CVs-Maaneet scenes for the future: UPDATED pg.31

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hapinezz13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#231

@Maahi...that was a very cute scene....wud love to read more!!

@ ABS....rain, strike and Maaneet alone....can't wait to read what happens next!! he was so sweet that he arranged the trip around her and got some food packed...DD is a sweetheart!!

@ Faz...love;y.....I hope that happens but more than that I hope MK gets to know abt Sasha and he fires her pronto.....coming to ur scene...it was bful....such tender emotions and Maan feeling her paing was nice!!
OOOOOO kurta....how sweet!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#232

lovely scene Faz...you have been the saviour of me...today...

thank you..
loved the kurta part..and ofcourse the hug and the lift...he does love to carry her in his arms..now doesnt he?

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Sofna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#233

Dn't u Dare Stop Ms Faz!!!! (Lol)

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Maahi Mishra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#234

Maaneet scene continuation from page 27.

I am really thankful to all who liked and commented . sorry, the part became somewhat long. but this is the last part of this scene. please bare with the writing and the grammatical errors.

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both gasped for breath, she looked at him with fearful eyes and he assured her that everything was fine. he started the engine, but what's happening, the car's not moving. geet became more worried while tried several times to start but failed severely in his attempts.
geet was really terrified at this point .maan got out of the car & opened the bonut to detect the problem.geet came and stood beside him and asked worriedly"kya hua".maan gave her a quick look and responded back"gaadi garam ho gayi hai, dekhna padega shayad kahin aas paas paani mile".with this he moved towards the car & took a bottle from the back seat."main bhi challongi" geet started panicking."bilkul nahin mere waapis aane tak tum car mein hi baitho"maan commanded."lekin' geet started to say something but stopped abruptly as maan was giving her a stern look.geet got inside the car and maan started walking in order to find some water mumbling to himself"jab bhi es ladki se milta hoon , kuch na kuch galat jaroor hota hai".
around 20 minutes were over, maan still not returned . geet got really worried and decided to find him.she was walking on the road, thinking to herself" ab ye dusht danav ,mujhe akela chodkar kahan chala gaya.paani laa raha hai ya wahin nahaane baith gaya"geet smiled to herself at the thought.but very soon her smile vanished as she realised a jeep stopped beside her.she noticed around 6 or 7 goons were seated and eying her with bad intentions. she really got frightened.. one of the goons commented-"kya madam akela kahan jaa rahi ho,chalo hum chod dete hain'
geet replied sternly- dekho, yahaan se chale jao, mere paas aane ki koshish bhi mat karna" with this the goons started laughing and commenting more.she got really afraid hoping in in her heart that maan comes soon,its only her fault she should not have got out of the car in first place.she came out of her thoughts and realized that one of the goon was approaching towards her. she started to bask off. she was really terrified, just didn't know what to do. she began to run screaming maan.
but soon she was trapped between them. she was crying and requesting them to leave her alone.but they were gundas after all.again a goon started coming towards her.she closed her and put her hands on her face as she cried "nahin please".
but to her amazement nothing happened, the howling sounds came to a halt.she put her hands down and slowly opened her eyes, really scared.but to her good fortune she saw maan standing there and hand catched the goons hand in midway.she screamed in happiness "maan" and goes behind him and grabs her arm in fear.he gave her an assuring look.and then the chase began.laat ghunso ki bauchar shuru.all goons were soon on the ground.." maan" screamed geet, he turned abruptly to find out that one of the goon had catched her and was pointing a knife towards her.man slowly started walking towards them.the goon threatened him not to come nearer else he knows the result.maan said sternly"agar apni salamati chahte ho to ladki ko chod do".with this in a flash he catched geets hand and pushed her towards him out of the reach of the man.
the goon at an instant threw the knife towards geet.maan in order to save her jumped towards her and instead the knife made a deep cut in his left arm. then maan got up in an instant and having a last look at geet to ensure she is safe, he marched towards the goon and began fighting. maan's eyes were red in anger as if saying tune meri geet ko nuksaan pahunchane ki koshish bhi kaise ki. it seemed as he is going to kill the man. geet was utterly bewildered, she never saw him this angry before.and why, just because of her. she came out of her thought land and noticed a goon standing behind maan with a hockey stick in his hand. she can't dare to think what he was up to."MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN" screamed geet,but it was too late, he hit him hard on his head, maan turned back, a stream of blood running through his head.geet was standing there open mouthed in shock.as the goon got out of his grip, they all ran away without wasting any time.
