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Kashish

@..kashish..

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Posted: 17 years ago

#81

hey excellent part..hope i am not thinkin wrong by guessin that ridz will see armaan and sandy at the docs together and think of somehting?? pls conintue soon..can u pls Pm me..thanks in advance 😃

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

#82

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me going to work now
will comment soon
love u NJ
Hina

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😳😳😳

NJ,love u!

this was one of my fav parts ,everything was just perfect and exactly how it shud have been

Sandra will only make it more fun I'd say, sorry people ,don't kill mefor this

Love is all about tests and trials

the more you're exposed to them,the more your realise how much love you have and it just strengthens the bond

hope my PM made more sense,i would say more here,people might start hating me 😆

i loved the update and just can't appreciate it enuf,but u know how much i love it don't u?

thanks NJ

u're the best!

Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#83

hey this was amazing NJ😳

i luuuuvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv it..............that all i can say😃

Armaan and Ridz are so understanding to each other.........😳

Stupid Sandra, i just want to kill her man..............so chipku😕😕😕

Reg was trying hard to make armaan go but that stupid girl, make him get stuck........

Now why i m getting the feeling that riddhima will only see armaan and sandy out there in hospi except reg.................that will be awful man🤢

Girl, trust him...........trust issues always break a relation.......don't make it so weak😊😊

great work NJ

cont soon dear👏

lolz
ana😳😳😳

Edited by cool_SK - 17 years ago

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sasya

@sasya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#84

the part was great 👏 u handled it well,actually i was dieing to read her reation but now i am happy.i think armaan should talk to her as fast as possible.
that sandy 😡 😡 😡 i hate her,now i think riddhima will see armaan with sandy in the hospital,i hope she dose'nt missunderstand him.........
i am waiting to see how armaan will propose her for marraige..this part was really good i am happy that he finally decided to marry her.i hope the next part will not be bad,if it is then please try to make it abit happy till the end of the part
continue soon.......

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missing Vmars

@missing Vmars

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Posted: 17 years ago

#85

NJ i am gonna catch da next flight 2 US n have a major fight wit u if u dont get rid of dat Sandra B**** in da next part ... i mean get rid of her for gud !!!! da whole part was amazing ( one of da best actually ) but offcourse she had 2 cum n spoil it for me !!!

u knw u ended da last part wit armaan saying " i want u " u knw i was most curious 2 knw wat did he want after dat .. .was he jus confessing his feeling for her ( but still wanted 2 maintian dis distance n all ) or did he want 2 take dere relation 2 da next level ... i really luved da way u handled dis aspect ... dere feeling for each other, da guilt which was overcuming dem .... n also not wanting 2 break a faith which dere parents had in dem ... amazing .... n den finally losing dere control ( almost loosing ) n her injured hand preventing nething further from happening OMG how do u ever think of all dis !!!! also riddhima lying 2 muskaan ( 2 cover up for dem) i thought was da cutest !!!

sooo armaan's all set 2 propose ( complete wit a solitare ring ) OMG am soooo hoping sandra doesnt ruin it dem ( i sooo wanna beat her up right now ) .... coz am pretty sure armaan n riddhima r gonna cum face 2 face at da doctors ... since muskaan will take riddhima for her appointment n armaan wud have 2 take sandra dere ..... ( am pretty sure she hurt herself on purpose jus 2 get armaan's attention n sympathy ..... jus cudnt tolerate 2 c armaan caring for riddhima ) ..... am hoping it doesnt create ne misunderstandings between dem ( seriously hoping riddhima doesnt fall in sandra's trap once again n start doubting armaan or his luv .... it wud be a tragedy) ..... so no more misunderstandings NJ PLZ PLZ PLZ ( knwing u am expcting sumthing different from u ... so no typical nonsense hopefully ) !!!!

ok i think i have bored u enough wit my essay .... so no more comments ... jus waiting for ur next update .... i think i will kill myself trying 2 imagine wats gonna happen next .... Damn i wish i wasnt off from school .... have all a time in da world 2 sit n think abt it !!!!

Edited by missing Vmars - 17 years ago

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#86

well well Miss powerpuff had to prove it to me once again didnt she??? that u can write more then outstanding and make me fetch out more words to praise you??? Shame Hawww!!!! 😆 😆 😆 do u have no sense of pity on me at all Nsm??? i guess i will have to catch the next flight to US to sort some issues out here, this is way to much, 😆 😆 😆

"For the initial moments armaan stared back into her eyes, his look steadfast....but as the seconds ticked away, he felt restless at not getting any response....his eyes wandered in minute scrutiny of each subtlety in the softness of her face, desperate to detect even the hint of variation of expression which may reveal her thoughts at that moment....but she remained unfathomable....his lips still brushing almost close to her mouth, he dared not break his hold on her to move out of the overwhelming closeness which enveloped both of them, to a certain extent clouding their logic....for he feared what any physical disturbance to this stillness might consequence....if he had invited trouble, which he felt he most certainly had, breaking this spell might hasten its arrival n for then, though his anticipation was rising by the second, he preferred the moment of proximity, just him n her...would last an eternity.....but it could not....anticipation was giving way to anxiety....n ultimately after the lapse of a many inactive seconds frustration towered over him n he could contain himself no longer...why didnt she speak????was this the advent of his worst fears coming true????"

reading the start i knew u had set out to prove me wrong once again. I say that yup this part is THE BEST no match.....BANG u cum up with another??? Man u stumped with initial paras girl??

