Short Story-Take my breath away-Vik&Nags!Upd 7/26 - Page 12

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Wow....Vicky bechaare ki to vaaki hi VAAT lag gaye.......he is miserable....but so sweet. Loved his reaction upon suspecting that Adi and I are dating...or rather in love....and so sweet that he apologized for his rude behavior..and then made his escape to find some solace...some peace of mind and heart......when it didn't happen....his thoughts and feelings gave him no rest.....he gave into a stupor induced by whiskey......

I am almost tempted to go after him to his apartment to relieve him of his misunderstanding....but I think that that would be a dangerous proposition......its hard enough to handle a lucid Flirtatious Vicky......I can't even imagine how I would handle an elated drunk Vicky when he learns that I am not in love with Adi......

Kya kya mauke dhoondhe ga yeh jataane ke liye...ke he is in love with me......does he even realize or admit to himself yet that he is in love with me.....?


And me.....wow...my heart broke reading about his halaat in his apartment...alone and sad....and guilty feeling that he almost came in between me and Adi.....What is it that i feel for him....is it mere attraction.....or do I feel deeper for him.....the empathy that I feel right now...is it same empathy I would feel for any guy in this situation......or is it Vicky only who confuses me to no end...who riles me up one minute...enough that I want to gorge out his eyes...and then in the next minute...he touches my heart so....that all I want to do is run into his arms......ugh...why is this so confusing???😡

Vrushali...you are a tremendous writer...you have made me literally feel for this nargis and Vicky...this was a rocking update...thanks!!!

did i read your thoughts again?

well may be i should have made you very forward..and run..to him..par..you see..tum ek bhartiya naari ho..aise raat ko...kisike paas nahi jaate...
so i waited till morning...
i want him lucid..when you tell him that he loves you, stupid fool that he is..and of course..you fell in love with him...when you guys were mile high...

OMG Vrushali..we are so on the same wavelength about What Nargis feels .....her confusion...her frustration. The comments I posted after Chapter 9 are so in tandem with your update in chapter 10....and to think we wrote them simultaneously.....and without discussing this aspect......WOW...that is so cool!!! Love it....

So I am in love with Vicky....but how will I ask Abs without giving away my feelings for him......don't wanna sound desperate in front of Abs!!!😆

Looking forward to the next chapter.......plz update soon!!!!

Originally posted by: AKANargis

OMG Vrushali..we are so on the same wavelength about What Nargis feels .....her confusion...her frustration. The comments I posted after Chapter 9 are so in tandem with your update in chapter 10....and to think we wrote them simultaneously.....and without discussing this aspect......WOW...that is so cool!!! Love it....

So I am in love with Vicky....but how will I ask Abs without giving away my feelings for him......don't wanna sound desperate in front of Abs!!!😆

Looking forward to the next chapter.......plz update soon!!!!

darling you forget you are a lawyer...
you will think of something...

ha ha..😊

Originally posted by: rushtrip

darling you forget you are a lawyer...
you will think of something...

ha ha..😊

I am glad you have so much faith in me.....hope i can live up to it!!!😆

Originally posted by: AKANargis

I am glad you have so much faith in me.....hope i can live up to it!!!😆

i am sure..you will...where there is a will there is a way....cliched but true...

Chapter 11

Nargis called Vicky's office asking for him and learnt that he had not showed up yet. She then requested to be put through to Abs, who was in a very cheerful mood. She chitchatted with her for a few minutes asking about what the wedding plans looked like and to ask her if she can be of help in any way. She then asked if she knew the whereabouts of Vicky as she had documents from New York come in today that she needed to talk with Vicky on. She then told Abs of how she had met him at new york office and had the contract dealt with, with one of the clients.

Nargis was shocked to find that Vicky had left early this morning for Paris without informing anyone. Maan seemed a bit upset that with the wedding coming up Vicky should behave in such a fashion. But it seems that Vicky has some girl trouble. Nargis thanked Abs and put the phone down, trying to think what to do next.

Vicky it seems had run away. Nargis now determined more than ever to find Vicky, packed a suitcase, called Ritz Paris to book a room, booked her flights for tonight and decided to finish off some work at office before she goes crazy with thought of Vicky spinning in her head. She never thought him to be a coward and she was going to show that so and so that he needed to be a man. She was so livid, she reached office in record time and started attacking her work as if possessed.

Nargis realizing what she was doing, calmed herself. She finished her work, when to her apartment then decided to call home and chat with everyone. She found it comforting to hear everyone's voice, they were so excited to hear from her and Mom was very happy looking forward to a grand child.

She did not stop at goading her by saying pata nahin mein naani kab banoongi? Nargis as usual asked her Mom to stop blackmailing her when she her her dad champion her and said..Noor usse chor do akela. Jab shaadi karna chahegi tab karegi. Nargis screamed to her dad listening on the speaker phone love you dad! And heard her Mom start her pet peeve with dad Aap bas usse bigado'itni baadi ho gayi hai'ab to usse samjhao..ki shaadi karle'nargis' spirits lifted to hear her Mom and Dad bicker in the familiar fashion and understood what deep love and affection brought in a marriage. They seemed to understand each other so well. She said..achcha achcha theek hai laughingly ab aap dono meri wajah se zagda mat shooroo karo. Achcha Amma mein rakhti hoon, I am going to Paris today on work. Will go back to india in few days, will call you again soon.

Bye Baba! Bye everyone.

Nargis felt almost herself after a long time thanks to the familiarity that her family brought. They were her anchor she thought lovingly.

Nargis thanked the receptionist after completing her formalities at the hotel and went to freshen up to the room.

After taking a shower, ordering some room service, she called up KB technologies paris and found out where Vicky's apartment was. She ate her breakfast and took a taxi to the apartment block, convinced the concierge that she wanted to surprise Vicky and did not want to be announced.

Nargis rang the bell of the apartment, but found the door slightly ajar, so she pushed it and went inside. She entered what appeared to be a huge living room. There she was shocked to see Vicky sitting on the couch, hugging a woman, she almost turned and ran out but in her haste she broke the lamp behind her. Hearing the noise, Vicky looked up and gasped, Nargis?

Damn...I knew it...just as I was approaching the door.....i suspected something like this...and bam...wo kameena kissi ladki ke saath tha.....UGH....see he will never change!!!!!!😡😡😡


But I know...i am jumping to conclusions....cause the woman is his Mom....no wait woh to India mein hain....I don't know of any sister that he or Maan may have.....so who was she?? Some old girlfriend he was saying bye to...ugh!!!!

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Damn...I knew it...just as I was approaching the door.....i suspected something like this...and bam...wo kameena kissi ladki ke saath tha.....UGH....see he will never change!!!!!!😡😡😡


But I know...i am jumping to conclusions....cause the woman is his Mom....no wait woh to India mein hain....I don't know of any sister that he or Maan may have.....so who was she?? Some old girlfriend he was saying bye to...ugh!!!!

no she was a friend, the one you had met at the airport..remember..the one who had organised..the baggage...

Originally posted by: rushtrip

no she was a friend, the one you had met at the airport..remember..the one who had organised..the baggage...

Ab Vicky ko muje manaana padeyga.....woh bhi koi alag tareeke se...? What say...i think I deserve that much!!!

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Ab Vicky ko muje manaana padeyga.....woh bhi koi alag tareeke se...? What say...i think I deserve that much!!!

Bechaara Vicky! Abhi ILU bhi nahin bola aur manofy karna shuru!😆