maan was standing there with hands on his head, he was felling dizzy.as he was about to fall back. geet cried maan and ran towards him to hold him back.she was continuesly crying, tears weren't stopping.she carefully placed his head in her lap. maan was unconscious.she teared her dupatta from a side and tied it to stop the blood flow.she didn't knew what to do,as the time was passing she got more and more worried.she wildly patted his face "Maan uthiye, please uthiye,aapko kuch nahin ho sakta , main aapko kuch nahin hone dungi.babaji please meri madad kijiye, main kya karoon" with this she started crying more furiously. then only she noticed the bottle maan brought with him was lying on the ground.she almost ran towards it, opened it and started sprinkling some water on his face, she noticed maan responding , some slight movement, she again sprinkled water and started patting his face, he slowly opened his eyes and the first thing he saw were two concerned eyes , with tears brimming in them.as he tried to get up, she moved towards him& hugged him hard , crying more badly. he reciprocated the hug subconsciously.he felt good at heart seeing her so concerned about him, but he was feeling bad as she was crying because of him." geet please chup ho jayo,dekho main bilkul theek hoon"he said with a concerned voice while caressing her head gently.realization struck her , what she was doing she at once broke the hug. and helped him to stand, they walked slowly towards the car. they weren't saying a word, too embarrassed and somewhat angry at each other. after a while, in the car as maan was driving,geet decided to broke the silence and ask him the question which was making her terrible.
" sir aapne aisa kyon kiya"; geet questioned.
maan got frustrated " ab maine kya kiya"
" aapko un gundo se ladne ki kya jaroorat thi, agar aapko kuch ho jata to" she responded curtly.
" isme galti tumhari hai maine tunhe gaadi se bahar nikalne ke liye mana kiya tha na" he said angrily, thinking how stupid is she.
geet knew it was her fault but she can;t let him win in the argument, she had a point" to main kya karti, aapne itni der kyon ki"
maan not realizing what she just said , instead gor really frustated with her stupid arguments, he said sternly while pointing his finger towards her" chup: bilkul chup, agar tumhe kisi baat ki samajh nahin hai to chup baitho, jo karna chahiye wo to karogi nahin, aur jo nahin karna chahiye wo jaroor karogi"
they both looked opoosite fuming in anger. maan concentrated on his driving he didn't wanted any other distreaction.
after a while geet again started the arguement she wasn't satisfied,"jo bhi kahiye, aap to us gunde ko aise maar rahe the, jaise uski jaan hi le lenge, aapko aisa nahin karna chahiye tha"
Maan got really pissed , he got wounded for the sake of this girl & she was accusing him being a fault. he clutched her arms tightly , brought her close , stared at her angrily, there was passion in his eyes, " tumhare saath koi bhi badtmeezi kare main ye bardaasht nahin kar sakta" an intense eyelock. soon they broke the eyelock and maan started to look forward concentrating on driving, mentally scolding himself, mujhe ye kya ho gaya hai, maine geet se aisa kyon kaha.geet was still staring at him in amzement trying to get the meaning of his words , his eyes, she can't help thinking why was she so pleased to see him before her eyes , why when he was hit she felt as her breath is gone, why was she so much concerned about him, why he always affected her so much, maybe because he always helped her whenever she was in any trouble.
but the train of her thoughts came to a halt as the car was stopped with a jerk, she then realized she have reached her home., she thanked him and he without even looking at her nodded. as she was about to get out she felt as her dupatta is strucked , she turned and found her dupatta got struck in maan's watch, he also saw it. they both at the same time tried to remove it, but accidentally his hand was above her . at the touch maan felt as shivers ran down his spine, they both looked at each other and lost deeply in each others eyes, maahi bg. after a while they broke their trance and maan handed her the duppata. she took it shyly and as she was about to go she noticed the cot in his arm which was bleeding. she grabbed his arm in a reflex and started panicking -" yeh kya, oh god kitna khoon beh raha nahi , tu bhi na geet kitni paagal hai, ab main kya karoon" and on and on.
he watched her with a smirk on his face, he put his finger on her lips and she at once became conscious," main theek hoon , tum jayo" he took off his finger and turned to other side. she got really annoyed, she got out of the car at once and started walking towards her house but again stopped in midway, turned and again approached towards him slowly.he was watching her going inside but when saw her coming towards him, she got confused, has she left anything behind. he checked her seat there was nothing, he got out of the car, " kya hua , tum kuch bhool gayi" he asked concernedly when she came near him, she nodded in no, then said" aap to meri baat manenge nahin, par phir bhi keh deti hoon ho sake to doctor ko dikha dejeyega, aur first aid kar lijiyega, aage aapki marzi" she didn't gave him a chance to say anything turned back and walked towards her home.
maan was amazed , he sat in the car and drove back home, took a shower and all ready to sleep when while walking to the wardrobe he saw a glimpse of his wounds in the mirror and geets last words again started coming in his mind. he took out the first aid box and does his first aid. after all done he moved to sleep saying-" ye geet, mujhe pagal kar degi" remembered today's events and slept .

