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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rushtrip

have i shocked you guys?

@nargis - i am from Ahmedabad, Gujarat tho have lived for many years in Nigeria and 2 years in Uganda. so i donno...

@ Abs...this guy is hot tempered...one may be even more than Maan...

doesn't like to deal with feelings...he has been the fast food guy so far...now he is facing a seven course..meal...what is he going to do?
plead hunger or full stomach....?




Acha...Mein seven course mean hoon???😆....and loved the analoy of FAST FOOD!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Reading the update now...will comment in a few...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I'm shocked! Hmm, I didn't think that he would have continued after being slapped! 😲I guess I was lucky I was dealing with Maan instead of him, or else Vicky would have had his eyes popped out with my high heels! 😡

Hmm, why did he continue... I thought being Maan's bro he'd stop. Did he sense something from Nargis' side?😉 Ahem, ahem Nargis could you elaborate please here...😆

So one more question pops in my mind: he didn't try anything with me, was he delibarately trying to see if I would click with his bro?? 😲

Vicky is more than what meets the eye, while Maan is straightforward crystal clear!!
Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: averma4583

I'm shocked! Hmm, I didn't think that he would have continued after being slapped! 😲I guess I was lucky I was dealing with Maan instead of him, or else Vicky would have had his eyes popped out with my high heels! 😡

Hmm, why did he continue... I thought being Maan's bro he'd stop. Did he sense something from Nargis' side?😉 Ahem, ahem Nargis could you elaborate please here...😆

So one more question pops in my mind: he didn't try anything with me, was he delibarately trying to see if I would click with his bro?? 😲



@nargis... you did let on didnt you? i know you are going to cry foul...but..come on admit your feelings..
but moreover..it was..Vicky and his emotions..that were in trouble here...

@Abs...you would have pulvarised him for sure..but..you see i am a firm believer..that...chemistry works..in a strange way...sometimes you feel attracted to some...sometimes you like someone and sometimes you just hate someone on sight...and between you and Vicky..it was..that buddy...feeling..i presume.. cos vicky..was into no brains..girls...but now he has met his nemesis...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: rushtrip

have i shocked you guys?

@nargis - i am from Ahmedabad, Gujarat tho have lived for many years in Nigeria and 2 years in Uganda. so i donno...

@ Abs...this guy is hot tempered...one may be even more than Maan...

doesn't like to deal with feelings...he has been the fast food guy so far...now he is facing a seven course..meal...what is he going to do?
plead hunger or full stomach....?




Nargis = Hyderabadi biryani 😆
Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
So Garam Masala,

You still under shock? Mr.Chaalu too much for you? 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: averma4583

I'm shocked! Hmm, I didn't think that he would have continued after being slapped! 😲

Yeh me too...mein ne iski VAAAT lagany thi...but that was so short-lived!!😡

I guess I was lucky I was dealing with Maan instead of him, or else Vicky would have had his eyes popped out with my high heels! 😡

Hmm, why did he continue... I thought being Maan's bro he'd stop. Did he sense something from Nargis' side?😉 Ahem, ahem Nargis could you elaborate please here...😆

All I can say right now is .....****silence**** apparently I still cannot say anything yet....still reeling....give me some time!!!☺️
☺️☺️☺️☺️

So one more question pops in my mind: he didn't try anything with me, was he delibarately trying to see if I would click with his bro?? 😲

Vicky is more than what meets the eye, while Maan is straightforward crystal clear!!

Boy ...you are not kidding me.....Yeh CHEEZ kya hian....ek minute inta ghussa...abd then next minute mein inta softness.....I think both the KHURANA brothers are BI-POLAR!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bipolar huh...
Abs and Nags..(may i call you that)...watch out..is till got the pen..i mean.the keyboard...

just kidding...i think men dont know..how to react when faced with extreme emotions..they either..clam up or lash out...
lets see..what next vicky does...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Nargis: Badi haansi aa rahi mere upar jab mera confrontation hua tha Maan ke saath! Ab khud ki bolti band hai!😆

@Vrushali: Wonder if Vicky will tell his bro about getting the slap! Maan will instantly think of his slap, but laugh at Vicky! Until Abs comes and tell him "Khurana men" and their slap adventures! Maan ki bhi vaat lagani hai! 😆 But all of this much later, when Vicky comes to terms with his feelings!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rushtrip



@nargis... you did let on didnt you? i know you are going to cry foul...but..come on admit your feelings..
but moreover..it was..Vicky and his emotions..that were in trouble here...

@Abs...you would have pulvarised him for sure..but..you see i am a firm believer..that...chemistry works..in a strange way...sometimes you feel attracted to some...sometimes you like someone and sometimes you just hate someone on sight...and between you and Vicky..it was..that buddy...feeling..i presume.. cos vicky..was into no brains..girls...but now he has met his nemesis...



Okay....ab kuch halaat sambhali hain...so I can post my comments.....varna...abhi tak to mere hi VAAT lagi thi.....

Vrushali...If I let on...the it was totally subconsciously....I think I like him...or am rather attracted to him....but I will not admit it yet....but he does effect me like no other man has so far....considering that he is totally not my idea of the IDEAL man...aside from the Physical sense of course!!😉

But you are right...this episode was all from Vicky's perspective......I think the next one needs to deal with MY feelings....my subconscious attractions to him....but I am totally rejecting this attraction...because I cannot QUANTIFY it.....it does add up...why would I be attracted to a man whom I think is the ANTITHESIS of what I consider to be the PERFECT guy!!! Why would I melt at his kisses......I hate guys like him...because I have stereotyped him....and don't want to go beyond the stereotype...to see the actual man beneath the FLIRTATIOUS layers.

And come to think of it...Vicky too needs to come to terms with his feelings....why is he so pissed when I reject him....he can get any other MODEL type girl...far prettier than me...so why does it piss him off that I rebuked him??
😕


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