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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4 Change of thoughts

Sagar sneaked into Gangaa's room while she was getting ready. Sagar was mesmerized again on how beautiful she looked. Gangaa immediately covered herself with duppata , and asked " what are you doing here. I said I don't want to talk to you "

Sagar asked her " see I want to talk to you, and if you don't listen" . Gangaa was about to shout for help, but Sagar covered her face with handkerchief. Next , she woke up in a temple .

Sagar said " Jhanvi and I are divorced now. Today only in morning I received the paper with her signature. If you want everything can be back to how it was before. I love you and don't wish to lose you. You know I can't live without you ".

Gangaa replied" No Sagar, it's too late now to revert all the things. I have promised Siddhant to marry him. You know after lot of pain I have moved on. The day you married Jhanvi you gave me the biggest punishment of my life. Now, consider this as your punishment "

He stopped her " And do you realize that you are going to destroy three lives with that. You are committing the same mistake as I did"

She replied , " No I won't. I free you from all the bondage that you had been carrying for me."

She was about to leave when a car arrived. Pulkit and Siddhant came to collect her. Pulkit asked Sagar " what are you doing here with her"

Gangaa covered everything by saying " I only called him here bhaiya to close an open deal" . They all three left the venue. Shattered Sagar also reached his home.

While wearing bangles Gangaa cut her ring finger as she was still engrossed in Sagar thoughts, making a mistake, destroying three lives. She asked herself " Am I making a right move. Yes I am , I cannot let destroy his life because of me "

Meanwhile, Pulkit realized that being Gangaa's future husband,Siddhant had every right to know about her past. As he didn't want his little sister to suffer later in life. Pulkit went to Siddhant room and updated him everything about her past life. Though Siddhant fumed, but was able to control himself on hearing SaGa love story. He knew that Gangaa won't go back to the man who had cheated her.

When Pulkit came out of the room, Supriya called him aside to know what he was doing is right. Pulkit replied, " Supriya, you know one thing about Gangaa when it flows with full vengeance, it causes floods hundreds of life is lost, but when Sagar fumes it causes a disaster on a scale one can hardly imagine. Gangaa needs a husband who can control her flow, hold her emotions, show her right path, not like Sagar who is emotionally unstable. "

Supriya looked satisfied with his answer. All she wanted was both SaGa to be happy, but didn't know how could they be happy apart from each other.

It was morning, Pulkit complained to his mother about Sagar kidnapping Gangaa right before her engagement. Madhvi asked her son " Why, why you keep on doing stuff like this, because of which your parents have to look down. Please stop it. You would understand our pain once you yourself became a father"

Sagar looked towards Niru, then while staring at Gangaa replied " Mummy how can I became a father, the mother of my children has left me and living in my brothers house."

Everybody looked dumbfounded and went back to their work. However, Niru smiled and called Sagar to drop him to court.

During court hours, Sagar noticed the same goons who had attacked him and Gangaa. He followed them and ran after the van. Heavily breathing, he fell on the road. Raghav ji noticed it and immediately called Niru to take him to the hospital.

After examining, doctor said " there has been an exertion on his heart resulting in lot of internal blood loss. We need to operate immediately on him. Ammaji cannot hold the sight of loosing her grandson. She blamed herself and Gangaa too, on why did she stop putting sindoor. Then, her own inner voice replied " one day you ask her to apply sindoor, but shun to accept her as lalla's wife. How is that possible? "

Ammaji left to meet Gangaa, begged for her forgiveness and asked her to save Sagar life. When she heard Sagar life was in danger, she couldn't resist herself and went to see Sagar. His operation was successful. He was not conscious for two days, and she stayed there beside him, not to leave his sight. Siddhant could see, on how much she cared for her Sagar. She use to say all was lost between them, but Siddhant could see something was still holding them back together.

Finally, Sagar recovered and was back at home. Gangaa wedding preparations started . Madhvi was upset seeing her gloomy son, and was having change of thoughts after realizing that no one could take better care of her son then Gangaa. But she was moving on in her life and her son had too also should move on.

Madhvi showed him photo of few girls, which Sagar tore and left. Niru noticed it and asked his wife " why are you troubling Sagar when you know he is not well. Give him some time to find his own way". Madhvi obliged.

Niru knew that his son will never be happy without Gangaa nor accept any other girl in his life. He, himself had to do something now, before it's too late.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OK so I see, everbidy is realizing their mistake, first niru then ammaji ,and mads will too soon realize
A very veryawesome update ..u r a star
Update the next part soon..can't wait to read
Edited by Mifra_14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great going...Everyone is slowly realising their mistake and importance of Ganga.
Update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read 3rd and 4th chapters in 1 go...
The build up of the story is really good. You are aligning all the coins well. Every character has a part to play and redeem... really beautifully told.

