FF:Back to Newton’s Laws-3...part 46.... - Page 8

Originally posted by: spln

well 'i want u' is a phrase for all the....ummm guess i shudnt write anything before maddy di sensors my post :D....but hopefully the next update should clarify....he just meant he cant keep the distance and all....

i do knw wat da term " I want u " means .... its jus dat i was kinda curious regarding da context in which armaan means it !!! i mean does he wnat 2 do ahead wit it or not !!!!

HEY NJ!!!!!!!!!!

IM BACK!!!!!!!! FINALLY READ PT 31, 32, 33 IN ONE GO...u know i was soo glued...reading non-stop...but then it ended i was like "i want more now, now itself" hehe...i know ur busy soo cant really say much

K ANYWAY, TO THE UPDATE....

It was simply Fantabulously Marvelously GRANDIFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved the whole update.... everything about it was simply superb!!!!!!! Perfectly written, emotions described well....it had 2 be as it was written by oir gr8 writter nj 😃

the whole scene in the hospital.... it was beautifully written...soo touching...he tells her wat happened 2 him seeing her lying with blood...her mom thing he remembered n all...highlight of the update was ridz question n his answer...it was more than jus perfect...i couldnt think of any better answer than his...ur the best nj...truly the best

now pt 32...k can armaan be mines plzzz 😛 😃 ...he is such a sweetheart...picking her in his arms knowing she has hurt her hand not leg was cho chweet...*CUTTT WILL BE BAK...I HAVE 2 GO...JUS GOT A URGENT CALL, WILL BE BAK BY EVENING 4 COMMENTING ON HALF OF PT 32 N PT 33*


before going just wanna say On the whole, I loved each and every bit of the update...ur writing is the one thing that addicts me the most and i love to read ur ff soo so much

i hope i didnt bore u with my comment, if i really did im really sorry...really veryyyy sorry


LASTLY TRY 2 PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON!!!!!!!!!

Now I can say this has to be my favourite of all in the parts till now of this ff....it had everything... 😳

Armaan is damn lucky to have such friends n closed ones in his life...

but the cliffhanger!! 😕 u knw i'm reading a novel these days and coz of my father i had to leave that book (at 2 am 😆 . and coincidentally the chapter ended at this same very point and now i'm waiting for u to cont with ur ff.....so i that i can rest in peace after reading it......now honestly, i'm not able to read the book either..

cont soooooooooooon plzzz...

luv,
shivani 😳

Wow… NJ… See dis time i hv been "ON TIME"... 😆 😆 😆 ...

As much as I liked Armaan along wid Riddhima & Muskaan's surprise party, I loved d concern Rahul shows for Armaan… He is a true friend… 😊 d way he spoke to Ridz, it seems he figured out d hidden meaning of Ridz's concern… I loved him for dat… 👏 & of course Muski too as she also felt d same… its just Ridz didn't say anything openly to her… 😊

D way Ridz is standing to support Armaan thru all these big n small gestures is impressive & commendable… i love her "Effortless Efforts"... she is perfect… 😳 & OMG she cud understand y was he uncomfortable??? Yes I know she doesn't know d EXACT reason, but she knew wat was D MOMENT he was feeling awkward for…??? 😊

Loved d romantic part a lot… It was simply wondeful... will b looking forward for Ridz's reaction... u updated dis one on time, plz try n do d same wid d next update… (Hope ur Shifting is going smooth 😉 )

Love
- Sheetal

hey NJ, first of all congrats for your 3rd thread, well done girl!! you deserve it for giving an awesome ff for all us readers!!

2nd: sorry for commenting a little late than usual

and 3rd:
OMG, part 33, i think is one of my favourites, im so glad you have shown this side of Armaan, it was so needed as i thought there was too much on Ridz thinking, now its Armaans turn to show himself in a dilemma which i think is pretty cool!!

loved the intensity of this part, and you wrote it perfectly!!

loved how the party was organised and everything, finally Ridz began to calm down on her thinking and started enjoying the party,

i absolutely fell for Rahul in this part being the concerned friend for Armaan, and without even asking him Ridz found her answer"u want to help him???just be with him....thats all he needs....." i loved this line, and im so glad it showed how much he knows his friend

i liked the little dance part you put in, reminded me of the salsa dance in step up 2, so i enjoyed reading it.

coming up to the climax of the update, he whispered "i want you...." a couple of seconds went by...then she jerked open her eyes n stared back into his , as he stood so close....she felt blank n so were her eyes n expression..... OMG im wondering nervously what Ridz reaction is going to be - would have been nice if you continued it but you left a cliff hanger instead lol

it was a brilliant part as usual, thanks for the PM, and eagerly waiting to know what happens next

Sania 😳

Wowww....NJ....hw can u be so superbly perfect with every part...loved every scene described so beautifully in da last 2 parts...loved all the lil details...n i srsly love the raltionships u potray in ure FF...the ridz muski part...ridz rahul part...liked them totally....n the room scene....omggggggg i was blushin like hell....u excel ureself in every part n am srsly lost of words...everytime...im lovin ure fic totally...hw only i wish this could neva end.....well everythin has to come to an end...anyways...wil keep lovin it til u write it...great gong...cont soon....loved that dialogue whr ridz says "ure so embarrased to say ure attracted to me" n i actually started laughin hehehehe it was chooo chooo chooo chweet...lovin it 👏

woooooow really good part 👏 pls continue sooon

ummmmm!!

u koe!m ot on a lil vacation..wit family...n ive been watchin DMG late too..n i was DESPERATELY waitin for u 2 update!!
i wud hve surely sent u a spam if id nt seen an update tdy...later at ntie!!

neways!!
luved rahul-ridz convo...it was needed!!:D

d last bit...it cme as a surprise..1st cuz ridz gt him rong..cuz ter thots r always on d sme track..here tey wer nt...n even after he tld her...he gt carried away..he only thot abt wat was in her head already!
m soooooo glad it tk a turn..n he didnt end up tlkin abt it bt really showin it!!
tht was icin on d cake..luved it!!
man i gt gooseflesh again....n i cnt wait 4 u to update..yur updatez r mst awaited by me thn DMG gurl!!!!

uffff!!luved it!!i cn c thrugh tem rite nw...her blank luk!!OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!

NJ dear
plz cont soon
i m dying to know her answer................hopefully she will make him get back to senses.......he should better ask her parents that they are now ready for a relationship.........not like this

plz plz plz

cont soon............its going great.........the concept is really going so amazing 😛

keeping me bound and addictive 😳

great work 👏

lolz
ana 😳

part 34 friends!!! enjoy reading

ps: sorry for the unannounced delay....