CVs-Maaneet scenes for the future: UPDATED pg.31

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#201

@Faz: Very nice! 🤗 You need to continue it. Can't leave us hanging like this!😃

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Harpreet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#202

great scene! def continue😊 we need to know wat happens to maaneet!

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#203

Faz...loved th escene...pz continue...looking forward to dadi/pota convo....and more Maneet moments!!!

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Lekha Ishwar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#204

@ faz great scene! def continue😊 need to know what happens

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VJ-LNMDJ

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Posted: 15 years ago

#205

Wow, how well you two write !

@averma and @ may-be-just, thanks soooo much for the treats you keep giving us....

please do continue to use your talent so that lesser mortals like me who can just read with gaping eyes, can get the precious doses of maneet magic from you...........

Cheers!
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chhavi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#206

Awww such a heart-touching scenee, please continue Abs!

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Maahi Mishra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#207

I'm new to the forum. and loved this show. maaneet are awesome, and i love watching them. this thread is really awesome i loves every scene to its depth. so thought of writing something too.

i am not worth of a good writer , just felt to write something please try and bare with this....😊

Maan was working on the London project. the meeting was in about 2 days so he have to work till late night & that means geet to have loads of work.They both were completely absorbed in work.the presentation was at the verge of completion. by the time geet felt really tired, she stretched her arms and for the first time her eyes cached the clock .'oh my god' were the first words to come out.it was past 11.no, she can't stay any longer, she stole a glance at her khadoos boss through the glass partition who was still busy with his laptop. she stood up and decided to grant his permission for leave, she was somewhat fearful from inside but there was no other way out. the man seems to have completely lost in his work. she took the files and knocked at his cabin door. the sudden voice made him look up from his laptop to which his eyes were glued since last 1 hour.then he saw geet at the door.she came and stood in front, looking at him meekly."what" he asked in an annoyed tone."sir can i leave actually...."words hardly came out.then only he looked at the time and realized it was actually petty late. she was waiting for him until now touched his heart but again he left thse thoughts and became his own self,he nodded his head. she handed him the files and was about to leave, when suddenly his commanding voice brought her to a sudden halt, she turned around hastily to meet his gaze."Its petty late,its not safe to go alone,let me drop you".did she heard it right, , the man always ready to march on her was felling concerned about her.she didn't know why but from inside she felt good but nodded in no.he only told her to be independent. "It's okay, their's nothing to worry about, i can go by myself".
" geet, why don't you ever listen to me, I'm waiting for you outside" his tone getting hyper and he left the cabin hastily .
she had no choices left, she didn't know why she felt protective when he was around. she agreed and followed him. outside he was waiting for her standing beside his car. geet slowly moved towards him.😍Maan's gaze fell upon her innocent face which was looking much prettier due to the full moonlight's falling on her beautiful face.there was something special about her he didn't know why he can't help looking at her. she came and stood in front of him. she notice him looking intently which made her feel shy😳.he came out of his trance and became embarrassed.he opened the passenger door for her and after a while , there journey started..........

There was an awkwardness prevaling in the atmosphere which grew the silence.she was trying not to look at him & diverting her attention outside the window thinking about their moments together. he was always her saviour. maan was stealing glances at her. maahi music in b.g. . 😍suddenly a strong a strong breeze came and her locks got scattered over her her pretty face.maan looked at her beautiful face. eyes full of admiration and passion.he felt the urge to place the locks behind her ears.
a loud noise came and both came out of their worlds , and became aware .a truck was just before them, maan cornered his car and put the breaks with all force in an instant.the car came to a sudden halt. geet looked frightened while maan was mad at himself, he couldn't believe he was so lost that he didn't noticed the truck coming towards them. if he hadn't applied the breaks on time they must have met with a serious accident.
both gasped for breath, she looked at him with fearful eyes and he assured her that everything was fine. he started the engine, but what's happening, the car's not moving. geet became more worried while tried several times to start but failed severely in his attempts. to be contd...........

please tell me if you liked it or not. comment/ criticism all are welcomed.😊

Edited by cutemaahi - 15 years ago