Maahi

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Maahi Mishra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#235

hey maybejust , your post was really awesome, i really felt disheartened after the epi .
thanks for writing and do continue.

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hapinezz13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#236

Maahi,

Fab update girl.....awwww I loved how Geet was so tender to him and Maan ufffff khadus....but he looks good that way!!

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raziya56

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Posted: 15 years ago

#237

loved the scenes maybe-just and cutemaahi....

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billih

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Posted: 15 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: maybe-just

Guys this is going to be the last one, from now on I'll be posting separate scenes because I have soooomany in my head 😆Unless you guys want me to carry on, other than that I'm not willing to carry this on! 

<div align="center">Continuation of Confrontation & Revelation : Geet - Dev - Maan on Pg 23.</div>
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Maan and Geet stared at each other thinking about what was happening? Everything had happened so fast that no one had any idea about what the results of this were going to be. Geet was deeply touched by the fact that Maan who has always scolded her, who had always seemed to hate her, was the one person in her life that stood by her. Her respect for Maan grew a hundred times more. But she knew what she had to do. 

Geet: Maanji, mujhe...aap say akele mein..2 minute baat karni hai.

Maan & Dadima both were surprised, Maan especially since Geet had never called him Maanji before. After wondering what Geet wanted to talk about, Maan nodded & walked towards the study. Geet too slowly followed him. Dadi watched both of them go, she sat down on the sofa and started to think.

As soon as Maan & Geet were in the study, Geet closed the door. Maan who was near the desk was observing Geet. Geet just stood there for 2 seconds before turning around and looking at Maan. Maan too just stared back at her. For a couple ofseconds both were completely lost in each other eyes. Both felt that no matter how much they say to each other, their eyes would speak a 1000 words. Theywere both confused by this bond between them, it made them always wonder why they feltclose to each other. Breaking the eye contact Geet moved towards a chair but didn't sit down.

Geet: Abhi jo kuch bhi hua...mein....

Maan: Geet abhi jo kuch bhi hua uss mein tumhari koi galti nahi, woh to mera chota bhai hai jis nay itni bari galti ke. Dev. 

Maan spat out theword Dev like acid and this didn't go unnoticed by Geet.

Geet: Lekin aap nay jo Naintarasay kaha....

Geet felt shy, it wasn't something she had expected from Maan.

Geet: Mein aap ko aisa karnay nahidee sakti. Aap pehle he meray liye itna kho chukay hain, aap nay meray liye apnay bhai ko ghar say nikal diya. Mein nahi chahti kay mein aap kay upar bhooj bano. Aaj kay zamanay mein apnoo ka saath koi nahi chorta, beshak kuch bhi ho,lekin aap nay meray liye kisi apnay ka saath chor diya.

This stunned both Geet and Maan. Maan hadn't really thought about it like this, there was a lot of truth in Geet's words he thought, she's right I didkick my brother out for Geet why? Why did I feel this sting when I found out what happened to Geet? Why had I said to Naintara that Geet would be my wife?Geet on the other hand was also questioning herself and Maan, she was surprised because she hadn'trealized it up until now abouthowmuch Maan had given up for her! Why was he doing this? She thought. So muchand that forme??But the bigger question Geet asked herself was why do I feel so close to him, why does he feel like the only person who I can trust? Why does I feel so protected when he's around? Coming out of their thoughts, Geet continued.

