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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow...i loved it kajal...plz continue soon....cnt w8 to read the next part 👏 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanks so much for ur feedback! i will try and continue soon 😊
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Rano hears there coversation and enters the room with her evil smile. [}:)]

Rano: Finally, disha u got some sense in you and now you know what's best for you.

She leaves all satisfied.

Suhas: dun't mind her. the quetion is where you will live?

Disha: i will find a place somewhere. i checked out an aparment on rent that is 15 minutes from here.

Suhas: Well if u like it i suppose you can move there.

Disha: i talked to the landlord lady and she said i can move in whenever i want. i already paid her. i was thinking about moving tomorrow.

Suhas: let me see if it is a good muhrat for you to move there tomorrow.

Disha: okaii, sure.

No one knows her plan about moving out besides Rano and Suhas.

Rano decides to tell Sanya and Sukanya. They are jumping with joy!

Sanya: i wonder why she's moving?

Sukanya: who cares as long as she moves.

Guatam overhears their conversation.

G: Who is moving?

Rano: Disha is and thank goodness!

G: mind ur tongue. who said she was moving?

Rano: disha did herself.

Guatum goes to disha's room and confronts her.

Disha: who told you?

G: Rano did and why are you moving?

Disha: i just wanna be in a different atmosphere.

G: that's all fine but have u thought of abuja and how he will react.

D: i will talk to him.

Next Day:

Disha goes into Ajuba with the aarti plate.

Ajuba: Arre beta, tum?

Disha: here have some prasad.

Ajuba: how are you feeling?

Disha:i am fine but u need to take cre of yourself. i was thinking about moving out.

Ajuba is totally shocked.

Ajuba: WHAT!?

Disha: dun't take it the wrong way! it's just that maybe a change in atmosphere would be good for me. that's what the doctor said so i....

Ajuba: if it concerns your health then i can't say no. when r u moving?

disha: todaii.

Ajuba: but u have to promise to visit and call us. dun't forget us.

Sagiel House:

Mahika knows dk still thinks about disha.

So she decides to wear sarees and try to be like disha in hope that he will start to love her as well.

Dk: what are you wearing? change it now

Mahika: Why you dun't like it?

Dk: No and plz dun't try to be like disha or i will hate you too.

Mahika changes into regular clothes.

Mahika: let's go out for dinner.

Dk: i have too much work today.

Mahika: we never go out for dinner. plz!!

Dk: fine we will go but let me finish this first.

Disha's House: (new one)

Disha: thank you so much for letting me stay here.

Landlord's name is Pooja.

Pooja: no problem! this place is a little filthy so u will have to clean it up but other than that there is nothing wrong with it. tell me if u need anything.

Well, disha is standing in the middle of the apartment with her luggage thinks about what she is going to do.

After 6 hours of hardwork she finally settles in with everything all set right.

In her bedroom she put upbaby pics and now she cooked her dinner as well. She feels very lonely so she calls her Aai.

Vedant's House:

Pori: let's go out for dinner.

V: why?

Pori: come on! plz ur mood will also get better.

Vedant finally agrees and they leave for the resturant.

Meanwhile so did Mahika and Dk. Aroah is with the neighbor.

Incidently, they all are the same resturant but dun't know that.

When they get up to leave they all bump into one another and dk is shocked to see pori.

For the next 2 months they dun't see ech other again.

The Bhousle house is the same too and like just goesn on for the next two months.

After 2 Months:

Disha still has morning sickness. One day while she was trowing up Pooja came in. No one was there so she looked inside.

P: Disha? Disha?

disha was too busy throwing up to say hi or anything else.

Pooja walks in and sees hers throwing up. (bathroom door was open.)

P: are u alright?

Disha: yeah i am fine. i just dun't feel good.

P: r u pregant?

Disha: yeah

P: omgg congrats. where is your husband?

