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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: AKANargis



Okay....ab kuch halaat sambhali hain...so I can post my comments.....varna...abhi tak to mere hi VAAT lagi thi.....

Vrushali...If I let on...the it was totally subconsciously....I think I like him...or am rather attracted to him....but I will not admit it yet....but he does effect me like no other man has so far....considering that he is totally not my idea of the IDEAL man...aside from the Physical sense of course!!😉

But you are right...this episode was all from Vicky's perspective......I think the next one needs to deal with MY feelings....my subconscious attractions to him....but I am totally rejecting this attraction...because I cannot QUANTIFY it.....it does add up...why would I be attracted to a man whom I think is the ANTITHESIS of what I consider to be the PERFECT guy!!! Why would I melt at his kisses......I hate guys like him...because I have stereotyped him....and don't want to go beyond the stereotype...to see the actual man beneath the FLIRTATIOUS layers.

And come to think of it...Vicky too needs to come to terms with his feelings....why is he so pissed when I reject him....he can get any other MODEL type girl...far prettier than me...so why does it piss him off that I rebuked him??
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yep right now..yaar..their FB relationship status says..its complicated...

and yes..they are complex people...they hide behind a facade. they are very alike in that...they seem like they are chalk and cheese...but actually its just cheese cultured differently...

OMG i am back to my food analogies...
but yes..next chapter is dedicated to you...



Edited by rushtrip - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: averma4583

@ Nargis: Badi haansi aa rahi mere upar jab mera confrontation hua tha Maan ke saath! Ab khud ki bolti band hai!😆

@Vrushali: Wonder if Vicky will tell his bro about getting the slap! Maan will instantly think of his slap, but laugh at Vicky! Until Abs comes and tell him "Khurana men" and their slap adventures! Maan ki bhi vaat lagani hai! 😆 But all of this much later, when Vicky comes to terms with his feelings!




Abs...yaar..sahi mein meri to bolti hi band kardi Vrushali ne.....bohaut time laga.....just to compose my self enough to post my comments!!
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I too like the idea of the Khurana men exchanging their WAR stories!!!
LOL!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
wowwwwwwwwww readin MBBBBBB'S on geet forum.well no need to go to MB website as its free here itself with indian characters who seems like more of western type.not bashing ,just enjoyin a good piece of nicely wriiten story.will be waitin for next part...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapnaajay

wowwwwwwwwww readin MBBBBBB'S on geet forum.well no need to go to MB website as its free here itself with indian characters who seems like more of western type.not bashing ,just enjoyin a good piece of nicely wriiten story.will be waitin for next part...........



Welcome Sapna......please feel free to Join our Madness!!! 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rushtrip



yep right now..yaar..their FB relationship status says..its complicated...

and yes..they are complex people...they hide behind a facade. they are very alike in that...they seem like they are chalk and cheese...but actually its just cheese cultured differently...

OMG i am back to my food analogies...
but yes..next chapter is dedicated to you...





Hmmm...Cheese.....lets see which one is Me and which is Vicky.......

Comt, one of France's most popular cheeses, is known for its nutty, slightly salty-yet-sweet taste. - Definitely Vicky!!!😆

Cap Gris Nez, a rich, creamy, intensely flavor-filled cheese from France's northern coastal region - This is more like me (Nargis)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapnaajay

wowwwwwwwwww readin MBBBBBB'S on geet forum.well no need to go to MB website as its free here itself with indian characters who seems like more of western type.not bashing ,just enjoyin a good piece of nicely wriiten story.will be waitin for next part...........



welcome to my mad world...i understand about the western lifestyle..i guess.the author..takes the blame for it...
MB website has some free online library too...however...i am glad you like my stuff...hope you read and comment...constructive criticism welcome...


