Pehli Nazar Mein:Update Note Page 13: 10/25 - Page 8

hey guys thanks soo much for the comments... sorry i havent replied to them just been busy.. also I am SO sorry i havent done an update for a while... just got done with school.... but i have a month off so i will be updating regularly... ill prolly post an update everyday.. and if not everyday then every other day for sure... so now you guys can pm and bug me to update so i will... the next update will be up later tonite or 2morrow for sure... thanks so much for your guys' patience... really appreciate it.... Also there are going to be some changes in my FF... i will be getting rid of some characters from the FF that aren't necessary because i don't want to have too many characters otherwise it gets confusing... i will be getting rid of Sujal and Kashish for right now.. but as the story progresses they will be back... and the next part will be up soon.. thanks again for your guys' patience.

-Meha

Omgg..I am so happy I cant even tell you Welcome back and Pleasee update soon I have been waiting for a long time and I am getting desperate:P

Hey guys.. thanks so much for your patience... and thanks a lot for commenting.😊
Also.... I really don't have a clue about the places in India... so every place in here is fictitious....

Chapter 6:

The week passes by in no time and it is Friday morning. Its 8 a.m. in the morning time at the Khanna Mansion and the guys are outside putting the luggage all the luggage in the back of the car. They will be taking an expedition since there is 8 of them and so they can all fit in the car. When they are done putting the luggage in the car, they all head back inside to eat breakfast so they can leave. Everyone is at the table eating breakfast including Surya and Gayatri.

Surya: Sab packing ho gayi?

Kavya: Haan dad, sab packing ho gayi.

Dilip: good, aur sab dyan se jaana, aur ladkiyo ka khayal rakhna.

Angad: Papa, aap chinta mat kijye, hum sab hain na... hum ladkiyo ka khayal rakhenge.

They all finish up eating and bid their byes to the families and head to the car to leave for the beach farm house. The beach farm house is about 3 hours away from their home. Kavya sits in the drivers seat while Anjali sits in the passanger seat. Josh, Aaliya, and Angad take the first seat in the back, and Kripa, Prachi and Aditya take the back seat. The car ride is quiet since everyone is sleeping because of waking up so early while Kavya and Anjali are talking away so Kavya doesn't feel sleepy. about an hour and half later the car stops at a rest area to take a break and to change drivers. Josh gets in the driver seat and Aditya joins him in the passenger seat. While Kavya, Aaliya, and Anjali sit in the front seat and Prachi, Kripa, and Angad sit in the far back. Once again everyone is back to sleeping.

Angad is staring outside the window when he sees Kripa's head keep falling down. Since she is sitting in the middle she has no where to put her head. Angad seeing this takes her head and puts it on his shoulder so she can sleep peacefully. He keeps staring at her and can't take his eyes off her.

Angad: (thinking to himself) She's so beautiful.

While staring at her he himself goes to sleep. They all wake up when they feel the car has stopped. It is 12 pm when they reach the place. Kripa gets up and sees that she had been sleeping on Angad's shoulder and looks up at him.

Angad: Woh tum uncomfortable lag rahi thi na isiliye tumhara sar (head) mere kandhe (shoulder) par rakh diya.

Kripa: (smiles at him) thanks

They all get out and take their luggage in the house. There are five rooms upstairs. Josh and Aaliya take one room. Prachi and Kripa share a room. Angad and Adi share a room. Anjali takes a room, and Kavya takes the last room. They all put there luggage in their rooms and come downstairs.

Kavya: Mujhe bohot bhok lagi hain. Kya khana hain.

Anjali: Ek kaam karte hain, tum log fresh ho jayo aur hum khana paka dete hain.

Prachi: Lekin Anju mujhe khana pakana nahin ata.

Aditya: Prachi jab humari shaadi hogi to mein kya khayonga?

Prachi: Pata nahin, tum khana pakana kyon nahin sikhjate, so it won't be a problem for both of us.

Adi stares her down while the others laugh.

Josh: Haan thik hain hum fresh ho ke ate hain, tab tak tum log khana paka de na.

The boys go upstairs to freshen up while the girls go in the kitchen.

Kripa: kya pakaye?

Aaliya: How about pasta?

Prachi: sounds good.

They all start preparing for the food. By the time the guys are downstairs the food is done and it smells great.

Angad: mmm smells good, what's for lunch.

Anjali: Pasta, bread, and salad.

Aditya: yummm my favorite.

They all sit down and have their lunch while chit chatting away with each other. After lunch is over the guys help the girls clean up. They all sit down in the living room deciding what to do.

Kavya: How about we all rest and chill at the house and then at night we can head to a club.

Adi: I like the idea and plus i want to spend some time with Prachi too.

Both Kavya and Josh agree too. Kripa and Angad look at each other and shrug their shoulders. The 3 couples leave to spend time with their respected loved ones. While Angad and Kripa are left in the living room with nothing to do.

Kripa: Movie dekhe.

Angad: haan sound good, kaunsi movie dekhni hain.

Kripa: hmmm how about Kismat Konnection?

Angad: sounds perfect.

Kripa puts in the movie and both are watching it while eating popcorn (don't ask me when she went to the kitchen and got the popcorn, she just did, 😆) After the movie was over it was around 4ish and the three couples weren't back.

Angad: good movie huh?

Kripa: haan, bechari Vidya, her so called fiance was cheating on her behind her back with some giraffe. it was good shahid was there as her moral support. Girls who don't have support of a really good friend like that only knows what she goes through.

