FF-Estranged Love FINALE page 17 30/08/08

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 17 years ago

Concept-Two friends that were from complete opposite paths in life. They were enemies more than friends more like class frenemies. Bot had nobody. No family well Ranbir didn't know who his parents were. Kanya didn't get on with hers. Always hatd each other and showing the other one they are superior but come to meet one fateful night and their world changes in no time. They both decide to help the other find their love and make them fall for the other.

Pages for Parts 1=2, 2=3, 3=4, 4=5

These R the links to my other FF

1.Love in a twist https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/949923/ff-love-in-a-twist-part-17-pg-13-new-7-8

2.Soulmate https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/927948/ff-soulmate-finale-page-27-29-07-08

3.Back to the Nandas https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=930084&T PN=1

4.Accidental Marriage https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/953250/ff-accidental-marriage-finale-p36-29-08

5.Hate to love U https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/922724/ff-hate-2-luv-u-finale-pg27-28-7-08-updat

6'Luv U Hamesha https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kyunki-saas-bhi-kabhi-bahu-thi/1027948/ff-luv-u-hamesha-pt-18-page-33-7-11-08-ekt New on Eklavya + Ranbir

Edited by matwamango - 16 years ago

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Zara

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Posted: 17 years ago

sounds amazing!!!! CONT NOW!! 😆 its a very interesting concept and idea so good luck!!

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

I'm busy writing for my other 5 FF'S one of which i am ending pretty soon. Its very popular Back to the Nandas. Theres only another 5/10 updates left depending on how soon i can tie up all the loose ends.

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dilgone4u

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Posted: 17 years ago

sounds exciting better update fast.........

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salma

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Posted: 17 years ago

rahima io love all ur ff's im sure this one will be a killer toooo!

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-Diya-

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Posted: 17 years ago

very good....update soon.... 😳

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Kiran

@Kiran_1

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Posted: 17 years ago

Sounds gr8
I'm sure like all your other ffs this one will be awesome as well
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooooon

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rajkin

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Posted: 17 years ago

i am very interested in readin ur ff. in fact i have just stareted reading back to the nandas. great that you have started this new one. Feels nice to read it while its being written cos i will not miss the excitement generated for the next update. So plssssss continue soon.

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sonia

@miss.sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago

sounds really
nice plz
continue soon
and plzz mazke
the first part long

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#10

Part 1

Flashback 10 years

Ranbir in high school. He was the most unpopular guy who kept himself to himself. Friends he only had 1 but only so he could do his work for hom. He was alone. Everyone had nothing better to do than gossip behind his back and call him names. Ranbir didn't have a family and everyone in school knew it. Why? It was high school they were into everyones business weather they liked it or not. Ranbir's family were a question mark? He didn't know who they were and was shipped around from foster care to another foster home. He was a troubled guy and got into fights alot. Trying to stand up for himself.

On the other side there was Kanya the most popular girl everyone had their sights on except Ranbir he didn't care for looks. Kanya wasn't rich or anything but just got by. Her mother and she were always at war fue to the clothes she wore. Her mother also didn't like the crowd she hung around with. Kanya didn't care for her family at all. They were always on her case. She just wished she didn't have parents at all. Her Dad was always trying to go on about the family izzat and so on but Kanya could care less. It was all bull. Family who needed them.

Two people in totally different spectrum in life. Never lookin at the other till one day Ranbir got into a fight with Kanya's friends Harman, Raj and Vivek for taunting him calling him b*****d and actually just breathing and getting in their space. Ranbir took all 3 on by himself and beat them up pretty badly. Kanya came in with all her schoolmates and started to beat Ranbir up. Ranbir left bloodied o the ground with everyone around him giving him dirty looks. Harman, Vivek and Raj were carried away. Kanya fumed how dare he beat her friends up.

K-Stupid bull. Mote fat sumo wrestler. U deserve to be in pain. Mere dosto ke itna bura haal. Itna bara hati ko only a herd can beat them up to see sense. Khabi jurrat mat karna dobara tum itne lucky nahin hoge. Got that.

With that she left. At the time Kanya felt so bad for her friends. It was always the quiet ones U had to watch out 4. She didn't undestand why a guy would be stupid to take on 3 people when he knew that he'd have no backup. Ranbir a guy everyone knew the name of. He was that hated. Thought he was Mr. Toughshot but they showed him.

Ranbir was carried out with a strether and was bandaged up. When he went home all he could hear were people jeering at him and one girl that hurt him more than the beatings he got. By now he was used to it. He got the same from his foster father. 2 more years and he was out of this hell hole for good and into a world where he would make a mark of his own. Somewhere nobody would question his heritage, his background. He wasn't a quitter all the knocks and falls made him stronger but at the same time it killed any humane part of his personality. He hated the world. He hated everyone living in it and made a promise to himself that he would make everyone pay for their sins.

A year past by and Kanya and Ranbir were by now sworn enemies. Raj, Vivek were in college and fate had thrown them in the same colege. Harman was long gone by now. He had been heavily involved in drugs and died of an overdose. Ranbir felt badfor a mili-second but thought the guy deserved what he got. Kanya was newly instated in college her parents had aquired quite a bit of wealth. Her sister Pooja was taking another repeat year in college for failing her first year due to heartbreak.

By now it wasn't too bad Ranbir wasn't a lost soul and found a friend in Karan. They were dorm mates and often hungout with each other. Ranbir won a scholorship so despite being a loner his work in school didn't suffer. He got top marks in all his classes. Kanya saw Ranbir and couldn't believe the guy got in to this place. Well atleast he wouldn't be in any of her classes but how wrong was she. Ranbir still got into fights with Raj and Vivek but only this time he'd learnt to use his words than his fists.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago

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