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Posted: 20 years ago
#21
that was good!!!! please cont soon!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#22
awesome job ! 😊 plz cont. soon 😃

Canada gal 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#23
well, i couldn't stop myself from continuing! hope u enjoy this episode!

Disha pays a visit to the police station and sees the havaldar who helped Kanchan with her case.

Havaldar is a man and respects disha a lot.

H: Namaste, Disha madam.

Disha: hi! how are you?

H: i am fine! how are you?

Disha: i need your help, please.

H: how is this possible? u ask for help and i don't give it to you. i can help you in anyway, just tell me.

Disha tells him all about Dk's murder and how he accused her.

H: How is this poosible? You were in jail that time, weren't you.

Disha: the problem is that he doesn't belive me. can you tell him i was in jail the time he was almost murdered.

H: you don't even have to ask.

Disha: i was wondering if we could go to his house today and tell him.

They go to Sagiel House and knock on the door.

The servent opens it and tells them to come in.

Dk: Why did you come here?

Disha: Just give me one chance to prove my innocence and if you still don't believe me then i will never bother you again.

Mahika comes out.

Mahika: Tum? Why are you here? NO one wants to talk to you. Get lost or i will call the police.

Disha: MInd your own business. I am talking to Dk not you so you can be quiet.

Dk:DISHA!!! 😡 Don't talk to her like that! you mind your tongue.

Disha: Fine! Be like that! The havaldar will tell you the truth. And i have one question to ask you, when were you almost murdered?

Dk: You should know, you tried to kill me and if your memory got impaired then i will tell you. It was around August 7th

H: But that was when disha was in jail and she went to court.

Dk: How much did she pay you? You are lying because why would disha go to court?

Rano makes an entry!

Rano: Because she is a murderer. She killed my husband. I hate you, disha and now dk will know the truth about you.

Disha: How did you know i was here?

Rano: i followed you today because i thought you were going out with MY mom.

Disha: Well, i wasn't!

Mahika is getting nervous since she thinks Dk is getting convinced.

Dk: Let me get this striaght. Disha went to court on the 8th and was in jail before that.

H: Ji, saab. That is the truth.

Disha: i have been trying to tell you this along.

Mahika: What are you talking about? Disha, you can give up because none of your lies will be believed this time. Dk said he loves me and only me!

Disha: WHAT?!

She faints!

The havaldar catches her and dk helps him put her on the sofa. They call the doctor and he comes shortly.

Doctor:Who is her husband or relative?

Dk: I am!

Mahika is shocked!

Doctor:She is in a state of shock and i have given her medication. Would you pick up these medicines, please?

Dk: Yes,doctor

Doctor: Please take care of her since this could affect her baby!

Everyone is shocked!!!! Rano is in a fit of anger and Mahika is like who cares, let her die. Dk is just remembering that one night stand.

Dk: Thank-you!

He carries her to her old bedroom and lays her on the bed.

Rano(thinking to herself): I lost my baby and husband because of that witch but she has everything. Why are you being unfair to me, God?

Rano leaves.

H:Dk, saab.

Dk: Yes?

H: Do you believe disha? i swear upon my two kids she was in jail that time!

Dk: Then who shoot me? She looked just like disha! Her hair, clothes, body, face, you name it.

H: You and Disha need to find the answer together. i'll be going now that i know disha maam is in safe hands.

Dk: okay.

Mahika: You don't actually belive them, do u?

Dk: I don't know! just leave me alone for now. i need to think about it.

Mahika leaves and goes in her room. She is very upset.

Dk stays up the whole night thinking about what he was just told and when he was almost murdered. He didn't know what to believe. Whenever he thought disha was lying the havaldar's words periced in his ears. In the end, he decided that Disha is telling the truth and he still loves her very much!

Dk(to himself):But what about Mahika? She thinks i love her! i will talk to disha about this.


Wait till tonight to read the rest! i gotta of it first! LOL 😆 😆 😆


Edited by Kajal741 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24
hey great story!!!
its really intresting!!
cont soon please!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
great work 👏 👏 👏
keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
back to work with this fanfiction! i am warning you this may be really long so u might want to get comfortable.


