CVs-Maaneet scenes for the future: UPDATED pg.31 - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey!!
Just read this!!
It's awesome...
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow tent before the outhouse...lovely thot Abs...

am in my xrated world of Maneet...
pls update..so...we can...become a bit sane..again..
or may be not
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Maahi...plz continue..i like your scenes....wanna know what happens next.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Abs...as always....fabulous update....but jadli sey continue karo no....my imagination is running away with me.....and i think you know where its headed......straight where Asma's and Faz's is......in the gutter...so please put us out of our misery and update soon!!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg guys ur doing fabulous job
i cant get over it
the scenes written are awesome
i m drooling
love all scenes
great job guys 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
the scenes are awesome......... please do continue............ur doing a fab job !!
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This is a scene continuation from today's episode! Thought I'd write how I have imagined it in my mind! 😉 Dedicated to all those who were diappointed or angry or felt sad after today's episode, I cant promise you if this will be worth your while as you will have to give me feeback on it! 😉

BTW if I decide to carry it on, I'll be posting a part tomorrow, as well as sunday & it will finish by monday cause thats when we get to see what actually happens between Maneet!
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Geet was left distressed in the middle of the dancefloor, with nothing to cover her, her sari was torn and she could not move. The fear of being humiliated froze Geet & her feet weren't willing to budge. She stood there feeling helpless & crying as the spotlight shown on her. She could feel the stares she was getting, her whole body was not willing to co-operate with her. Tears oozed out of Geet's eyes & trickled down her cheeks like rain.
Maan who's earlier behaviour was not acceptable went back to apologize to Geet & then leave as this party was getting too overwhelming. Feeling guilty he walked into to see the horrendous humilation Geet was facing. As if someone had snatched the ground from under his feet, Maan felt dead. A pang of pain pierced his heart, it sank his heart. This was unusual for me thought Maan. What's going on? Diverting his attention from his emotions, Maan hurriedly ran up to Geet & covered her with his jacket. *Mahi music plays* He didn't know why but it felt as if his own self respect & dignity was on display even though it was Geet was who going through this torture, he felt humilated even though Geet was going through this, he felt anguish even though it was Geet who was experiencing this. The sudden rush of emotions, unbalanced Maan. He looked around to see who was watching all this, & why no one helped. Angrily Maan stared everyone down until they looked away, then turning his gaze towards Geet, he slowly wrapped the jacket around her.
Watching this from afar Sasha was burning in a pit of jealously, Tasha was too amazed by what was happening and kept repeating ma'am quietly. Adi & Pinky were feeling so bad for Geet, they would've helped had they seen her earlier, but seeing Maan help her, both were relieved. They were really proud that MK was their boss, at least this guy showed a slight bit of respect towards women, instead of watching them like they are a display in a shop window.
Geet looked at Maan appreciatively, she was so dismayed by the whole incident that other than feeling greatful she couldn't think of anything else. She felt mortified. never in her life before had she been snubbed like this. The thought of it didn't make the tears stop, all she could hear was the murmurring. Grabbing Geet by her shoulders, Maan inquired.
Quietly Maan: Geet meri taraf dekho. *Geet looks up slowly* Tum fikar mat karo main hoon. Tum theek ho na?
Geet nodded. Maan then put his arm around her & walked out of the hall. Everyone's whispering got louder but Maan didn't care. Th only thing he wanted to do was protect Geet, nothing felt more important than doing that. Maan walked with Geet into the car park. Geet just stood there, quietly sobbing away whilst Maan turned around. He didn't know what to say. He looked from place to place but nothing. At first Maan wanted to comfort Geet, but seeing his softened emotions towards her Maan got more fustrated, he didn't understand his feeling, so instead of being soft, Maan got angry real quickly. He turned around & started shouting at Geet.
