FF:Back to Newton’s Laws-3...part 46.... - Page 10

Hey NJ, just read part 34, and I have to say it jus keeps on getting better and better, I was left mesmerised by the way you wrote the first paragraph, just couldn't get enough of it!!! 👏

After waiting anxiously for this part, only because of how you ended part 33! with armaan saying " i want u " I wanted to know what the reaction was going to be and how he would handled that.
Absolutely loved how you wrote this part it was perfect. Their feelings, emotions running wild, the guilt they had started to feel, and most of all the respect their parents had given them and faith in each other – just amazing the way you put it together!!

And then came the part where they finally lost themselves in each other and when Armaan injured her hand which obviously prevented them from taking things further – again another piece put together so nicely. I have not yet come across another piece that has been written so effortlessly and perfect, just brilliant at how you brought the intensity and desperation from both of them.

I just loved it when Rahul and Muskaan came in, it was so sweet of Ridz to defend and lie for Armaan as she described it afterwards "it was their thing" that was just adorable to know how much she loves him.

You really outdid yourself on this part NJ, how you manage it every time beats me!!😆😆 😆I loved how you shown the confusion of both Ridz and Armaan in the beginning, and him saying sorry about having hurt her, and then her reaction to it. Just shows how much they need each other and not only 'want!'

OMG, Armaan was going to propose???? And that too he couldn't wait to ask Ridz to choose the ring?lol I cant wait for it. I love the bonding between both Rahul and Armaan they truly are best of friends!! What is with this Sandra yaar, could you have not made her injuries a bit permanent!! Im very sure she was being an ear-wig when Armaan was chatting to Rahul and so to divert their attention to her, she hurt herslf on the nearest thing and started exaggerating the pain!!! I hope this does not cause another confusion although that's the obvious don't know what you might come up with lol

im left wondering now whether they will meet each other at the hospital, and how this is going to effect them, however you bring the part

im so looking forward to the next part, just anticipating what its going to be

thanks for the PM and for another captivating part NJ, just loved it

Sania 😳

hey

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dat was reeeeeeeeeeeellllllyyyyyyyyy FABULOS 😉

luved it 2 bitssss 😳

juz BEAUTIFULL 👏

cont super sooooooonnnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

i was jus wondering dat y did sandra t cum in a cameo role n der she enters wid a bang.... y only leg she shld hav sprained other prts also.... omggg n hope dat lord benz doesn't gt l88 4 is date
i'm little confused as 2 wot did armi actually mean in d end.. bt nywayz luvd d way u handled der feelngs, der giult everythgg..
n d rahul ammy scene.. i guess rahul can read ppl's mind... i guess obvi he can do atleast of armi after stayng wid him 4 soo many yrzz...
plzzz tell armi d ring is waitngg 4 him.... n plzzzz no misunderstangggggg...
waitngggg 4 d nxttt prt..... update supersooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 😊

awwwwwww poor armaaan blames himself for no reason...but yay hes gonn propose FINALLY...but NJ why are you torturing us with that sandra part now dont tell me ridzi is gonna see him with her at the doctors 😔 nahinnnnnnn

ok i trust you completely, whatever steps u take i know will make the story awesome as its already fantastic 😃

cant wait for the next part n dont worry about the delays 😊

urgh that sandra pandra...!!!!!!! please pretty please don't let ridz misunderstand armaan... we've already had it happen once... please NJ!!!!

coming to the part... i was truly amazed at how well you took up from where u left off... it was all so smooth! the whole part from where she said she wasn't offended to where the stupid sandra showed up was beautiful..!! their battle of emotions for each other.. were so touching! and oh my gosh he's gonna propose her!!! aaah!!! can't wait for that to come!

the rahul armaan scene was too cute!! i loved seeing how well rahul n armaan understand each other... that was an awesome part!! and ridzi gets two rings..! woohoo!!

their passion for each other was so strong.. that whole scene was beautiful..!!

like other people may have written that scene and it might have come off as abrupt.. but you wrote it with such depth... and made it seem beautiful!

incredible job again!! i'm totally spellbound!

luv u NJ!! waiting for ur next rocking update!!!

Heyy!!! Just when I was enjoying this part to the core,trust stupid sandra to make an appeara!!!! Gosh I hate her soooo much!!! Just when Armaan was going to propose!!!! Ugh...is sandra ki bachchi ko na... 😡 Why do I have a horrible feeling that Ridz is gonna see Armaan n Sandra at the Dr.'s clinic??!? Oh man she'll totally mis-understand him!!! No,no,no,noooo...I hope there's no misunderstanding.... 😕 😕 I Loveeed the way u handled their emotions,Armaan's guilt,everything...Brilliant....The AR parts were reaally romantic too...Thanks for the pm and do cont. soon..
Love,
Ananya

great update i guess we come full circle at the hospital 😆 😆 😉

Love Kat

yo!ive read it bt i sooooooo cnt commen t rite nw.,..cuz ive ta tell ya soo much!!
bt 4 mw.....OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!