~' Together By Chance '~ ( Part XXVII ) page 23 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mad_lovee

Hi Bhoomi🙂,

Hows u ? I really like ur story...its quite diff from ur other stories:-)And u even fulfilled ur promise by mentioning name of my city:p.Post the next part soon...
all da v best:-)
tc
Himani

Hi Himani dear... am doign fine and hope the same with u .... haal chall to changa hai.. tauda mood kaisa hai bataoo?.. oh so u foudn this story different.. that feels good.... heheeh maine promise purri ki... pahunchaya na Delhi wale ko yehan Hero bananey...😆.. ab tum bhi yehan aa sakti ho....😉.. ok dear will post the next part cheti cheti theeik..hi na.. luv u ...

Originally posted by: binidoshi

Nice parts...poor asit....created a fictional gf...didn't think that he would at some point of time have to bring her out in pubic....let's see if he finds someone to play act the role....luking frwd to reading the next part....

Hi my dear Bini.. glad to know u felt the parts were nice... yup He is stupid Asit created a problem lol... haan buddhu raam hai.... hmm he must have thought who wil go into details.. later he can say.. ab kcuh nahi... ab dekho kya hojata hai in the next part... hope u like what the next part has in store for him.. luv u dear... tc
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part IV

Morning he got up and felt his head was heavy. His mobile rang and he picked up saying a tired long ' Hello!' the other side of the call was his friend who's birthday party he had attended last night. He told him how Asit was drunk and they had to put him in the car and drive and bring him to his apartment. He informed Asit how he kept saying, 'where is my girlfriend..' through out his drunken state. As Asit heard him say this, Asit felt tensed Did he spill out more? that all the talk of having a girlfriend was fictional? His friend continued that nothing can be a secret for long... He should make her meet them soon... after all he has become the headline of the newspaper. Asit just laughed taking it as a joke and went to get freshen up. As he came back the mobile had some 25 missed calls he wondered why suddenly so many people r calling, what all he did last night he banged his head thinking. He took the sip of the tea and took the newspaper in hand, reading the headline ;

'She is the lady love of Asit Bhasin, Queen of his heart'

He spilled the tea over with shock and the tea fell on the paper. He cleaned it and tried to read what and whom they are talking about? He read the article, which went like this.

'Asit Bhasin' the Television actor of a popular Saas Bahu serial who kept us all guessing about who is his lady love. Rumours had floored and linked him to his co-star Tanishka but with he clearing the matter and they both are having someone else in their lives. We do know about Tanishka going out with Ronny, but with Asit the mystery girl was not traceable.

We here, ur favourite news paper, can get to news which no one can. We followed Asit all the way and our reporters' cameras were on all the time when Asit was out shooting. When Asit told us that his girlfriend came to see him when he was shooting the scene in the film city of the fire broke out scene, we had that days pics with us of all the girls who came there. He mentioned his girlfriend was also present at the building jumping sequence, which was shot. We had that days shooting and pics of the girls who were present on that day as well. With the Goa trip to be the highlight as Asit himself mentioned he would be meeting her and had secret glances with her. We had the pics of each segment of the trip. After getting through all the pics and knowing the way Asit had described his girlfriend, we got to the lady who was present at all the locations and looks exactly the way Asit mentioned. She was in Goa, we got to know she lied to her parents and had gone to Goa as Asit himself had mentioned to us. She was standing at the shore and as the waves touched her feet… her life's hero, Asit was also standing besides her and smiling as the waves touched his feet as well…. His lady love her name is 'Kinnari Das', her scarf flew and touched his heart, Asit kept his hand on to his heart closing his eyes. We are sure they love each other. This is the exclusive pic of both of them we took at that time near the seashore. Don't they look so adorably romantic as a couple s?Aww

We would just say to the couple, they look like made for each other. Sharing their love life with the media will make us really happy.

We for our readers will bring the full love story of the couple soon. So keep reading this page for more.'

