'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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taskutbimuff

@taskutbimuff

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Posted: 15 years ago

#201

Wow yaar.had fun reading this update.its too good.thanks.waiting for the next one:)

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sweet_charmed

@sweet_charmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#202

lol 2 lovely updates in a weekend... lol we'll get spoiled :P 😃😃 haha i'm loving this story.... aww i love viviaan 😛😛..such a cute kid..and dadi is the best haha making maan get geet back..lol wat would we do with out her :P ... i hoping for more maneet interactions next update :) ...

p.s. i'm lovin the harry potter and twliight references..ahaha awesome👏👏👏

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ffkhan

@ffkhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#203

U cheered up my weekend!!😉Driver Geet! LOL. 😆

GR8 job! Do continue soon.

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#204

I know Geet wants to drive the bus either away or crush Maan...but poor gal will have to stop!!!

I hope she gives him a hard hard time before she agrees to come back!! n at Geet driving the bus...LOL!!

great update Pallo!!

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#205

Very well written.I really likeeeee this part.Plzzz update soon.Waiting for the next part.

fatima

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Tressa

@Tressa

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#206

hey ya.... awesome 8th part... very unexpected twist & turn... but please continue soon.... Im dying to know what will happen nex...

The end was very sudden... I thought there will be more to read... but now its all suspense untill u continue. So please do us the favours sooon.....

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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 15 years ago

#207

Hey Pallo,

I enjoyed reading every bit of it! It was just superb.......so nicely written! Simply loved it! Waah.......Geet was driving the bus....what an amazing girl! Dadi......she asked Maan to sleep in the garage......serves him right! Lolz. Maan was shocked......can't wait to read your next part.......do update real soon.

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#208

hey awesome part,
lol, so maan is kicked out of the house to get geet, wow lol im liking dadima
and i cant believe it, geet is actually driving the bus, lol interesting
anyway , now cant wait for what geet will do to maan, lol 😆
do continue soon
Maheen xx