Sagiel House:

It is 7 in the morning and Dk decides to stay home and sort out this mess. Disha still hasn't regained conciousness.

Dk: I am not going to work today.

Mahika: Why noot? i hope it isn't because of this stupid disha!

Dk: As a matter of fact, it is because of her. Mahika, you have to understand. she is my wife and my first love!

Mahika: So you don't love me at all?

Dk: No, i don't.

Mahika: Then why did you play with my emotions! i loved you so much but u made a fool out of me.

Dk: No i didn't. I only said i love you because you kept on saying childish things like sucide.

Mahika: Well, if that's the case then i don't want to have anything to do with you. I want to go away from here with my son and never want to see your face again.

Aroah: What happened, papa?

Dk: Nothing, beta. Go in your room.

Mahika: Don't you dare talk to my son!

She picks up a knife from the kitchen table and points it at Dk.

Dk: Don't be mad! Put the knife down.

He grabs the knife from her and locks her in her bedroom.

He immediately calls a phyciatrist and tells him how erratic Mahika is acting. He comes over and declares she has turned insane! The mental aslym people come and pick her up in an hour.

Mahika: LET GO OF ME!!! NOOOOOOOOO!

That's the ends of Mahika. 😊 (i know thats mean but what could i do. she was annoying)

Dk goes upstairs and checks up on Disha. He kisses her on the forehead. She starts to open her eyes. YOu can tell she is about to cry.

Disha sits up and looks at dk. (tears are streaming down her eyes.)

Dk: How are you feeling?

Disha: You should be asking your darling Mahika the same question! I never imagined you would change soo much. Leave me alone.

Dk:Disha.....

Disha gets up and wallks downstairs while Dk is following her.

Dk: Meri baat tao sono!

Disha: i don't want to listen to anything. Let me go!

She runs out of the house and gets a rickshaw to go home.

Dk is left there standing infront of his gigantic house. He is crying and so is disha.

At Vedant House:

Pori and Vedant are romancing around the house while bad-mouthing Dk and Disha.

He calls up Vivek and finds out Dk isn't in. He gives him a deadline that the job better be done by next saturday!

Bhousle House:

Rano has locked herself in her bedroom ever since she got baq from dk's house. Suhas is worried sick and this stupid girl doesn't care.

Suhas: Beta, opoen the door!

Rano: No, i won't

Suhas: meri kasam! u have to

She opens the door and her eyes are all red and puffy since she cried all night long.

She hugs her mother and starts to cry 😭 😭 .

She blurts out everthing. Suhas is shocked to hear this and is a little upset Disha kept this a secret!

Rano: i lost everything i had including my suhag and baby but disha got everything and took everything away from me.


i am going to watch a movie right now so i am going to write another episode tonight. keep the comments coming!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#27
hey Kajal great job 👏 👏 👏

Yaar u dared to kick that looney from the story hats off to u.Mahika sent to mental asylum yaar is it GIMHANS or what dear 😆

keep up the good work
Tanya u too did a great job hope u will join with kajal n u both write the fan fiction together 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
thanks soo much! well hope you enjoy this one! 😆


Still At Bhousle House:

Suhas: it is okay, relax! you should go take a nap since you didn't sleep at all last night!

Suhas decides to visit Disha and find out the truth about her pregancy

Disha's House

Suhas: Disha, why didn't you tell me you were pregant? Why, Disha? I thought you trusted me!

Disha: Aai, i hid the fact i was pregant because i didn't want to worry you. You already have Rano to worry about!

Suhas: So what? i just shiver when i start thinking about your health. And you were working in this condidtion?

Disha: My health is fine and i pooja made me quit work when she found out i was pregant. Don't worry! Pooja takes good care of me. By the way, who told you i was pregant?

Suhas: Rano did.

She goes into the explaination of what Rano said. Disha is not surprised.