I really love the part being put forward by Pulkit...A real brother. The Sindoor and Sagar's heart problem scene is just what's needed in the story... 👏👏👏
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Looking forward to the reunion of these two.

Can you put in a scene where mads is shown to be sorry for causing this pain By wanting to seperate the two and admiting how wrong she was!
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Chapter 5 The wedding
Gangaa was on the terrace, staring at moon. Confused engrossed in her thoughts " you are gonna do the same mistake that I did...I love you Gangaa...I give you this sindoor in alms to you, if you wish keep it or remove it, your wish". She was still not sure, if marrying Siddhant was the right thing to do, she has always loved Sagar, and will always do. But to make him move forward in life, if this sacrifice is needed, she will do it.

Tears rolled down her eyes on how would she give any other person the right to touch her else then Sagar. Her bappa appeared to say " you know why Ganga is so pure, a holy river? because when people commit crime, they are angry but once they realize they had done wrong, all come to Ganga river to wash their sins. The holy river keeps on flowing, no matter what the condition and finally ends it's journey in Sagar. Same way my child, your love for Sagar is unconditional, you just need to flow, everything will happen on its own. "

Sagar couldn't bear the thought of loosing Gangaa forever, she was getting married tonight. Hence there was no point to keep her any belongings. He opened his cupboard and collected all the gifts Gangaa had given to him and burned them in his balcony. He was trying to burn his hand too to feel the pain,but Madhvi stopped him.

Madhvi said" why are you doing this, why are you punishing yourself and us ".

He replied " Mummy you are asking this? You are the one who gave me pain by separating me from Gangaa. You turned me into dead soul now I live or die, how does it matter to you?You know Mummy you have failed as a mother, first when Pulkit bhaiya needed financial help for his business, second when Gangaa needed your moral support during that MMS, you saw injustice done to her, you have never taken a stand neither when I was doing wrong by marrying Jhanvi nor when your other two children needed you the most. You have failed as a mother, You know that!!"

Madhvi couldn't bear Sagar words anymore, she went to her room and wept. "Every word he said was so true, I have failed as a mother, I was just standing liking a mocking bird silently seeing the injustice done to my children, and why did this happen , because I was always interested to keep my husband and ammaji happy, though I knew I was wrong. Why didn't I save Pulkit, why didnt I save Sagar, why didn't I save Gangaa. Gangaa, I have done more injustice to her then anyone else, when she needed her mother most, I failed just because I wanted to keep her away from Sagar, was I not correct?. She has always done good for my family and what have I done in return". Madhvi for the first time felt repentant over her actions, after doing her self confession, she wanted to errect everything in right way.

Niru was back at home, looking at Ganagaa's wedding card, he himself didn't know should he go or not in her marriage. His feeling of guilt stopped him from doing so. He went upstairs to his bedroom when he saw Madhvi crying and pleading him, " Please bring happiness in my son life. All I want him is to be happy".Niru went to open his cupboard and took one of the key operated Sagar's childhood toys. He filled the key and the toy started dancing as soon as he took out the key it stopped . Niru said " You know Madhvi this toy is Sagar, and this key is Gangaa, once the toy has the key fitted in it has life, as soon as we took out the key it is lifeless. We did the same thing , just to seperate them we took his soul away from Sagar".

Madhvi realized, every single word her husband was saying was so true. But all she wanted now was to set things right. Niru asked her " Do you have the guts to still accept Gangaa as your daughter in law". She replied " If this it what requires to make my son happy , bring back to life, I am ready to accept her " . Niru smiled as she was finally realizing her mistake.

Niru got ready to move for Gangaa's wedding, nobody else had the courage to face her and he didn't also force anyone to go in her marriage. Niru just said to Madhvi " Be ready to accept Gangaa as your daughter in law. Stick to your promise now".

Gangaa was getting ready for her reception in her room. The baraat had already arrived, all were downstairs to welcome them. She was alone in her room. Niru entered her room, to say " Gangaa". On hearing his voice, she couldn't hold herself and started crying on his shoulders " Babu what has happened, we were all happy together, why has it happened, where have the things gone wrong". Niru holded her and said " Gangaa, I owe you an apology for what I did to hurt you. I did it because I wanted you both to concentrate on your carrer, grow individually, create your own identity. As, I have learned my lessons, when somebody hurt me badly. I wanted to do the same thing to you, so that you could carve your individual identity. But I didn't realize that I was seperating a soul from a body. My son is a dead now and he needs his life back. You are his life, please come back to him". He bent down to touch her feet.

