Short Story-Take my breath away-Vik&Nags!Upd 7/26 - Page 24

Originally posted by: rushtrip

ha ha...how is Abs part of the gunnah?

kahin..foursome..ka irada..to nahin😕

meri to bolti band ho jaayegi

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Meri bhi bolti tune band kardi......Yaar...Nargis is a little bold...and that too only with Vicky for some reason....but uski bhi HADD hain...and no more than 2....yuck!!!

Abs...If you are a witness to paap....and there is an easy solution, and you don't do anything about it...then from a Moral perspective, you have become a part of the paap...no?

I am advocating, as my own lawyer, for a marriage soon between Nargis and Vicky,...this cannot continue to happen!!! Aur phir Vicky ko aur Nargis ko bhi CONTROL classes lene padenge Maan se!!! Vicky needs to practice COLD showers too!!!😆

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Meri bhi bolti tune band kardi......Yaar...Nargis is a little bold...and that too only with Vicky for some reason....but uski bhi HADD hain...and no more than 2....yuck!!!

Abs...If you are a witness to paap....and there is an easy solution, and you don't do anything about it...then from a Moral perspective, you have become a part of the paap...no?

I am advocating, as my own lawyer, for a marriage soon between Nargis and Vicky,...this cannot continue to happen!!! Aur phir Vicky ko aur Nargis ko bhi CONTROL classes lene padenge Maan se!!! Vicky needs to practice COLD showers too!!!😆

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Meri bhi bolti tune band kardi......Yaar...Nargis is a little bold...and that too only with Vicky for some reason....but uski bhi HADD hain...and no more than 2....yuck!!!

Abs...If you are a witness to paap....and there is an easy solution, and you don't do anything about it...then from a Moral perspective, you have become a part of the paap...no?

I am advocating, as my own lawyer, for a marriage soon between Nargis and Vicky,...this cannot continue to happen!!! Aur phir Vicky ko aur Nargis ko bhi CONTROL classes lene padenge Maan se!!! Vicky needs to practice COLD showers too!!!😆

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Chapter 23

Vicky and Nargis took their leave and Nargis left her car at her office, so Vicky was to drop her home. He said he will get her to the office tomorrow as well. On reaching her apartment block, Vicky came to drop Nargis to her door. Once there he said, you know darling, I have said I love you but you still have not told me how you feel. Do you mind being tied to this player! His wicked smile back. Nargis loved this contradiction of a man who had laughing eyes.

She opened the door, pulled him in by his shirt collar and said'better I show it to you. She then shuts the door with her heel, pushes Vicky back against the wall, lifts her leg up and pins him to the wall with it and her hands one splayed on his chest and one on the wall, looks him in the eye, the advantage of being tall and wearing heels on top of it, made her stand as tall as him. Vicky liking this aggressive side of Nargis says Bring it on Baby! Ahem Ahem....Mr & Mrs. Chaalu!

Shut up! Says Nargis. Not a word, I am your captor and what I say goes. She then kissed him full on the mouth with her tongue and licked it. He tried to capture her lips and she backed off and said. Uh! oH! Not so fast, slave! I will have my way with you. Vicky was enjoying this totally and Nargis then pulled her hair out of its band and gave a small shake to her head bending it back. Vicky taking advantage of this, ran his tongue on her throat from neck to ears, Nargis now lost, but not wanting to give up so easily, holds his hair in her hand and pulls.Haila! 😲

Abs and Maan look at each other after Vicky and Nargis leave and Abs starts to babble about how sweet they looked and it will be fun to have them help her with the wedding (So typical me, going from one topic to another!)when Maan pulls her and says Stop worrying about them. What about me. I have wanted to be with you alone and finally I have you and woman all you want to do is talk? Abs a bit shy looks at him (Hmm, yeah, I kinda realized now...🤓☺️) and then away and Maan scoops her up in his arms and takes her to the settee. He sits down with her in his arms and kisses her thoroughly. Abs revels in his kisses and starts to unbutton his shirt absently as she wants to feel his skin. She runs her hands on his chest and up his throat and then back of his head and treads her fingers in his hair. Maan deepens the kiss, with fingers in her hair and holding her to him.(Maan effect on Abs= Abs 🤪)

Vicky yelps and says vixen! You just wait! Nargis gives an evil laugh and says we'll see! And kisses him again to shut him up. Just then Vicky picks her up and asks her where the bedroom is. Nargis gives direction and then nips his throat again. Vicky hitches her on his shoulder and laughs and says wild cat I love this, reaches the bedroom and throws her on the bed though not hard, fast enough for Nargis to become breathless, he then swoops down on her, sits astride her and starts to take off his shirt. (Devar i, pehle apne sasur ji se toh mil lo! 🤣 Unhein bhi batana unki beti ki hobbies ke baare mein! )