Geet: Aap ko meray liye itna karnay ke zaroorat nahi. Mein chahti hoon kay mein apnay peroon par khari hoon. Aur.... mein nahi chati kay mujh say shaadi...kar kayaap ke life kharab ho jaye. 

Maan could see that Geet was blushing saying all this, he felt a little happy inside, he loved seeing her blush. 

Geet: Aap nay aaj tak meri bahut help ki hai, aur iss ke liye mein zindagi bhar tak aap ka ahsaan nahi chuka sakti, lekinmein aap ko meray liye aur pareshaniyan bhi nahi uthanay dee sakti! Mein aap say shaadi nahi karunge. Kyunkay ye aap ke majboori hai aur mujhe kisi ke majboori nahi bana.

Maan was partly surprised by Geet. He hadn't expected this from Geet. He couldn't believe that Geet cared enough to not let him marry her. His respect for her rose because she had decided to face all the hurdles by herself. She showed how selfless she was, she wanted to be independant and face thehardships of life!However there was a tinge of sadness deep within Maan's heart. He wanted to help Geet, it morally felt right to not let her be on her own. How would she survive this big world? He decided to speak.

Maan: Lekin Geet tum ye akele kaisay karo gee? Iss bachay ko kis ka naam do gee? Duniye wala kya kahen gay? Main tumhein aisay beech sarak mein nahi chor sakta, mein tumharay saath har lamha rahoon ga!

Geet was again touched by Maan's caring nature, she wanted to hug him but stopped herself.

Maan: Nahi Maanji, aap he nay mujhe sikaya hai kay har problem ko face karo, uss say mat bhago. Mein apnay bachay kay liye kuch bhi sehnay kay liye tayaar hoon. Aur rehi baat duniya waloon ke toh mein un say bhi larnay ke liye tayaar hoon. Jab meray apnoon nay mera saath nahi diya toh meinay duniya waloon say bhi umeed rakna chor dee hai. Iss bachay ko mein apna naam doon ge, iss ke maa aur baap dono mein hoon. Maanji, mein ye bilkul bhi nahi chahoon gee kay meri wajah say aap ko koi takleef ho, please meri baat maan leejiay.

Maan after some consideration decided to tell Geet his decision.

Maan: Theek hai, agar tumhein lagta hai kay tum mujh say shaadi nahi kar sakti toh theek hai. Lekin meri bhi aik shart hai.

Geet: Woh kya?

Maan: Mein tumharay saath uss har pal rahoon ga jab tumhein madat ke zaroorat ho gee. Aur tumhin mujh say waada karna ho ga kay jab bhi tum kisi mushkil mein ho gee, tumhein mujhay bulana ho ga.

Geet agreed as she had no choice left. Maan was stubborn and he was being really presistant. As Geet started walking towards the door, Maan said something else which stunned her.

Maan: Aik aur baat, tumhein iss bachay ko mera naam dena ho ga, Khurana parivaar ka naam. 

Geet turned around, she looked at Maan and tears started rolling down her cheeks, she couldn't believe what she was hearing. Even after everything Maan was willing to risk his reputation by giving his name to her child. This gave Geet the deepest pleasure, she not only felt respect but gratitude towards Maan. She had never expected him to be an angel in her life. 

Maan seeing tears in Geet's eyes was shocked. He thought something was wrong. Slowly he advanced towards Geet. Seeing tears in her eyes stung him like a thousand pieces of ice. He stood close to Geet and looked deep into her eyes.Both gazed at each other appreciatively. Gently Maan wiped Geet's tearswith his thumb.Touching Geet made him feel warm, this feltjust right he thought,to be there to wipe Geet'ssorrows away. 

At Maan's touchGeet felt a flutter inside, this was something she had always felt whenever Maanhad touched her, it felt new but old at the same thing. An unexplainable feeling. Geet again wanted to embrace Maan. She needed someone at this moment but didn't feel Maan would appreciate it. Maan too wanted to embrace Geet but didn't know how Geet would feel. Breaking out of their trance, both stood there quietly before Maan spoke.

Maan: Geet hum...woh...Dadi ko ja kar ye faisala sunana hai.

