'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 57

awesome... mind-blowing... lovely.... no words... im speechless...

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

Pallo,


I loved ur hatke thing about love.....Geet telling Maan...n calling him khota at the same time!! Loved it!!

ooooooooo she in the stream...haila n Maan enjoying it....these two are evil....but loads of fun evil.

maan ka bhi dil dhadka finally!!! Update soon!!

Yep she is larger than life....I love this portrayal of her!!!! Maan was wicked in this part magar...I am sure he will repair the damage😆😆😆
Loved your comments...Thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: taskutbimuff

Superb update:)loved the convo between dadi n Geet.plz update soon.hoping for some romantic rain sequence;-)

Romantic Rain sequence...Mashallah....My brains will go haywire thinking of it....😆😆😆
Will try my best...
Thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Wow!!!! Super-fabulous! I loved it......seriously! The whole thing.......I loved how differently you etched out Maan and Geet's characters......instead of being like some stereotypical love-sick puppy......you showed Geet to be confident and very much in her character. Now, that's how I like it and want it! Dadi is a genius.....lolz......love her! Finally, Geet let her heart out.....Maan is so impish......lolz.....he could not bear to see her with someone else so was letting out his frustration on her......I loved the kiss! 😉😆.....Even Geet's imagination was titillating....😍......I just love the way you describe things.....the words you use.......hope my comment is not sounding repetitive and monotonous....😛😆😆.....that was a wonderful update......do continue soon.

Monotonous...u kidding??? I love your comments!!!! Thanks for acting as the fuel to make me ride onto my next part....
Yep I wanted the FF to be different....not the typical love-sick types..with loads of misunderstandings and jealousy...I wanted to make it NOVEL and ekdum FATAK...Something never read before...in other FFs...Hope I am achieving at least 25% of what I wanted...
Thanks for commenting!
Love ya!

Originally posted by: Tressa

awesome... mind-blowing... lovely.... no words... im speechless...

I really loved this part... dil se...🤗

aaawww..... what a way of confessing love.... ya d dialogue-'Pyaar schedule main nahi tha par ho gaya'.... Nice line ha.... 😉

Please continue when u get time... I mean asap.... i wanna know Maan's further reactions....

ya i feel sad abt one thing.... y doesnt Maan also feel for Geet or realize his feelings for Geet.... hope that happens soon....

ya 1 more thing to tell- ur ff is way different from d original track.... & thats 1 of d reasons y i like it so much.... d track is different... but somehow d essence of d main characters is d same... (hope that makes some sense)

thanks again....

Yep ur comments make perfect sense....that's exactly what I am working on...keeping the characters in their own boots but making them walk different trails
Thanks a lot for commenting...you have got the real essence of my FF..thanks a lot!!!
Made my day...!!!

need more need more and need more update pls

wow dear..3 amazing parts.. sorry sorry sorry 4 bein so late..last year in college is realy tuf..livin in a hostel vth no net access makes it tougher..ah well..comin bak 2 ur ff..all d 3 parts wr superb..luved them..so finally geet let out her feelings b4 maan..wonder wat his reaction gonna be..do update soon..i hv to go bak to hostel day aftr tmrw..will i get an update b4 that?

Originally posted by: phoenixgirl

wow dear..3 amazing parts.. sorry sorry sorry 4 bein so late..last year in college is realy tuf..livin in a hostel vth no net access makes it tougher..ah well..comin bak 2 ur ff..all d 3 parts wr superb..luved them..so finally geet let out her feelings b4 maan..wonder wat his reaction gonna be..do update soon..i hv to go bak to hostel day aftr tmrw..will i get an update b4 that?

I have studied at a boarding school where no net access or TV was there....10 months..in that jail without getting a single glimpse of nething on TV....It used to be hell!!! I can understand ur situation more than than u know...12 yrs of that...
I will surely give you an update tomorrow...just let me know when you have to go back will post the part comfortably for you.

Originally posted by: sapnaajay

need more need more and need more update pls

will update soon...dun worry. Thanks for liking it!😃

love the confession!!! thanks so much!!! loved this...brillant writing...dieing for the next part!!

wow as usual wonderful part.amazing writer u r. i loved this part.👏

omgg wowwww dat was amzinggg i loved

yet again another FABTASTIC POST loved every bit of it and u cant say at all tht its not good because i checked my inbox atleast 20 times to see if u had updated thank you so much please continue cos i LOVE your ff ok thanks again by