'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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TANYA

@TANYA 18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#181

anota great part. loved how geet is startin 2 dream of maan:-). u gta do the same 4 maan 2 nw. mke him dream of geet. nice addtition of the kidvivaan. sumthing fresh. hope the comments long enuf like u wanted lol. xx

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Mariam Ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#182

gorgeous......Vivaan !!!!!....he is sooooooooooooo sweet.......cont soon.....and thank you for pm.....by the way pallo ye log kab payar main paregeee....i am waiting..........maaneet's are soooooooo mesmerizing........

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

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Posted: 15 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: livelygal

no doubt...My granny forces it down my throat every morn and I force it into my FF...nyc na?

hisaab barabar kar rahi ho😆😆 u r blessed wid granny lucky u khushi kshushi piyo or FF mein bhi milao😆 God Bless You.😊

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

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Posted: 15 years ago

#184

pallo nice update sweety:)

so the ice is finally gonna brake b/w the two ........vivaan was really cute......awaiting 4r the next m

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Monica

@_Monu_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#185

great part

vivan is the lovely devil..lol!!

hope geet is not fired

waiting 4 the next updt

see yaaa

love yaaaa

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Tressa

@Tressa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#186

Hey... what can I tell u??? ur an awesome story teller. Ur charactes Geet & Maan althought in a different story... share the same attitude & vibes as our real Geet & Maan... waiting desperately for ur story to go on... jus like I wait for geet episodes... Im mus tell u, ur dialogues are jus superb, comic & entertaining... I can actually imagine Drasthi & Gurmeet saying all those dialogues.. gosh... everything seems so real... Please continue the story asap...

Im tried of waiting for monday.... dinner episode... Maaneet first unofficial date... wooowww..

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Anum

@anufa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#187

awsum
superb

plz aj hi or part update kr do.....plzzz

nhi tu yeh weekends guzarte hi nhi!!!!😉

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#188

nice update Pallo.. Geet fired by Maan over Vivaan.. Vivaan's chachu is the client... now how will he say Sorry? waiting for that..

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Nirali

@Piano1422

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Posted: 15 years ago

#189

Awwww... I feel bad for Geet. I think it's really credible that you have kept the attitudes of the characters the same. I can totally imagine Maan behaving the way he did in this part .Vivaan's such a cutie pie. Eagerly waiting to read how Maan gets Geet back.

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#190

Aww Vivan is such a cute boy! Loved this character introduction for this part!

Frisbee and Ben 10..? 😆 Cutee! Surprised that he's related to the CEO..

Great writing for the part where Maan was angry..that was SO like the Maan from Geet..I could practically imagine how he signaled to Geet to come to the corner with his eyes..

Now i can't wait to read how Maan is going to make up to Geet.......

Carry on Pallo! :D