My first OS The SaGa reunion Chap 7 updated

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This is my first OS on SaGa , so kindly ignore the grammatical errors. 😉. Here we go
Chapter 1 page 1
Chapter 2 page 1
Chapter 3 page. 1
Chapter 4 page. 2
Chapter 5 page. 3
Chapter 6 page 3
Chapter 7 page. 4
Chapter 1: The meeting

Sagar had became a total workaholic now. He didn't smile, he didn't eat or sleep properly. For him it was all work, but he was at peace that Jhanvi had agreed to divorced him. So now no one would badmouth Gangaa and his relation. He wanted to win her back, but knew she was badly hurt and won't forgive him easily.

Gangaa was in her final year of LLB, working under the internship of Mr Dalal. He was one of famous lawyer of Banaras. How she wished to work under her babu, but her atmasamman stopped her to do so.

Gangaa herd on phone Mr Dalal talking to his clients, " kidnap that bitch. He has not lost a single case till date. And if he gets the proof from store house, we will loose. Stop him, kill him, but he should not come out of storage house before the next hearing in court".

Gangaa got tensed and as soon as Mr Dalal left his cabin, she barged to see the file of Mr Nair. She requested him if she could work on this case. He agreed and assigned her the task of collecting some sample from storage house before 2 PM.

She was still wondering where had she heard that name Nair. She recollected Sagar was talking about it in the morning to one of his clients. She suddenly called Dalal secretary to confirm, who is the defence lawyer in Nair case, she had been assigned, secretary said " Mr Sagar Chaturvedi". Her suspicion was right, Sagar life was in danger. She couldn't let that happen. But she cannot call Sagar as they had vowed not to talk to each other.

Finally she arrived at store house, in search of Sagar. She was shouting his name. Sagar realized that his Gangaa was in danger, they looked at each other. Before Sagar could realize an iron rod hit his head. He became unconscious.

Thinking Gangaa is with him, the goons attacked her also, trying to molest her. Sagar cannot view anyone else touching his Gangaa. He fought with goons and fled them away.

Gangaa couldn't bear the brunt of bleeding Sagar. They both hugged each other and cried. A sense of awkwardness was there, as they were not friends.

Sagar just asked her if she was OK. Gangaa noded her head. SaGa knew it was not safe to be at this place. Those goons might come back, as they could hear some sounds of foot steps.

They ran,and found a place in small hut, it was night, and Sagar was bleeding, Gangaa took the cloth nearby and cleaned his wounds. Sagar was awestruck as his caring Gangaa's was back.

Please let me know if I should continue further...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice start... do continue..
The portion where Gangga is doing internship but still caring for Sagar when she finds out that his life is in danger was very much in tandem with the show...something many of us would love to see in the serial...
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Nice start...Looking forward to next update.
Update soon :)
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Thanks for your kind words
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Chapter 2: Together

It was twilight time. They both decided to stay in this hut until morning as those goons would be searching for them. It was safe to stay here

Sagar opened the door, it was a small hut with a small window. Few firewoods, an earthen pot and few utensil were there. Before it got dark he had to lit the fire.

Sagar searched for match stick while Gangaa assembled the woods. He lit the fire. Sagar asked her" how come you knew that I was at storage house ". She replied " well I have been assigned to assist Mr Dalal on this case".

Before he could ask anything, she warmed some water, and tore an old cloth. She dipped the cloth, gently wiped the blood stains from Sagars wound. Sagar was trying to peep into her eyes just to find his old Gangaa. His caring Gangaa was back, in front of him.

She looked into the utensil and noticed some rice and masala box there. She asked Sagar " I am very hungry. Would you like to eat rice. I know you don't like rice , but there is no option "

He nodded yes, thinking his childhood days Gangaa was back, who knew what I liked .

She prepared rice and they both ate from one plate. Sagar became emotional after eating dinner with her . It was after so many months he had eaten properly, as he refused to eat food prepared by Jhanvi.

He said " today after so many days, I had the chance to eat food prepared by you. Thank you "

He got busy in preparing the bed of dry hay kept there. While Gangaa prepared a turmeric paste to apply on Sagar's wound.

She requested Sagar to sit down, while she gently holded his face to apply the paste followed by dressing of wounds. He could see a red mark on her forehead, reminding him, that she was his wife then and now also.

Gangaa got some cold water and wet cloth. He asked "What's this for". She replied" you have high fever Sagar. Come, sleep in my lap I will keep on changing the wet cloth, so your body temperature will come to normal and I will also be awake "

She repeated the cycle for three hours and got herself sleep, while Sagar slept in her lap. Suddenly a noise alerted Sagar to wake up. It was due to some wild animal he guessed.

On returning back to the hut, he saw the moonlight was falling on Gangaa's face. Her serene beauty, mesmerized him to draw more closer to her. The room was filled with the sweet smell of her hair.

He didn't want to lose a moment of gazing his princess beauty. He moved towards her and gently put the strand of hair behind her ears, which was trying to disturb her sleep. He slowly kissed her ears, then the dove shaped eyes, her forehead and then he saw those soft red lips. He wanted to kiss those too, but stopped.

