanding!!!

A perfect blend of romance, bickering and comedy! Absolutely droolworthy!

The end was remarkable.

Coffee peena chod di hai.... Hilarious!

Great fantasising, keep updating!

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Uzma,

Totally outstanding!!!

A perfect blend of romance, bickering and comedy! Absolutely droolworthy!

The end was remarkable.

Coffee peena chod di hai.... Hilarious!

Great fantasising, keep updating!

Wow uzma great going......👍🏼 loved to see Maan reflecting on the changes that has come in him.... bas ab aur kina time lega to realise the fact that he is in love.......😆 It was nice to see Geet thinking about Maan😳 and then she had the guts to stop Maan and finally convince him to eat Biryaani.......and that too with her hands😳.And the part where Maan bites geet's fingers was howlarious...especially Geet's comment "lagta hai app apnay puranay badlay lay rahey thay"🤣🤣.So Geet has succeeded in manaoing Maan to stay until the rain stops.....loved the way she ordered him to do that....poor maan had no other option but to do what his lady asks him to do.😆