"how could she be when she wanted him too...had wanted him in every moment they were close, perhaps without even the conscious realization of what exactly it was she wanted.....but when he said it she knew that was it.....but how could she be thinking all this let alone not being offended???shouldnt she feel like he was being outrageous????n here she was feeling.....ALMOST HAPPY????n the feeling was rising within....like a surge of emotion unchecked.....she finally lowered her eyes.....oh my lord....forgive me....is it a sin to feel so for the one i love???the only one it will ever be????i almost feel happy to the extent of jubilation about him saying it n feeling my way....but this guilt.....please god... rid me of one of the two emotions for how can i face the two extremes together, in a situation which is hard enough without this dilemma.....n she wished, it would be the guilt that left her......"

There go its like each line is outstanding, carefully woven into the part!! Brilliant will be an understatement!!

"ur sorry cause u love me???then ur sorry about being honest???or are u sorry u feel the way u do????would you rather you didnt feel this way???"

Hawwww, wat can i say Nsm??? Howon earth did u even think up of such dialogs will remain a mystery to me!! Outstanding!! U have sheer excellence oozing out from them girl!!👏

My gosh intensity, the desperation u portrayed scorched my screen!! Nev er have i read any part where intensity is described so effortlessly that it captivates u so very much that i didnt even blink once. Genius at work!!!
👏

They almost lost control but not fully and the scenes after that!!! Her covering up for him was like pouring hot chocolate over a sizzler (Do i make sense?)😆 😆

the finesse with which u described him feeling so guilty and confused my gosh Nsm feel like touching ur feet woman!!

"she...is...the...one"...then after a pause he got up n started pacing around the dark room....ENOUGH....he thought.....I CANT TAKE THIS ANYMORE....i dont want to wait n prove to myself, to her or to anybody else that this relationship is meant to be....i know it...she knows it...i have seen enough of her n i dont care about what more there is to be seen....because i know nothing will change my mind....n i know she feels the same....pa u said lifelong decisions should be made in their good time....but u also said i should take the decision on my own terms....i have made up my mind now....i just have to get this relationship moving, n give it the place in my life it is meant for.... "

Woahhhh a masterstroke again?? Am cuming to kidnap ur brain for sure!!

Next the Rahul-ammy scene was fab too. Rahul not missing a thing huh??? And OMG a solitare?? 😳
Gosh Nsm u better make the day one of its kind or i dunno what i will do!! 😆 😆 😆 Get tat sandy-pandy out for good!! or else......... 😈

Now finally my comment exceeded ur part length so i better stop!!! Will be very very very despo toread the next. Hope wat i fear wont be true....i am warning u.😆

Love
Jia

Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago

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jhanvimooni

@jhanvimooni

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#87

Hey NJ u really are making it impossible to compliment any of the parts..i mean am losing out on adjectives gal..simply midblowing

i thought that ur earlier part was by far the best as t was quite intense but gosh u have now compelled me to take that back as now u have made it impossibel for me to judge which was the better..

The portrayal of each emotion was beautiful.. their desires, their debating thoughts but above all the love and the bond they share..

I did have a notion that SANDRA gal is there to create probs or rather the barrier in their TEST OF TIME..but i guess in the end alls well that ends well...
i mean its time to bid adieu to ridzy's tendencies of going into her shell and let it all flow freely infront of her Knight in shining armour..

Update soon

Cheers

Edited by jhanvimooni - 17 years ago

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#88

hey NJ 😊
thanks for the pm sweety 😉
awww this part was so sensuous 😳 yaar just loved it 😳
but poor ridz she fell down n hurt her hand 😭 😭 😭
but the way she covered up for armaan was so cute yaar 😳
n then omg hes gonna propse her to get married 😊 😉 thats a surprise
but ah ah an not yet i guess coz that stupid sandy 😡 😡 😡 kabab mein haddi 😡 😡 kuch kamal zaror dikhayegi at the doc's place n ridz is also gonna be there 😭
argh i hate her character in ur ff 🤢
do something nice yaar dont bring a negative twist here plz 😭
update soon
👏

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#89

Aaaaa! 🤬 part 😆 😆 😆

Dm it! That Sandy argh! I wanna pull her hair! now they're gonna go to the docs office... and then see sandy and army there... and then... dramaaaaaa... me waitin for them to get marriedddddddd!

btw.. love how they solved their problem talking like that with each other! Lovely!

cant wait... for them to get married 😉

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hearme21

@hearme21

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#90

Awwww, they are such a sweet couple. And you brought across their feelings so well. So hes gonna propose and the witch is trying to spoil everything. Let me guess, Ridz will run into the 'injured' Sandra at the hospital. And she will be upset.
Wanna see how this one plays out. Cant wait!

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