This headline and a huge two-page cover story on him made Asit get the shock of his life. He saw the huge picture of the girl and him standing close beside the seashore and the wave's touching their feet and they both were smiling, he tried to recollect and he remembered he had a break while shooting. He went towards the shore and as he saw the sunset, he felt beautiful. He looked at it and as he recollected the way, he wanted to bring Tanishka at such a place and propose her to marry him and give her the ring he kept with him always. He touched his shirt pocket to feel the ring, which was kept in the pocket. He had closed his eyes, as he knew everything was finished. He smiled as the waves touched his feet as if he had a healing touch from a friend to forget and not to be upset, Tanishka never didn't deserve his true love. He didn't even look at the girl standing next to him…

Asit wondered who this female Kinnari is. What she was doing at every location? He felt is she planted by someone? How all the things he mentioned just like that co-incidentally can be similar? Even her looks were matching. Later he realized might be she is one of his female fans who must have followed him to the locations and even to Goa to be with him. Asit felt he somehow has to meet her before anyone gets hold of the false story not only this but his side story which he had told to the world. He saw the TV news and got to know that the media people had arrived at Kinnari's residence, but were not allowed inside the gate by her family. He got to know by the TV news her residence location and immediately went to speak to her. As he went there and reached the building, Kinnari stayed on the 7th floor. The media waited down and Asit didn't answer their queries but straight went to her apartment.

Asit rang the bell and Kinnari opened the door and stood in front.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmmmmmmm..Intersting ... Is she realy plntd by someone or she is one girl who kept loving him silently? N now, situation bringing them togethr.. uff .. i want to knw .. try to make the parts a bit biggr Bhoomi plzzzzzzzzzzzz.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey bhoomi!!! that was really cool part........hehe......poor guy got to kno abt his gf after everybody got to kno..................hehehe............ dekho, kavva kaatliya...............kavva for his is the media........haha.... but seriously, thats how they create sensations.......half of them r just trash........ but i think this time they made some useful trash for Asif😆
hmm......... so kinnara is it?? will be waiting to kno wot shez doing in all his shoot locations..........and also in goa.........
and sori! i had to leave my last comment in the middle.........i had to go out.....but anyhow i guess it looked like comple one😆
bye!!
take care.......
Edited by rajeevskitu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nisisanjh

hmmmmmmm..Intersting ... Is she realy plntd by someone or she is one girl who kept loving him silently? N now, situation bringing them togethr.. uff .. i want to knw .. try to make the parts a bit biggr Bhoomi plzzzzzzzzzzzz.....

Hi sara dear,.... u found it itneresting...😉. hmmm ya in the next part whcih i will posting in just few sec u will know her side as well.... loving him silently ooo thats sounds so sweet na... u want to know.. i will ..and the longest part will be the VI part.. hope u like the story as it unfolds... lovely to get ur comments... am really wantin to know this story is worth reading or not..and each response on it is boost my confidence.. love u dear for doign that always.... hope u enjoy and dont get bored of it...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

hey bhoomi!!! that was really cool part........hehe......poor guy got to kno abt his gf after everybody got to kno..................hehehe............ dekho, kavva kaatliya...............kavva for his is the media........haha.... but seriously, thats how they create sensations.......half of them r just trash........ but i think this time they made some useful trash for Asif😆

hmm......... so kinnara is it?? will be waiting to kno wot shez doing in all his shoot locations..........and also in goa.........
and sori! i had to leave my last comment in the middle.........i had to go out.....but anyhow i guess it looked like comple one😆
bye!!
take care.......

Hi .. whats ur name ahh.. waise i love the way u reply with the colourful colours and the way u have the fun elemtn in it..kavva kaatliya.. thats was so very cute to read... aap mey bhi sense of humour bohat hai... 😉 media is one whcih can brign up their own thing , create is so true..they dont get us the news they try and create it themeselevs.... ..
I didnt knew u have editted.. heheh...achaa so busy hote huee bhi u r trygint o reply and give ur comment sin time..thats realy sweet of u...
will post next part soon.. tc
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part V

Kinnari looked at him and had an expression of ?Thank God U r here!?. She called him to come inside and soon called her father and told him, He can ask Asit Bhasin he is here; She doesn?t have an affair with him. His father replied saying if they r not having an affair why he had to come and personally meet? He is a Star, a very popular actor, we are middle class people. Why he had to come? He knows she must have called him to come and try and save her face. Kinnari kept pleading that she doesn?t know why the media people wrote like that. However, her father was in no mood to listen. He told her in a sharp rude tone to get out and live her life with the person she loves. Their love for her never mattered and now she is non existing for him. Kinnari?s mother felt bad for her daughter but she was silent as she couldn?t say anything.

Asit now understood that Kinnari?s father is really very upset. He tried to explain that Kinnari is not his girlfriend and his father immediately asked him than who is his girlfriend? Asit couldn?t answer it quickly and Kinnari?s father told him, he has no business to speak in his family matter. He would have never allowed him to enter his house but as Kinnari hasn?t left the house, the house is following things against his principles. He told him that he hates tv?s saas bahu actors who have no work but to entertain the viewers by stupid things which r nonsense and rubbish. He called him a bloody Idiot. Asit was taken aback, Kinnari tried to ask his father to believe her she is saying the truth she is not in love and that media is saying all wrong things.