Angry Saru Maan: Tumhein itni akal nahi hai kay tum koi dhang kay kapray pehen kar aao. Yeh choro, tum jaise badimaag larki aaj tak meinay kabhi nahi dekhi. Wahan dancefloor par khari kyun the tum? Wahan say gaye kyun nahi? Wahan par sab tumhara tamasha dekh rahay thay, aur woh Rahul uss ke toh mein.... *Maan scowling*
Distraught, scared Geet: *sob* Woh......mein.....*Geet was finding it difficult to speak.
Maan started shouting: TUMHEIN KUCH SHARAM NAHI AATI? WAHAN PAR ANSOO BAHANAY SAY KYA HUA? KUCH BHI NAHI? TUM AURTAIN BHI NA, JAB DEKHO KISSI NA KISSI MUSEBAT MEIN PHAS JATI HO AUR PHIR RONAY LAGTI HO! TUMHEIN KUCH....
Maan stopped. He saw how degraded Geet had felt. She was still in the same position, crying her eyes out even more. He could see how ashamed she felt, the pain on her face was clearly visible. Her hands trembling, her stance looked even lower. Seeing this Maan's anger changed into pain again, he felt the same feeling that he had felt before, it was anguish, he felt Geet's pain. Feeling guilty for shouting at her Maan, moved towards her, his hand automatically came up to wipe her tears away. Maan as tenderly & softly as he could, slowly wipped the tears off Geet's cheeks. Geet who had her eyes lowered looked up at Maan. She could see how he could feel her anguish, there was something in his eyes that told her about the pain that Maan was also feeling. She thought that had it not been for Maan, she still would've been in the middle of the dancefloor. An overpowering emotion took over Geet, without any thought, she hugged Maan. Burying her face deep in his chest, she let herself completely go & cried like she had never cried before. Geet felt right to cry her heart out, it was too overwhelming & she didn't even think once about who she was holding onto.
Maan was startled. He knew how torn up Geet was about the whole incident. Automatically his arms wrapped themselves around Geet to comfort her. Geet held on tighter to Maan whilst Maan too held her closer. It was as if the whole world had disappeared again. Geet felt protected, as if nothing could touch her, whereas Maan felt possessive, he didn't want anything to touch Geet or else he would destroy anything that dared even to touch her. A few moments passed, Maneet were still in an embrace, totally oblivious to the world around them.
After another while Maan opened his eyes, Geet's sobbing had died down, seeing Geet in his arms, he quickly let go off her, Geet feeling Maan's warm arms leave her also opened her eyes, she slowly unwrapped her arms off Maan & looked up. Both gazed at each other with total understanding in their eyes, Maan could see how greatful Geet was & Geet could see that Maan had truly felt her pain. Both snapping out of their eyelock, moved back. But Geet had taken a wrong step and nearly felt backwards. In the nick of time Maan saw this & caught her. She was in his arms once again. Both felt peculiar, it was as if the whole of nature was trying to bring them closer. Instead of letting Geet go, Maan picked her up instead. He knew she felt weak because she could hardly walk before. Geet was mesmerized by Maan but feeling him lift her, she put her arms around his neck, & held on tighter, not to fall. Maan was truly disperced in her beauty. He started walking towards his car, as they reached it, he opened the door for Geet to sit in. Then after settling in himself, Maan drove off to his "outhouse".
The ride to Maan's house was quiet. Both Maneet kept giving each other glances when they thought the other wasn't looking, totally mesmerized by each other. At last Maneet reached Maan's outhouse. Geet looked a little worried, where are we? She thought. Both got out of the car, Maan looked at her in awe whilst Geet felt awkward, she was confused, tired & couldn't make eye contact with Maan due to everything that happened between them. Maan understanding her unrest, explained.
Softly Maan: Woh...hum meray ghar par hain. Tum aisi halat....mein ghar kaisay jaati? *Maan points towards Geet's sari* Iss liye tumhein apnay ghar lay aaya. Meray paas kuch kapray hain, woh tum change kar lena phir mein tumhein tumharay ghar drop kar doon ga.