Suhas cooks lunch for both of them and makes sure she eats. After that she leaves.

Disha just sits down because she is tired. Her cell rings and it is Dk. She rejects the call.

Disha(to herself): i am sooo stupid thinking you would embrace me and we would be together again. Dk doesn't love me anymore. He loves Mahika and why shouldn't he? She's the one who took care of him.

Dk tries to call her all day but to no avail. Disha tries to forget about him but she can't. He finally goes to the Bhousle house.

Suhas: Tum? Why did you come here? Do you have anything mean to say to her still after you left her in the pandap?

Dk: Please let me see her! I realized my mistake and i want to ask her for forgiveness. Please!

Suhas: She doesn't live here anymore. She moved away. Wait i will give you the address.

He gets the address and goes to her house. Disha opens the door but soon as she she sees his face she closes the door. Well, our dk doesn't give up that easily. He yells from outside.

Dk: I love you,disha. Until you open the door i will stay out here. That's a promise.

Pooja hears this as she is passing by!

Pooja: Who are you? And why are you screaming?

Dk: i am disha's husband and she won't open the door. pleasse try to tell her to open the door!

Pooja: Okay, i will try.(knocks)Disha, open the door!

Disha opens the door and tells them to leave her alone.
Dejectedly, Dk goes home.

Next Day:

Dk can't avoid going to the office.

Aroah: Papa, where's mommy?

Dk: She won't be here for a few days, beta. But don't worry u have me.

He drops him off to school and goes to the office.

Vivek: Sir, i needed you to sign the papers for the Kapoor deal. Sir?

Dk: Huh? What happened?

He was thinking about disha the whole time. He couldn't take his mind off her since yesterday.

Vivek: i need your signature for the Kapoor deal.

Well, Dk saab signed without reading it or questioning it since he trusted Vivek so much. He wasn't also paying attention to those kinds of petty matters.

Vivek walks out smiling with the signatures. The papers weren't part of the Kapoor deal but the one he had with Vedant. He calls up Vedant.

Vivek: Your work is done.

Vedant: Good job!

Now the company and house is on mortage in the market. Vedant and Pori celebrate all night long.

Sagiel House:

Dk comes home early to find Mahika's brother waiting at his house.

Dk: Who are you?

B: i am Mahika's brother. i heard she was sent to the mental aslym. i know who tried to murder you but kept queit because Mahika made me swear not to. She said if she did she would commit sucide.

Dk: Who tried to murder me? Mahika knew?

B: Yeah, she knew and she was afriad she would lose you so she made me swear. I have everything on tape!

Dk: i want to see it now.

THey both sit down on the sofa and watch both tapes.

Dk: Porineeta wore disha's mask?! Omg, i said so many awful things to disha. God forgive me.

B: I wasn't your fault. I am so sorry but i couldn't tell.

Dk: It's okay. I understand. Thank-you so much!

He felt a surge of anger toward Mahika and Porineeta.

B: i need to go but call me if you ever need me.

Heleaves and so does Dk. Dk goes to Disha's house and knocks on it. She doesn't open it so he breaks it dowm.

Disha: Get out. I don't want to talk to you.

Dk pulls her toward him and holds her hands super tight.

Dk: Today you will have to listen to me. I have loved you and only you. i only told Mahika i loved her because she said she would commit sucide if i didn't. Her father left her in my responsiblity.

Disha: WHAT?! Where is she now?

Dk: She is in a mental aslym. Please come back to me now.

Disha: I am sooo sorry. I have been awful, haven't I? I love you!

They hug each other and Dk kisses her on her forehead. 😳 😳 😳

They are on there way to Sagiel House but Dk told the driver to stop at the temple.

Disha: What now?

Dk: We still have to get married.

Disha: You are kidding right?

Dk: No i am not. let's go.

They get married but it is kind of difficult for disha because of her stomach.

They are finally married and they go to Sagiel House.

Aroah: Chocolate Aunty!

Disha: Aroah, what are you doing?

