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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part II

Tanishka got an offer for a big budget Hindi film under a huge banner. She wanted to quit the television show. Asit was happy for her but he really missed her. The audience were crying and asking her not to leave the show. While Tanishka galore in the glory of her fan following and was sure the serial will go nowhere without her. As she felt it was only SHE who made it so popular. Her brilliance only worked; nothing else in the show worked. There was a change in the script where the male lead in the serial goes behind bars for killing his wife. As the woman killed suddenly gets a stepsister, she fits in to bail him out and a new face was launched to play Seema proving in the court it was a plastic surgery. The same repeated romantic scenes, which earlier happened were put by the writers. The writers took those old scripts out, again Asit had to do the same, getting drunk in the serial and romancing the new face. Another 50 episodes had to go showing the repetition of all the same romantic scenes and the same fights between the Saas and Bahu.

In the mean time, it was written about Tanishka that she was going out with the son of the producer of her film. A big shot businessman, son of a big producer of this time, the print media went overboard with this news. Asit tried to meet her often but she ignored and avoided him, not to be associated with him or be seen with him ever. Slowly and gradually, Asit understood the way Tanishka had just used him. Asit finally met her, they had a confrontation and she without mincing any words, clearly told him. He was just a small time struggling TV actor of a typical Saas bahu serial who stands behind the Bahu and Saas to just be a furniture piece in the serial. Why will she want to marry him? She is intelligent enough to find and make a better choice in life. Soon her film?s producer?s son, Ronny came and flirted with Tanishka in front of Asit. Asit was totally broken to see Tanishka giggling and encouraging him and his intentions. He went from there and knew what a big mistake he did by loving a woman like her who just loves her ambition.

Soon this meeting was written about in the print media and Tanishka was more than happy giving interviews to every new channel that how pity she feels for Asit and the way the TRPs of the serial she worked in is not doing well so they have started resorting to these things for publicity. She even laughed at the thought that Asit and she in love? ?No way! Someone in love with him?? She laughed weirdly saying it. Asit saw the interview and was teary eyed and angry. He was teary eyed with the fact that how could he love her from the past so many months. Now when he use to look at her , he wondered he didn?t felt a bit that she was beautiful at all. The reporters came to get his side and he was caught in a fix about what he can say, he wondered if he honestly admits the actual story Tanishka will blow it up and get more sympathy for herself. Ronny as well can make things go terribly bad for him. He wanted to reply with some spice but making himself look strong not getting pity from anyone. He said, he just met her to wish good luck and when questioned about love, he had the laughter of Tanishka in front of his eyes? Someone in love with him? She had laughed saying this? he recollected

He replied? ?OH ya.. I am in love and the lady in question is a secret for u all. She wants to stay away from the media limelight. She is sweet, preety, intelligent and doesn?t want to hog the limelight like many others desperately do (hinting at Tanishka). I feel I have done some good karma in my life to have met such a warm person.? He said this to prove her he can be loved too. When questioned Is she from the media line? Asit replied, ? No she isn?t, media line is so confusing u never know whom to trust , especially the way rumour mills go u r linked to the least person u like; and u cant do anything about it.? Asit?s heart had pain and anger saying these lines but he felt happy of giving something back to Tanishka.

Tanishka saw the interview and she was shocked. She suddenly felt strange, ?Does he really has someone in his life? So soon?? she wondered. The interview Asit gave said so much and so intelligently. She was disturbed by those intelligent answers. She couldn?t say anything which could spill her real side especially to Ronny.