Geet nodded. She didn't feel scared or worried, there was something about Maan that made her feel that she could trust him. She remembered all the times he had helped her & knew that Maan would never hurt her in any way. She felt no danger from him. Grabbing onto Maan's jacket tightly, slowly Geet followed Maan inside. The house looked highly organuzed, everything was in place nothing seemed to overlap with anything. It was simple & nice. Maan asked Geet to follow him, both walked into Maan's bedroom (guys imagination control karo, its not their SR 😆) Maan walked over to his wardrobe, opened it & started fidgeting around to look for something appropriate.
Geet on the other hand stood near the door, she felt like she was invading Maan's privacy, she stood there looking around until her eyes fell on Maan who couldn't find the clothes he was looking for. Geet looked at him adoringly, she was spellbound by Maan. A little smile spread across her face. As Maan was looking, he accidently glanced at Geet and looked back, but the glanced back at her to see a small smile across her face. Geet who hadn't expected Maan to look her way, suddenly turned her gaze away, feeling flustered at being caught she turned a little to not let Maan see her cheeks turn red. Maan who felt a little happy, he knew he had made Geet blush & it amused him, he could see the rosy colour in her cheeks so he smiled to himself & then got back to looking for the clothes. He found something, he closed his wardrobe & walked up to Geet. Handing her the clothes he gave her directions.
Maan: Woh bathroom udhar hai, tum fresh ho kar, change kar kay aa jao, mein hall mein hoon ga. Yeh darwaza band kar lena.
Geet: Jee.
With that Maan hurried out into the hall whilst Geet closed the door & made her way towards the bathroom. As she took Maan's jacket off, she remembered how he saved her from being humiliated, & all their moments after that. She hugged the jacket, it made her feel good to know that it belonged to Maan. But after a moment Geet realized what she was doing, she quickly put the jacket down and started getting changed.
Maan was reflecting on his days events with Geet. He felt guilty. He really wanted to say sorry to her but couldn't bring himself to do it. Something held him back
Geet had changed into a long white kurta, which was twice the size of her. She felt a little weird, but decided to get going as it was getting late. She quietly walked into the hall, with an awkward stance, Maan didn't notice her as he was busy thinking, Geet quietly said Maan but he didn't listen, Geet had no choice but to wake him from his thoughts. She walked over and shook him a little to get his attention. Maan jumped up quickly only to see Geet, looking dazzling as ever, her hair open, the kurta made her look even cuter because it was so big. Geet notices Maan widen at her sight, she shies away and in a polite manner asks him if he can drop her off?
Maan turns his gaze away & nods. Both of them walk outside & Maan again opens the door for Geet. After setting of Maan is lost in his thoughts, both of them don't talk at all. Maan however keeps getting flashes of Geet standing in the middle with the torn sari, whilst everyone was leering at her especially Rahul. This angers him, in rage he suddenly stops the car. Geet doesn't know why he stopped but one look at his face and she knew he was angry. She thinks its because of her but before she opens her mouth, Maan has another mood swing, he starts the car again & this time in full speed, reaches Geet's home in 5 minutes. Geet wants to say sorry & thank you but Maan brushes her off in a gruff manner and tells her to get out. Geet feeling hurt & dismayed gets out & slams the door, she then walks around to the door whilst Maan has already left.
Rahul's leering at Geet flashes before Maan's eyes, he turns his car to go back to the hall again, he has a score to settle with Rahul...😉
To be continued....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oyyyyyeeeee!!
That was awesome Fazzz!! loved it...i hope a hug defo happens!!
waiting for hte next part...really impatient, but im gunna go eat now, see ya laters :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwwww Faz....thanks...i was hoping that someone would write a continuation scene...so that we can all calm down.....and know that Maneet will be ok. Looking forward to the next part.....but I hope you do make Maan apologize for leaving her in the middle of the dance floor.....I think no matter how angry he was...that was uncalled for!!!
Edited by AKANargis - 15 years ago

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