Aroah: Nothing playing....i missed you, papa. i am sleepy. can you put me to sleep, aunty?

He pulls Disha to his room by her pinky finger.

Disha puts him to sleep while Dk is by his mom's picture.

i am way too tired to continue! 🥱 but i will try later tonight! 😊


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Posted: 20 years ago
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GREAT PART!!
CONT SOON!! 👏 👏
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Dk is infront of his mother's portriat.

Dk: Ma, todaii i got everything i would have ever wanted. i ahve a roof over my head, money, and the best wife in the world!

He walks back to his room and disha joins him on the way.

Disha: i am soo tired. All i want to do right now is go to sleep.

Dk: i can't believe we are going to be parents.

Disha is sitting up while Dk has his head in her lap.

Disha: i can't believe we are going to be parent either.

Dk: I want a girl!

Disha: I want a boy!

Dk: No girls are better!

Disha: Why?

DK: Because they are so sweet and innocent.

Disha:i agree actually! i mean boys are sometimes mean and naughty.

Dk: i don't care if it's a girl or a boy but i want it to have a personality like yours, disha.

Disha: I wish the baby has your looks, though.

Dk: Tomorrow i don't want you to work at all. i mean it. i will make Krishna(servant) give me a full report so rest.

Disha: Arre Dk! Nothing will happen to me.

They both go to sleep in each other's arms. Disha stomach pops up cause it actually shows since it is her 5th month.

Next Day:

Vedant's House:

Pori: So many people are giving us offers!

Vedant: i already chose the buyer. His name is Jatin.
He is giving us 5 cores for the company and 3 cores for their house.

Pori: I can't wait till they find out their house and company will be sold soon.

They both crack up!

Sagiel House:

Dk is up and is laying on the bed next to disha. Disha is fast asleep next him.

Dk kisses her forehead, then her right cheek, then her left cheek, and finally her lips!

Disha opens her eyes slowly.

Disha: Don't you have to go to work!

Dk: I own the place and can go whenever I want.

Disha: Good, then you can come to Aai's house with me.

Dk: Sure, sweetheart. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Bhousle House:

Rano: I swear i will ruin Disha and her husband.

Suhas: You will do no such thing to her. Let me ask you a question. Why would Disha ever kill Inder? Give one good reason and i will sweaar i won't talk to Disha ever again.

Suhas leaves and Rano is left thinking for the answer.

Sanya had her child three days ago. She had a healthy baby boy.

Dk and Disha come to their house.

Suhas: You guys finally show up! How are you?

Dk and Disha:(together) fine!

Suhas:You guys got married?

She saw Disha's maag which was filled with sindoor.

Disha:Ji,aai. We couldn't stop ourselves.

Sanya makes an entry, she's holding her baby boy.

Disha: How are you, Sanya?

Sanya: I am fine. How are you?

Dk get uncomfortable cause he remembers his past but he hides his feelings.

Sanya sits down next to Suhas.

Suhas: The naming ceremony is tomorrow. Please try to come.

Disha: We will be here tomorrow.

Sukanya comes along.

Sukanya: Hi disha. LOng time no see.

Disha: I have been busy.

Sanya: Disha, are you pregant?

Disha: Yes!

Sanya: You can tell cause your stomach is getting rounder.

Sukanya: Yeah well some people are shameless when they get pregant before marriage.

Dk:Let's go, disha. I don't wanna stay here anymore.

They leave. Suhas blasts at Sukanya for making her regular comments. 😡 They come back and see Aroah sitting on the sofa, bored.

Dk: i need to go to the office to make sure everything is running smoothly.

Disha: Okay! Try to come back early.

Dk: I will try! Bye.

Disha: bye

they hug and disha gives him a kiss on each of his cheeks. 😳

Disha: Aroah,you want to come with me to visit my friend.

Aroah: Can I have a chocolate first?

Disha: of course you can.

She gives him a chocolate from behind her back. They both leave for pooja's house.


I will continue tomorrow. hope you enjoyed this one as you enjoyed the others, plz keep commenting!

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