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 7
The meeting went in a blur. It went well, but Nargis knew it was sheer intelligence, presence of mind and years of training that helped her get through that one and half hour of that session. The papers signed and sealed were ready and she was finally ready to be out of here.
Just as the meeting was getting over, Nargis heard Vicky ask the clients to join them for lunch. The audacity of the guy was worth putting up in Guiness World Record Book thought Nargis acidly but could not do much in front of them.
She suffered silently through the lunch without contributing more than monosyllables and perfunctory conversation that did get a couple of raised eyebrows from Vicky but she was beyond caring. She still churned from emotions that wanted her to kill him or do unspeakable things that would bring him lot of pain.
As soon as the clients departed. She turned to Vicky and said. I don't want to hear one glib word from you! You are despicable! Treating women in callous fashion! You think every woman whose path you happen to cross should fall at your feet in adulation and subjugation? Not this woman, Mr Vikram Singh Khurana. It would be the day I die if I ever fall at your feet.
She turned and walked away, called a taxi, sat in it and went off.
Vicky for a change was left thinking on the curbside.
It had been a week since Nargis had come back to India. She still was not able to get Vicky out of her mind. She had never met anyone like him. Well, thank god for that..Oh who am I kidding she muttered to herself as she peered into the documents that KB technologies and its legal standing in relation to the news French laws to be put into effect with the firms that they did business with. Hmmpff..she grumbled..its this French connection that got her thinking about him in the first place. She had analysed and over analysed the whole episode and she had come to the logical conclusion that it would be best if she put it down as experience and move on. But this stupid heart seemed to flutter at mere thought of him. Pushing him and papers aside, nargis decided to go to the health club for a swim. She needed to shed some energy somewhere and if she was not going to be able to get any work done..she might as well work out.
She had just finished her swim and showered and changed when she got a call from Maan's PA asking if she could meet him to discuss some important legal matter. Asking her to convey that she would be there in office in half an hour and would be free to attend to Maan, she got into her car and went back to office.
Maan came with a new VP Abolee Verma who was also going to be working on the project and needed to know the legal matters as it involved license and contract with the Swedish company to be understood when developing the software. As they discussed the project, Nargis could see the darting glances and small touch that these two shared. The meeting was almost over and they eased into a conversation about each other and found out that they were both from out of India. Nargis and Abolee were getting along like a house on fire. They discussed finer points and both of them debated the license and its implication in terms of legality as well as technical outcome.
Nargis could sense something between maan and abs ( she had asked her to call her that). She seemed a very determined lady who was thoroughly professional yet the currents passing between them seemed to sizzle in the air. Nargis had known Maan for last two years and was aware his distance from women. It surprised her to find him leaning towards Abs' point of view for most of the meeting. Nargis did wonder and mentally said I 'll be damned but they seem in love. Just then Maan spoke up and said Nargis, I am giving a small party this tomorrow evening. It would great if you could come too. I know you live alone. Abs then jumped in and said, well you don't have to think yourself alone now. I am sure we will be friends. Nargis really found Abs a very nice woman to talk to articulate and chic. She smiled and agreed to come. She had been itching to ask the whereabouts of Vicky but kept quiet. Maan had mentioned when he had explained Abs' presence that Vicky was in France and that was the reason Abs needed to understand the legality as she was handling the project.
Edited by rushtrip - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow....badi fast ho tum!!! Will comment after I read it!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKANargis

Wow....badi fast ho tum!!! Will comment after I read it!!!



thank you..with inspiration..such as yourself..is it any wonder...ms sheikh?
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nargis sweety, kyun dil hai ki maanta nahin!🤣 😉 And of course we'd get along. Afterall we're neighbors! Me Canadian, you American! 😃

Hmm Vrushali is it that obvious that there's some khichdi cooking between Maan and me that even a 3rd person can notice! Yeh Maan bhi na!!!😆😆😆 Hamesha haath pakadne ke peechhe rehta hai! 😆 Main chahe jitna bhi koshish karoon, woh hai ki office ke samay bhi Majnu bana hua! Majnu Maan!😆😆

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