Maan puts his other hand under Abs tshirt and catches his breath as he feels her skin. Abs is lost feeling his fingers on her waist. She sucked her breath in and felt her heart beat increase. Her head started to spin with desire and passion. She had never felt like this before. She moaned Maan! (Main toh gayi....Mera piya ghar aaya oh Raamji mera piya ghar aaya oh Raam ji 😳)

Nargis, with her arms tries to reach Vicky but failing which, she topples him over with a heave of her hips, and then she is astride him, Vicky now with bare torso and with Nargis on top was having the time of his life. He pulled her on top him to lie head to head and toe to toe. He then kissed her and took over what Nargis had started and showed her, how much he enjoyed her boldness and whispered his love for her over and over and made love to her with such passion and verve that left Nargis breathless. Inn dono mein zyada advanced kaun hai Vrushali? I can't seem to tell! 🤣

Maan, came to his senses with that one word and he let Abs go slowly, hold her head in his hands, he kissed her softly and said, I know darling, we'll wait. But I had to kiss you, hold you, feel you. God you are driving me nuts. He makes me fall more and more in love with him, esp knowing how 1. He respects me & my views on the institution of marriage 2. Having so much control as not falter which would end up hurting me or making me feel guilty! ❤️

Abs then asked him. So how are the cold showers working for you? and jumps off of him. I was curious seriously! 😉 Maan, says you wait a minute, what was all that about, this? You love driving me insane Yeh lo genius yeh bhi koi rocket science ki baat hai! Duh it's been my hobby since we met in Paris to drive you crazy! 😆..and runs behind Abs, Abs runs around the room and goes into the bedroom and turns and makes faces at him and loses her balance and slips on the packages near the bed. Maan, skids to a stop in front of sprawled Abs and says. You deserve that! Laughingly and then his eyes fall on the packages strewn under and beside Abs and raises his eyebrows at the things Abs has bought. Abs seeing what he has notices colors Oops meri chori pakdi gayi! Ab kya karoon! 😲 and says

Oh! Damn! My wedding night surprise is ruined. Maan, still laughing, sits next to Abs and says hugging her, Oh my sweet, adorable love, you have not ruined anything. The fun would be to see you wearing them and me taking them off, one by one. 😳 Haila! Maan toh sahi mein Hum tum k kamre mein band ho wale gaane ka climax soch rahe hain! But I 🤗 Maan

Originally posted by: averma4583

@ Nargis: Waah, 900 chuhe khaake billi hajj ko chali! 😆 Agar paap ka itna hi khayaal tha, toh Vicky ko andar apne yahaan laane ki kya zaroorat thi. BTW Abs & Maan have no idea what you two are upto. They don't know the extent of your relationship (tumne bataya bhi nahin jab humne puchha 😆)! We knowing you figure that you are in control just the way we are!!! 😃

@ Vrushali: Hmm, to answer your question-> Maar diya jaaye!!!!! 🤣
Arrey yeh yahaan 4some kaise hoga? Dadi pehle ek shaadi toh hone deingi, tabhi na doosri hogi! Plus agar religion angle ko explore karna hai, then I dont think either side is going to accept that quickly. It's not simple like Maan & Abs' case here! Ramzaan ke waqt Vicky ko France bhej deinge whereas Nargis stays in India.!!! What we could have is a courting period for Nargis and Vicky on the cruise as Maan-Abs have their HM. That would make more sense.

Edited part: Oops I just realized what you two meant by 4some. Mera dimaag itna bhi chaalu nahin in cheezon mein! 😲 No way....nothing of that sort, no 4some, threesome what ever....

Originally posted by: rushtrip

wow abs you are so cute...loved your late realisation....lekin jis hisaab se nags ne likha tha..aur..mera..dirty mind...i put 2+2 and of course made 5....
i am laughing my guts out..right now....

btw loved your liners in the whole chapter....lovely..
and yes..marna to padega...even if Nags is after getting married so fast.... we have to explore a lot..and we dont mean the bodily kind..Nags now do we Abs....
Daadi hai, Saas hai and tum dono ho...

i have almost written the next chapter. will post it if i complete tonight...

Originally posted by: averma4583

Yeah, Maan ki tarah mere bhi samajh mein nahin aa raha tha ki tum dono kya lehna chah rahe thei! Remember the Maan-DEv scene!

Yuo we need more depth to them besides the physical aspect.

I love the way Maan's relationship w/ Abs is! They joke around, can work amazingly together, understand and respect each other, and will do everything the right way. Hmm, btw that reminds me, I need to get dear Adi a raise from Maan. Afterall Adi was the one who recommended me, and because of that Maan is a happy guy now! Never thought that Maan could change to such a jovial person! Has Dadi noticed the change in him?