Now with this news the serial, ??Kamaal hai Saas Bahu ki Khichdi? Trps started improving. Suddenly a lot of focus was on Asit and he got a bigger footage of dialogues too. Asit now enjoyed his newfound popularity. At the same time the reporters had a new challenge to find the secret lover of Asit. Asit didn?t even knew they were hogging everywhere he went, to get the detail of that lucky woman in his life.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi bhoomi!!! welcome back🤗...........missed ur ffs a lottttttUnhappy.......... i'm so happy when u started this new one......nice concept as usualThumbs%20Up........ sori i cudn't comment b4Ermm................
"Kamaal hai Saas Bahu ki Khichdi"????😆😆....... hehehe that was awesomeeee............ but seriously, the men in te soaps r real waste....... it's only abt the girl and how mahan she isConfused...... hmm...... now don't tell me, a girl comes fwd saying that shez his gf and now he can't deny in front of the media.......hehe...... plz spare with my stupid predictions........ will be waiting to kno wot happens next....
plz continue soon.........
will be waiting for the next part......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

hi bhoomi!!! welcome back🤗...........missed ur ffs a lottttttUnhappy.......... i'm so happy when u started this new one......nice concept as usualThumbs%20Up........ sori i cudn't comment b4Ermm................

"Kamaal hai Saas Bahu ki Khichdi"????😆😆....... hehehe that was awesomeeee............ but seriously, the men in te soaps r real waste....... it's only abt the girl and how mahan she isConfused...... hmm...... now don't tell me, a girl comes fwd saying that shez his gf and now he can't deny in front of the media.......hehe...... plz spare with my stupid predictions........ will be waiting to kno wot happens next....
plz continue soon.........
will be waiting for the next part......

Hi... aww I never knew there were so many who were actually waiting fro my next ff so eagerly.. it feels so nice that u all like reading my ff.... hey sorri worri nahi bolneka....😀 So u liked the concept... 😆I was wanting to write this one.... Serial ka naam to aisa hi hona tha na😉..
Yup the concept does take the reality fact many such men on saas bahu sagas r present and take footage mostly in romancitc scenes.. or else.. they dont have an existence when teh core issues r raised....
Ur prediction seems so good... I likereading such..it make me know hwo my imagination goes and how people can also visualise with the story... nice one .. "a girl comes fwd saying that shez his gf and now he can't deny in front of the media." wow!! will such a thing happen or not... the next parts will reveil a little bit.. ok....
Will post the next part tomorrow... hope the waitign is not too long.....😉tc
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Bhoomi ..If I say i m not feeling gud at all u wont mind na? it's just that whn i read the last portn of 1st part I felt i m reading a reality , not any story ... kuch baatein itni jani pehchani lagi ....but the 2nd part was a big relife... now looking like a story n Bhoomi's story ... ekdam hatke n dhamakedar....lets C ...what happns next.. Writing wise , u r briliant like always... n yea, surely missing ur fab shayries ....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Bhoomi ..If I say i m not feeling gud at all u wont mind na? it's just that whn i read the last portn of 1st part I felt i m reading a reality , not any story ... kuch baatein itni jani pehchani lagi ....but the 2nd part was a big relife... now looking like a story n Bhoomi's story ... ekdam hatke n dhamakedar....lets C ...what happns next.. Writing wise , u r briliant like always... n yea, surely missing ur fab shayries ....

Hi Sara dear..... Ya I can understnad what u r saying.. heheeh I was wonderign that u al will be surely a bit moved that oh a story or an headache with a concept like this...but glad the second part gave u a needed relief... hope u get a feel good abotu the story and teh rest of teh turn of events in the story....
U r missign my poems... aww... but it surely feels good to know they use to have some impact ...😀 oyee main brilliant 🥰meri friend to maha jabardast..maine to unkey sikhaye raste se chal rahi hun😉

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Awesome parts. cont soon

Ho glu dear.. feels nice u liked the parts.... will post next one soon..for sure...🙂
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part III

With the Trps improving, the serial's producer and director thought of bringing in some more novelty to the making, create some more sensation to save the Trps dropping after the female lead left the show. The press was behind Asit taking his quotes on who and how is his girlfriend!