Disha decides to tell her everything and i mean everything. She left nothing out cause all this was buried inside. and soon as 1 thing came out so did the rest. she couldn't stop. It also felt good to talk to someone.

They talk late into the night and pooja becomes disha's best friend and support. She tells her everything and pooja takes extra good care of her.

Vedant's House:

Vedant thinks disha and dk are married cause he was at the hospital when the marriage was on.

Pori: Let's have a drink!

VEdant: Yeah, let's have one.

But instead of one they each have like 4 pegs! Pori realizes she has him all to herself and seduces him.

Next morning:

Vedant: What happened?

Pori: We got drunk and went to sleep.

Vedant: Together?!

Pori: yeah y?

Vedant: i dun't love you.

Pori: Well i do!

they talk about that and he finally accepts Porineeta.

Bhousle House:

Rano: I am going out! bye

Suhas: okaii when will u be baq?

Rano: When i want to come baq!

Sanya's delievery date is about 3 weeks away!

She is really big.

Sanya: Guatam, dun't you think Rano needs manners. i mean look at the way she talks to Suhas Aunty.

G: But what can we do?

Vedant's House:

Vedant: i know a man in dk's office who owes me a favor.

Pori: Who?

Vedant: His name is Vivek. He is going to help me destory dk. He is going to morage Kanaka in the market. He is very close to dk and he owes me a favor.

Pori: What if he says no?

Vedant: He won't unless if he wants to go to jail. And if he's caught he will go to jail or else i will kill his family.

Pori: You are too good, Vedant. Too good.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
that was awesome please carry on with the hard work Kajal n Tanya
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Posted: 20 years ago
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yea...plz, 1 of u continue soon...w8in to read the nxt bit 😉 👏 😃
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At Pub:

Vedant: i want u to do a very important job for me!

Vivek: What is it? i am willing to do anything for you eversince you saved my neck from the police.

Vedant: i want you to somehow mortage Kanaka without dk knowing you did anything.

Vivek: but how can i do that? nothing passes dk's nazer!

Vedant: i don't care how you do, when you do it, and where you do it! all i care about that it is done.

Vivek: okaii i will try my best.

Vedant: i dun't want you to try, i want it done. got it? or you won't have a family to work for!

Vivek: Ji, saab.

Disha's House:

The doorbell rang. Disha hasn't seen her family for a month but only called because she was afriad they would find out.

It's Suhas at the door. Disha opens it and is shocked to see her. Thank goodness it's only her 4th month cause she isn't showing that much. It only looks like she gained weight.

Suhas: hi

Disha:come in

Suhas: You didn't come to see us so i came to make sure you are alright.

Disha: i am fine. i just was busy with office work.

She works cause she gotta pay rent but pooja doesn't mind here not paying. Disha insisted in paying her since she let her stay there and is taking care of her.

Suhas: If you need money u can always ask us u know

Disha: i work because i am bored at home so dun't worry about me working.

Suhas: So how are you?

Disha: i am fine.

Suhas: did u try to find out who killed dk?

Disha: i am trying to work on that.

Suhas:all u need to prove to him is that you were in jail that time. that's all

Disha: i am going to visit the police station later on.

Suhas: You look like you gained weight.

Disha: Pooja cooks good food, no wonder it looks like i gained weight.

Suhas: then i think i will have to stay one day for dinner. Well i go to go cause if rano finds out i am here god knows what she'll do.

Disha: Bye then.

Disha decides to go to the police station.


i gtg! sry if this is two short, i will continue later today
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thank you soooooooooooooooo much for ur comments!😊

Edited by Kajal741 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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kajal you fanfaction is so good i am getting more intrested in it

can't wait for the next part 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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same here...i cant wait 4 the next part, w8in to read it 😛 ur fanfiction seriously is, very good...but please dnt fastforward it too much, like 1 year l8a...its kinda ruins it... 😛 ,

keep it cummin .... 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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kajal u are wonderful keep up the good work 😛

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