Both walked side by side out into the hall where Dadi was sitting.

Dadi as she saw Maneet coming side by side felt happy. What a perfect couple she thought. All the while Maneet were talking Dadi had time to think. She knew what Devdid was wrong but how could Maan marry Geet? But then she changed her mind. She rememberedallher interactions with Geet in the office, the way Geet presented herself, there was somethingabout Geet that Dadi always liked. She knew that Geet had to begiven justice and there was only one way in which this could be done.Maan came up to Dadi and told her Geet's decision. Dadi hearing what Geet wantedwas a little upset. She was not happy with what was said so she expressed her final decision.

Dadi: Maan aap aur Geet nay toh hamari decision sunay baghair he faisala kar liya. Ye nahi hosakta. Hum aap kay pehle walay faislay say sehmat thay.Aap ko Geet say Shaadi karne he ho gee. 

Both Maneet felt a little embarassedbutalso felt that they were back to square one. It felt awkard. They looked at each other with helplessness and didn't know what to do.Dadi seeing the awkardness between the two understood that her decision may not be as right as she thought. After a moment or two she spoke again.

Dadi:Theek hai.Aapdono ka maudekh kar humein aisa lagta hai, kay yedecision bohat bara hai.Agar aap dono ko lagta hai kay ye faisala galat hai toh bilkul theek hai. Lekin head of the house honay kay natay hum apnay decision parabhi bhi atal hain. Hum chatein hai kay aap dono ke shaadi ho,lekin agar aap dono manay toh. Geet hum aap ko force nahi kareingay, aap ko iss kay baray mein puri tarah sooch samhej kar decide karna ho ga. Aur humein ye abhi nahi, puray aik mahinay baad chahiye. Aur tab tak hum chatay hain kar aap har roz hamaray ghar aayen, hum aap ko hamari nazroon kay samnay dekhna chatay hain. Aap ko koi takleef nahi ho gee kyunkay Maan har roz aap ko apnay saath office say lay aayen gay aur aap ko aap kay ghar bhi drop karengay. Lekin mujhe aap dono ka faisala chahiye, aik mahinay baad.

Geet thought that even after a month she could say noand Maan agreed knowing fully well what Geet wanted. But Dadi was smiling inside, this was the only way she could think of to get them both to agree. It wasn't that Maan would be makingDev's mistake right, No!It was that he would find the best life partner. Dadi knew how stubborn Maan was when it came to women, he respected them but that did not mean he had ever liked any.So farDadi had only seen Geet make a place in Maan heart, one thing that no other girl had been able to achieve.In one month Dadi was going to create so many situtations that would prompt Maneet to come closer and eventually agree to marry. With that Dadi told Maan to drop Geet off at her house as today's events were upsetting and Geet must be tired.

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<div align="left">Maan & Geet both walked to Maan's car. Maan opened the door for her and waited for her to sit down so he could close the door. AsMaan was going to close the car door for Geet, he noticed that her dupatta was hanging out, he wanted to say something to Geetbut thought better of it, Geet didn't need more trouble in her life. He bent down on one knee and picked it up for Geet. Geetalso looked down to see Maan with the dupatta in his hand. As Geet reached out to get the dupatta, both theirhands touched. *Maneet music plays*The flutter was back,Geet feltathousand butterflies loosen instomach, the electricity between the two raged on. Maan felt warm again. Both were captivated by each others eyes, something was binding them together, not letting them break their gaze. A servant came running up to Maan, which startled both him and Geet, they both broke the eye contact and looked flustered because of the intruder. Both quickly pulled their hands back too. Maan quickly got up and closed the door. The servant told him that Dadima wanted him to not return to office as she had something to discuss about Dev.</div>
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<div align="left">After the servant left, Maan proceeded towards the driving seat, and sat down. He started the car up andin a flash the car was gone.</div>
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Guys should I carry it on? Do you wanna know why Dadi called Maan?😕

when r u going to update ???????????????????????????????????????????

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#239

Nice scene Maahi...keep it up!!!

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VJ-LNMDJ

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Posted: 15 years ago

#240

@ maybe- just, thank you so much for your writing.........thank god Maan has been nice to her after that.........thank God Maneet are fine...now I can sleep in peace......was feeling like sobbing otherwise..

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