My first OS The SaGa reunion Chap 7 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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great hahaha but that s will never happening in the show but i love it😳😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jacina19saga

great hahaha but that s will never happening in the show but i love it😳😆

u should write about palash and gangaa love story they are the lead now😕😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally SaGa got married...Ammaji sudhar gayi isse acchi baat kya ho sakti hai... Great that whole family is taking Ganga's stand. Lovely Update!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The sangamam is happening...beautiful update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 7 A unit
Ammaji returned from temple, and asked SaGa to be ready to visit the Durga Maa temple.They both nodded their head simultaneously.

Niru knew they both need to spend more time together alone, so before anybody could speak, he said " Sagar as you know the temple is a 2 hour drive from city, why don't you have dinner outside itself. Even Ammaji wanted to visit her Guruji, so the rest of family will go there. Don't worry we will be back before you arrive back at home."

Elated, Sagar affirmed and was wondering how much my dad understands me.

SaGa left house in evening hours, while rest of family got busy to welcome the newly married couple in their room decoration and later left to attend the satsang.It was already dark when Niru and rest of family left the Guruji's ashram. But anyway they had to reach home before SaGa came.

A rough track of 5 km before they hit the highway. It was all dark, the tyres of SUV got punctured,due to thorny bushes. There was no point of going home now, they had to stay back in ashram itself for tonight. Madhvi felt bad for his son, as his first night would be spoiled.

Niru tried to call Sagar but he didn't pick the phone. SaGa had their dinner together at a road side dhaba, when Sagar noticed multiple missed calls from his father. He called back again to say " Dad don't worry we are on the way, we will reach home in half hour "

Niru replied " listen, our vehicle has got punctured, we need to stay here in ashram only, as no mechanic is available nearby. You both do one thing, stay for tonight in a hotel. We will be back in morning"

Before Sagar could ask them to pick up he cut the phone intentionally. He wanted them to enjoy together alone, away from family. Niru opened his inbox to see Gangaa's message " Hotel Alka, room 301" and smiled at himself. Noticing which Madhvi asked the reason for his happiness. He replied " I know tonight, where my son would be going, it is the same place, where they spent first night together during Gangaa MMS and rediscovered their friendship "

Sagar arrived at same hotel and asked the receptionist " Can we get a room, for me and my wife ". SaGa both smiled at each other as last time they had to lie being husband and wife but now they were in real husband and wife.

While, Sagar excused himself to collect some money from ATM. Gangaa went alone into the room first.It was the same room 301, Gangaa touched the mirror smiled and spoke to herself "Mrs Sagar Chaturvedi".

Sagar was back, tired he sat on bed, Gangaa was standing near the window, nervous. He asked her" till when will you keep standing like this Gangaa, come sleep on bed." As she ignored him, he understood that before making any physical advances it was his duty as a husband to make her feel comfortable. However hard he tried it was difficult for him to control himself.

He could not hold himself to go near her, her olive green saree, slender waist jeering into moonlight, he wanted to touch her, feel her. He put his hand on her bare waist and pulled her closer to him. He could feel her heavy breathing on his chest. He could read the feeling of inhibition in her eyes. He had to make her feel comfortable.

Just then the bell boy knocked the door. When Sagar opened the door he said " Sir this is a complimentary gift to all couples staying in our hotel".Sagar looked at the bottle of champagne and roses. He felt that this was the only thing he needed. He placed them on the table and closed the door.

He looked at her to say"Gangaa you know, when I was in London the girls were so hot, mini skirts, open minded, they had the capacity to drink this hole bottle all alone". He could see her face burning with jelousy. He continued " there we use to enjoy late night parties with those girls, what was that life, I miss it! It is so boring here in benaras, no hot girls are there, now without a proper company how can one enjoy his drink. Though you are good Gangaa at everything, but you cannot give me good company if I wish to drink".

Before he could speak anything, she holded his hands to say "what do mean, I cannot be as good as your firangi girls. I do not think that I need to wear short skirts or drink this to prove myself to you". Looking dissatisfied Sagar she further continued "If you think then I am less than those girls then I am not, I can do what they can do" and she gulped down whole bottle at one go.

Sagar was dumbfounded, he had no words left to speak. The girl who had never touched alcohol in her life was having the first hangover of her life. Anyway he had handle it now, she was not her mind now.

Talking weird , she sat on sofa, she tried to be more near to him. She cupped his face and kissed on his lips. Sagar was shocked on what kinda of tigress has his wife became, the empty bottle of Champagne looked like an ambrosia to him now. She asked him, "What happened Sagar, are you not a man, don't you want this?". He replied "No, I am. Last time I checked I am a Man. But what is wrong with you, I have never seen you like this before".

Suddenly she fell on his shoulders. He carried her in his arms to the bed, it was late night and she was in no mood to sleep. Sagar knew this was the moment. He let his tigress free, to win over him, touch every part of his body and soul. He could feel the intensity of those hands which had waited for 13 years to touch him like that.He covered both of them and expressed their new found love under the wraps of bedsheets.

It was morning, Gangaa woke up to find Sagar lying near her. She was herself not able to believe, the night was over, the bad period was over, finally Gangaa has reached the final shores of Sagar.

Epilogue:

SaGa arrived in the morning to their home. Niru called Gangaa to his study room, he said her there " Gangaa, I know you hold the key to my son's life, to his happiness, to his sorrows. Now. asyou are smart beyond the girls of your age. I want both of you to grow both personally as well as professionally. You know how much impulsive is Sagar. I want you to take control of his life, make him understand where to control his anger, his emotions. I hope you can take care of that"as she nodded her head, worried Sagar came inside to ask"Dad what is going here, what were you saying to my wife".

Niru smiled on how much protective Sagar was for his wife.He said " Nothing, I was asking Gangaa, how about you both open a law firm together and work with each other. That will make you strong in each case. Sagar you are sharp minded, and Gangaa is witty, that will make you more strong as a working unit".They both nodded their head in affirmation.





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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
u know what ,i was eagerly waiting for ur post and today finally u posted
its amazing
i love
keep on posting more 😳😳
cz its very cheerful to read ur post then watching all those drama
Edited by Mifra_14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Nice update
I like the Niru in ur story - he understands them both so well
The return to their hotel as real mr and Mrs was great.

If I had to give any feedback the only think I would say is that I don't think Gangaa needed to be drunk to be with sagar or relax her. Just being with sagar in my opinion would have been enough for her to take it to the next level. Please don't take this as a negative as I think you write well and looking forward to more.

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