Gangaa could bear anything in life, but not her babu knealing before her. It was enough to shake her soul. For the first time after separating from Sagar she realized in her ego, and anger, how much had she hurt others. Niru walked out of the room and left the place. Pulkit and Siddant both saw Niru coming out of Gangaa's room. Pulkit went to her room to ask " What did Papa say to you Gangaa" . She replied " He just came to bless me Pulkit bhaiya" .

Niru reutrned empty handed and the last hope to bring Gangaa was also gone. Madhvi went to Kahaji idol to pray " Now you only can do something. I don't want my son to get punished for my misdoings. Please don't give him this big punishment"

Gangaa was still thinking about Sagar, while wearing her jewelry she cut her hand . Supriya dressed her wounds. Gangaa said " This pain is nothing bhabhi in front of what Sagar had given me. I wanted him to suffer, and that's why I agreed to marry Siddhant. But why now I am feeling the pain, why I am not able to move. The more I try to move away from Sagar, the more close I get, why does this happen to me"

She cried and Supriya consoled her, that everything shall be fine. Siddant heard their conversation and signaled Supriya to leave him alone with Gangaa. He was angry, Gangaa could see in his eyes. He closed the doors of the room and tightly hold Gangaa to say " Why , why are you doing this to me? You know Sagar was my classmate in school. We always had that healthy competition, but I always came first and he second. I have never learned to lose all my life. I am a businessman, who wanted to make every deal I make profitable. And I want you to make this deal also profitable. You know I have always loved you, but I never saw that love ever in your eyes for me, because it belonged to someone else. You know you have always loved him. Right from childhood when you supported him to the day when you left your marriage preprations and cared for him in hospital. You belong to him not to me. And if you really want me to win, you need to do something for me".She was afraid and asked " what"

Siddhant replied " There is a car waiting for you downstairs, leave from the backgate so that nobody sees you. I want you to go back to Sagar. This time I want to come second, because I know this deal will be only profitable then. Go, leave now, I will handle everything. Go, before people start asking questions".

The clock read 1 am. Sagar knew he had lost Gangaa forever now. She must be someone else wife now. There was no point of waiting for her. All of the people were sleeping in Chatur's house. Just then a car came, and Gangaa came to balcony, breathing heavily. Time stood still, as they both looked at each other. Gangaa looked beautifull in her bridal attire, but there was no mangalsutra, no sindoor on her forehead, on noticing Sagar which he asked her " Gangaa , what are you doing here?. I thought you must be married by now".

She was angry with Sagar, and replied " How can I get married when the groom himself is not there. You know I love you, and always do. I belong to you, how could you think I could get married to someone else".

Sagar was in for a happy suprise. They both hugged each other tightly and cried in each other arms.

Niru was unable to sleep, when his phone rang " A call from Pulkit at this time", he spoke to himself. He picked the call " Dad, dad is Gangaa there, answer me, we are waiting for her here. She is not here, I am worried, is Gangaa there". Before Niru could answer anything he opened the door of his room and through his window saw Sagar and Gangaa hugging each other. He couldn't believe his eyes and replied Pulkit " What do you keep me asking this question again and again. Haven't your Geography teacher taught you, Gangaa is always with Sagar".

Pulkit knew what his father wanted to say, Siddant already updated him where has Gangaa gone. He requested " Dad there is next mahurat in 45 minutes from now. Get yourself and mom ready in 5 minutes. Also bring an extra sherwani". When Niru asked why, he happily replied " Today my brother is getting married".

Niru and Madhvi both went to the balcony and were happy to see them together, Madhvi happily said " Finally, Gangaa has met Sagar". They both together touched Niru -Madhvi. feet All three got ready in 5 minutes to leave for the venue. Sagar still couln't believe he is getting married to Gangaa.

Edited by njain16385 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was lovely, finally they are gonna be together - hope that's not the end and you are going to do an epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally SaGa are getting married...Wonderful update!
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Awww lovely update do continue and. Make it a hot and romantic one
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Chapter 6. Taking a Stand

As all the four went downstairs, Gangaa signalled Babu, "Ammaji? ".

Niru said " we will give a surprise her in the morning. Let's leave now. "

Niru drove the SUV. Madhvi sat beside him, while SaGa sat at hind seat. All the four couldn't believe if it was a miracle or so.