He noticed Gangaa was shivering as it was getting cold. He got a torn bedsheet, enough to cover one person.

The room was all dark again as the bon fire had already extinguished. Upon noticing Sagar's absence, Gangaa woke up. She was afraid on where has he left her alone in middle of the night. Suddenly, she hit something hard and clutched it tightly to say " don't ever leave me alone again ". He said " I always promised you not to leave you. Comm'n now you wrap this bedsheet and sleep properly, I am awake ".

However,she refused, as he needed rest more to keep his body temperature down. They both started fighting and finally decided to share the bedsheet and sleep together.
As it was getting more cold, they hugged each other and slept, just to keep their body warm.

The sun was up, and the sight of two souls entwined into one was more splendid. Sagar woke up, but didn't leave her as she would still feel cold.

They both got up and tried to reach a connecting road to highway. Sagar was needed to be taken to hospital first, to prevent infection. They both got a hitch and reached city hospital.

Gangaa called her babu to come to hospital alone. When he arrived, he saw Sagar injured and admitted. She indicated Sagar is inside the room and left. When Sagar woke up he called her name. Doctor indicated she has already left.

Sagar was furious again, " Yes, she left me here to die".

The doctor asked Niru " Is the lady who brought him here, Gangaa. Last time also , during riots she left him like that only without meeting my patient".


Both Sagar and Niru looked at each other apologetic on how much wrong could one go to blame Gangaa.



Edited by njain16385 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great! Chapter 2 you have got one of Janvi's lies out...good job...
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Chapter 3 Drifting apart

Gangaa immediately called Siddhant, as he was the one who left her at store house to get those samples. Siddhant was a Delhi based businessman and Mr Dalal's son.

Siddhant arrived at his father's office, just to know if Gangaa was fine. His concern for Gangaa, didn't go unnoticed by his father.

Sagar was home, recovering from his wounds. Gangaa saw him, to see if he was fine. Their eyes met but none spoke to each other.

Time elapsed. The budding friendship between Siddhant and Gangaa grew more stronger. They started liking each other. He also helped Pulkit in his business to grow further. His homecoming to Pulkit's house became a normal routine. While Sagar with each passing day was killing himself inside, growing more tougher outside. Ammaji was all cursing , on how a widow can cross her limits. What will society say, on Gangaa's closeness with Siddhant?.

Unaware on what was going on in "sadside house", Pulkit ,Supriya really liked Siddhant and started to think of him as a perfect life partner for Gangaa. Pulkit knew he liked his sister, but formally he needed to talk to Siddhant to take their relation further.

Being a worried mother , Madhvi also started looking for good marriage proposal for her son. But Ammaji first wanted to do a kundli dosh puja so that lalla's life is not spoiled once again. She showed Jhanvi and Sagar kundli to panditji,upon hearing Jhanvi date of birth, Sagar knew it was wrong. He crossed check again and called Sahil to know her correct birth details. Yes, this was it she had made wrong kundli. He took Madhvi along with him to the same panditji who had made Jhanvi's kundli.

He confessed his crime there. Sagar remembered Gangaa's words when she warned him that Jhanvi was not good match for him and instead he believed Jhanvi. Madhvi also looked apologetic, thinking that Gangaa has always saved her house from all trouble but she has never valued her.

Meanwhile, Ammaji panditji updated her, that Sagar will again remarry his first wife only. His interim affair with any other girl will be temporary. His first wife will only bring peace in his life. Ammaji was confused again on how could Jhanvi bring peace back in his life, as she never considered Gangaa as lalla's wife.


SaGa were drifting apart, Niru knew about it but was helpless. He knew that his son happiness lies with Gangaa. Seeing Sagar working hard was finally taking toll on his health, Niru had stop it somewhere.

Gangaa's engagement was fixed with Siddhant.The night arrived, Gangaa was getting engaged finally, PulSu were very happy for her. The engagement was at Dalal farmhouse. Sagar knew about it, but couldn't do anything. He was about to loose his Gangaa forever.

Sagar was in the balcony crying his heart out. Niru couldn't hold himself anymore, he went to the balcony and asked his son," Go and bring her back, I cannot see you dying like this. I know it has all been my fault, neither had I asked you in return, nor your relationship would have broken. Sagar you don't need to prove that you are a good son, I want you to be bad also at times. I just want you to be happy ".

Sagar replied " Dad what you think, have I not tried to get her back numerous times. She is very stubborn, She will not come."

Niru said" I know Gangaa better than you, I know she will not come with you easily. "

As he handed over the chloroform bottle to Sagar. Niru continued " if you can kidnap Saloni, why not Gangaa. Comm'n I want you to tell her what is in your heart. Give your relationship a last try for me"

The father son both hugged each other.
Edited by njain16385 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...claps👏
Amazing. Everybody wants the show to go like this...plzzz update the other part soon ...sagar kdnaping ganga..wow..it will be fun
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lol !! Niru wants sagar to kidnap Gangaa using chloroform!!! OMG hilarious

How did Gangaa agree to marry this guy?
Looking forward to the next bit
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful update...Chalo Niru realised his mistake...and Sagar kidnapping Ganga😆...Can't wait for next update.
Edited by _SaGa4ever_ - 9 years ago

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