His father asked her, ?U told me u are going to fill the MBA form, what were u doing at that fire broke scene in the film studio that day? U went to Film city right?? Kinnari told that she had just met her college gang and with them she went to see the shooting; later went to collect MBA form? her father continued, ?What about the building one.. why u went to HPCL colony? I told u to study for ur GMAT right.? Kinnari replied saying she just went to meet her friend who stays there but not to see the shooting to collect some books on GMAT preparations. His father with anger & frustration rudely screamed, ? I don?t allow u anywhere without my permission and u lie and tell me u r going to ur friends house and will study as she is alone and go all the way out of the city to Goa; to hang around with ur good for nothing Boyfriend.? Asit wondered what?s happening, he kept quietly listening as the anger in the eyes and voice of Kinnari?s father didn?t let him say a word. Kinnari cried saying she was tired all the time thinking about studies even after her exams were over. All her friends were going out to enjoy in Goa and she had gone just to be with them, in a day she was back, as they went and came back by flight. She took her pocket money and used for the trip. She asked for forgiveness that she did only this mistake which she will never repeat. She didn?t go to meet Asit and that she was just standing watching the sunset and feeling guilty that she had come to Goa without Dad?s permission and just kept thinking about Dad when the media took this pic she doesn?t even realize who was standing besides. She smiled playing with the waves that frequently came and touched her feet and she moved side ways but she really didn?t even have a glimpse of the person standing next to her.

Kinnari?s father did not hear anything and pushed her towards Asit. Kinnari felt very bad by this behaviour of her father. Asit got shocked as Kinnari?s father pushed both of them out of the house. Kinnari was upset now and looked back at her father, she told him,

What?s ur problem Dad? U never let me live my life. Never trust me. I have been an obedient daughter all the way. I have secured 1st rank through out my studies; took every step as and how u said, u wished. I loved to enjoy life but I never could. U wanted me to be as disciplined as u r. I tried everything. Before leaving Mumbai and going for studies aboard, I took a step said a lie, felt like enjoying with my friends. Why u don?t trust me. Why u believe the outside world? Why u hate me so much that u r pushing me out of the house? I am not ur daughter or what? I love u and respect u so much Dad , Don?t U?? her father slapped her and she was teary eyed but knew it had to come. He told her, ?Get out and I know u will come back on my door saying sorry. U have to go through hell to have disobeyed me. U have to pay for ur choice (he looked at Asit) I want u to suffer and come back saying Dad u always did the right. I will never go against u. U will suffer Kinnari??

Kinnari now had lost her cool wiped her tears she replied, ?No dad, I am not a child anymore. I tried honestly to do everything as u wanted it to be. Asked u forgiveness for this lie but I understood now.. u want to teach me a lesson in life? but not to wish well for me.. for ur ego satisfaction that U always did the right. Moreover, going against u in any small way will harm me? I lied to go for the Goa trip for the first time and asked forgiveness felt guilty but nothing else? as u assume it to be? I had enough I will now live as I want...and yes I wont come back to u... even if I go wrong ??. She looked at her mother who smiled with her words? that built up Kinnari?s confidence and she moved out...

Asit walked along with her? He said, ?We haven?t spoken? .Kinnari replied, ?Ya we have to? Asit said, ?Can u come with me to my place we should chat, the media has gone berserk?. Kinnari agreed and they both sat in the car with her handbag, media followed them and kept giving the breaking news on channels,

?Kinnari- the lady love of Asit had a show down with her parents?.

Asit and Kinnari reached his apartment. Both went inside and sat.

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Edited by bhoomikauttam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely parts bhoomi. This is a very interesting and totally a different story. Ur a amazing writer everytime u come up with a different story. U r the best bhoomi. Waiting for more post it soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh wow yaar... wht a twist u made in da story...I never thought he wud be linked with someone like this:p kya imagination hai tumhari...hats off to u miss writer;) post da next part soon...as i m dyin to know wht wud happen next...will he goin to make his gf in real or do drama in front of media or may be he wud reveal the truth dat he has no gf at present...i m so inquisitive to know all this:-)
cheti cheti post karo
all da best
muaah
Himani
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am really sorry bhoomi for late reply .
Again you make me speechless mindblowing story bhoomi after reading thease all parts i can say awesome , perfect , well writen bhoomi thx a lot for another fantastic story.

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