Niru, kept his hand on Madhvi, to console her . They both smiled at each other and looked at the rear view mirror. Both SaGa were smiling and crying at same time. Niru said to himself ,"khushi ke aason"

Their SUV arrived, PulSu were already waiting for them. Sagar hugged Siddhant to thank him, when he said " for the first time in our competition. I loved to come second". They both smiled at each other.

Both SaGa sat for phere. Panditji started of with chants of mantras, telling about importance of marriage, they both smiled as if they have been already married for last 12 years. Sagar put the mangalsutra around her neck and put the sindoor on her forehead. He didn't wanted to lose the sight of how complete his Gangaa looked. Finally she belonged to him

PulSu wanted to her kanyadaan, but when Gangaa stared at her Babu. Pulkit requested his dad to complete the formalities as per the bride wishes.The wedding was complete. SaGa took blessings of elderly people.

Madhvi and Niru left, early in the morning as they had to do preparations to welcome their daughter in law. PulSu were asked to pack all the stuff and bring SaGa along with them

Ammaji woke up and was quite surprised to see her home all decorated. When she asked Niru " what is all this for? ". Niru happily replied" your lalla's is bringing our new bahu". Ammaji looked miffed, as now which girl has he married in haste.

While on their way,Sagar didn't even once let his hand loose of his wife, as she slept on his shoulders. They arrived at home, for Graha pravesh. When Ammaji saw Gangaa, her happiness knew no bounds, she said" ladki, finally a lot of my insistence you agreed to marry lalla". All the rest of family members were shocked as when did Ammaji went to ask for Gangaa hand for her Lalla. Gangaa smiled at her and remembered the time when Sagar was hospitalized, and she had came to save her grandson life.

All the people were tired. Gangaa suddenly felt giddy, Sagar holded her and told everyone to excuse them both, as she needed rest. Sagar carried her in his arms to his bedroom. Supriya knocked the door to say" you both are tired, rest for couple of hours, when Gangaa is awake, ask her to wear this saree and come downstairs "

Pulkit was very happy, and he took the scissors to cut the portion rope in front of Niru and said " I don't need this anymore. Can I get my parents back?"The father son both hugged each other.

Sagar could see Gangaa was adorned in heavy jewellery and make up. He slowly removed her jewellery from her ears, her necklace, her forehead, her hands. As he touched her, he could feel the butterflies jumping in his stomach. She was wearing a very heavy embroided lehenga, he had to take it out too, as it would cause rashes on her soft skin. He looked at the saree, and didn't knew how to drape it. He realized it would look awkward to take help from any other female member, he said to himself " idiot, now Gangaa is your wife, you have to do it, you have every right over her now".

Finally he made her wear his bath robe, put on the AC, and slept with her under the blanket. As she was shivering, he hugged her, and they both slept peacefully for few hours.

When Gangaa woke up, she was quite embarrassed to find herself dressed in bath robe, she quickly changed into the saree kept beside the bed. Sagar was still asleep, but she wanted to know who had changed her clothes .

As a new bride, she realized she had to prepare something sweet for breakfast. She went down stairs to prepare halwa.
The whole family sat at dining table, when Ammaji also joined them. Seeing all family members shocked she said" being a widow, doesn't mean, I cannot enjoy simple pleasures of life." She asked Gangaa to bring something sweet for her to eat.

Niru was not able to believe and he said " Ammaji what has happened to you. You were never like this. She replied while looking at Gangaa, " Change is law of nature . Someone said to me, I also like to take tea, interfere in my house affairs, eat sweets, eat after sunset. So, now I will enjoy my life". Niru understood, who had said it, and he replied " And you need to thank the person, who had brought change in you"

When Sagar plate was empty, Madhvi requested Gangaa to serve him. Taken aback, on how everything was changing in a good way, she couldn't hold her tears. Sagar quietly holded her hand to say " keep calm"

Niru and Sagar were about to leave for court when Prabha arrived. She asked " Ammaji, didi yeh kaisa apshagun kar diya. Sagar married a widow girl". Sagar was furious but Niru asked him to stay quiet.

Then Ammaji replied " what apshaguni, you are apshaguni always bitching around. See the from the moment she entered, all happiness is back in family. In fact she is auspicious. " .

Madhvi realized that she needs to take a stand now, hence she added further " yes prabha, Gangaa is very auspicious for our house. And one thing more, I don't like outsider to comment on my family or any of its members. I hope I don't need to repeat that again.

Shocked Prabha understood, there was no point of waiting here and left Chatur's house. Sagar was happy to see his protective mom.

Madhvi asked SaGa not to visit their bedroom, as it had to be made ready for their first night. Gangaa was nervous, Sagar happy as both left for their respective work.I
Edited by njain16385 - 9 years ago

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