Once at a shoot, Asit was sitting as the set was getting ready where a fire brokes out and Asit dives in to save the female actor for a scene. As he was sitting and the press came to write about the scene and took his footage interview on it. They asked him how does his girlfriend looks? After continuous questions from them and his co-artist insisting to answer, Asit started to say whatever came in his mind. He said the girl is a bit short height and looks cute. "She is pretty her features r sharp and beautiful but no usage of loads of makeup. She is not fair but wheatish in colour. Her eyes aren't deep bluish but brown which has calmness in them pointing everything contrasting to Tanishka. My eyes feel she is the most beautiful person." The news channels started showing and guessing how his girlfriend must be looking. With no news to sell and everything seeming to be calm around the city, they found this to be breaking news on channels. He was known as Asit now on the channels and his popularity was increasing.

After few weeks, now his co-actors felt strange that there is a girl or he lied as he never got a call from her nor any girl came to meet him, Anything that may hint about his girlfriend. Even the news channel reporters also started feeling strange. After such questions put to him, he tried to save his image saying, his girlfriend did come recently to meet him when he was shooting for a building-jumping scene to nab the culprit in his serial and even when the fire scene was shot she was present at the shooting. She was scared how that days shooting would take place. She doesn't like to disturb him in his work and the continuous media hog around him has made her to stay away from him. He did say he wants to take a break, go to Goa, and spend some quality time with her. But he is busy with his work.

After getting to know this the director of the serial jumped with the idea to do a romantic scene in Goa. Asit was in a fix, from where will he bring up his girlfriend now. He didn?t say anything and went to complete his shooting in Goa. At Goa he had a great time shooting the scenes, as it was after an year that some outdoor shoots took place or else every scene was indoor; shooting behind the kitchen doors or bedroom door. He completely forgot he had told in an interview that he is going to meet his girlfriend and be with her in Goa. When at the last day of the shoot the news channels quizzed him about the absence of his girlfriend. He replied that she came but they both just looked at each other didn?t party together. As she had not informed her parents that she was with me. Her parents believe she was at some other place. We loved the secret glances we gave each other.. he said.

That night Asit sat in his car and as he was reaching Mumbai he felt somehow he has to show his girlfriend or somehow just make an end to this lie story. This was been far too stretched. He wondered there is no woman in his life at this point of time. All whom he knows would easily flaunt their arms around him, should he ask them out, just a flirt attempt? He was confused he is becoming what he doesn't want to. A person who loved commitment suddenly was wondering to be in a time pass relationship just for time being. He went to the birthday party thrown by a fellow co-actor and kept looking at the females in the party thinking which one to decide to be called his girlfriend just for some time at least to save his image.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow!! another nice part from u👏🏻....................so now Asit is in trouble😆......... i hope he "finds" his gf soon....poor guy has to keep up his image........hmm......i think now finding a girl with exactly his description is difficult........ isileye mummy, paapa kehte hai ki jooth nahi boleka😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

wow!! another nice part from u👏🏻....................so now Asit is in trouble😆......... i hope he "finds" his gf soon....poor guy has to keep up his image........hmm......i think now finding a girl with exactly his description is difficult........ isileye mummy, paapa kehte hai ki jooth nahi boleka😉

Hi ... am so glad u liked this part as well... Asit is in trouble.. now lets see whether he comes out of it soon or not.. Finds ehheeh in the next part lets hope he does.... 😉 but then difficult to bohat hai...😆
U r so very right. Mummy pappa kitna samhatey hai.. lekin dekho Jhutt kaha.. ab kawaa katega...Ouch😆😉.. feels nice to get ur comments.. tc
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Bhoomi🙂,

Hows u ? I really like ur story...its quite diff from ur other stories:-)And u even fulfilled ur promise by mentioning name of my city:p.Post the next part soon...
all da v best:-)
tc
Himani
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice parts...poor asit....created a fictional gf...didn't think that he would at some point of time have to bring her out in pubic....let's see if he finds someone to play act the role....luking frwd to reading the next part....

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