Angad: Kya kisi ne tumhara dil toda hain?

Kripa: (looking up at him) haan toda hain.

Angad: If you don't mind me asking kaun tha woh.

Kripa: look Angad in the past week or so you have become a good friend of mine, and that is rare because i really don't trust people that easily. But I still don't feel comfortable telling you my past. The day I know I can, I will come to you myself and tell you about my past.

Angad: (smiling at her) I completely understand, and I hope I can become your best friend like Shahid was for Vidya in the movie and be your support for you.

Kripa: thanks so much Angad, I'm glad i have a friend like you.

Angad: And i'm glad I have a good friend like you. You know i have never had a close friend that has been a girl. I mean I have Anjali, but she's my sister, I don't feel comfortable telling her everything in my life, and same thing with Prachi, she's like my younger sister. I'm glad that I have you. You're someone that I can probably tell everything to and share all my problems to. And I hope i can be the same for you.

Kripa: Angad you can ALWAYS come to me with anything you need to talk about, no matter what it is. I'll be here to listen and to help you. And as for me coming to you, i'm sure that time will come soon. And you will know that when I come to you and talk to you about my past and let my heart out.

They both smile at each other. Just than Aditya and Prachi come with Prachi laughing her stomach off and Adi having a frown on his face. Kripa and Angad look in their direction.

Kripa: Kya hua, prachi why are you laughin, and what happend to you Adi?

Prachi: Adi and I were building a sand castle and this guy kept staring at us....

*FLASHBACK*

Prachi: Adi woh ladka yaha kab se ghoor raha hain.

Adi looks up and sees the guy staring. Adi get's angry and walks up to the guy, with Prachi behind him.

Adi: Hey man, what's your problem, why do you keep staring at my girlfriend for?

Guy: She's your girlfriend? I thought she was your sister.

Adi and Prachi are both shocked.

Adi: nahin, yeh meri girlfriend hain, lekin tu bata ushe tu ghoor ghoor ke kyun dekh raha tha.

Guy: I wasn't staring at her.

Prachi: Than who were u staring at, cuz i did not see anyone else in our directoin.

Guy: I was staring at your boyfriend.

Adi: (confused) excuse me, why were you staring at me for?

Guy: because i think your hott.

Adi: Excuse me?

Guy: Look man, I'm gay and i was checking you out not your girlfriend. I think your really fine, but you have a girlfriend so i have no chance with you.

Adi's jaw drops open while Prachi covers her mouth to prevent from laughing. The guy says his byes and leaves from there, and Prachi bursts out laughing.

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Both Angad and Kripa are on the floor laughing.

Adi: ha ha, so funny.

Angad: Hey man atlease someone thought you were hott, even if it was a guy.

Adi glares at him while the other three laugh. Soon enough everyone is back to the house and have heard the story and are laughing their heads off.

Hey guys here's the next update... I could go on, but my fingers are really tired and they ache... i'll post the next part when i get enough comments... and criticism. Also I will be getting rid of Josh, Aaliya, Sujal, and Kashish for right now. But they will be back later on in the story. And another important note is that Prachi and Adi will be the two big helpers in getting Angad and Kripa to realize their love for each other and to patch them up. Please leave comments and criticize my work. Thank you. Enjoy. 😊

Omgg...Just for wat I was waiting for....Thnkss:)

omg..hahahah the last bit was funny...angad is so carin...wonder what will happen nxt...continue soon pls...hope ur exams went well...

yay....u finali contd....loved this part...so angad n kripa are slowly buildin up their relationship.....poor adi hehhe...cont sooon

Awww...Veryy NNice love Angad & Kripa

Originally posted by: *PakiBeauty*

Omgg...Just for wat I was waiting for....Thnkss:) Hey no problem :)

Originally posted by: chillingal16

omg..hahahah the last bit was funny hehe yes Adi is a funny character, thought i'd give him a little comic role in here to make the FF a little more funny...angad is so carin Yes Angad is a caring guy, and let's just hope he remains like that throughout the story...wonder what will happen nxt hmm next, i guess you'll just have to wait and find out when i update ;) ...continue soon pls...hope ur exams went well yes my exams went well, they were really easy so wasn't all that stressed. :)...

Originally posted by: sweet honey

yay....u finali contd Yes i finally continued, sorry for not posting so soon, you know college and stuff.....loved this part...so angad n kripa are slowly buildin up their relationship yeah Angad and Kripa are going slowly at their relationship, i want them to be friends first then slowly go into love, but don't worry i wont' drag it too much.....poor adi hehhe yeah Adi he's a fruit i tell ya...cont sooon

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

awesom part

continue soon! Hey thanks for the comment , i surly will continue soon.

Originally posted by: *PakiBeauty*

Awww...Veryy NNice love Angad & Kripa

Update Soon waiting for next part impaintly i'm glad you like them two, and i will def. continue soon, i'm actually writing the next part right now, so it will be up in a couple hours.

Originally posted by: teri_susan

Hai caughtup with ur story,great parts Hey i'm really glad you liked the story👏👏👏.Waitng for AK union hehe i am too don't worry, but i dont' want to speed up their relationship otherwise in the near future they won't have that understanding between each other, so i want them to be friends before anything😳.I am really curious to know about Kripa's past and the person in the photo she was holding. That will be revealed within the next 4-5 parts.Will Prithvi and Mishty will be a big trouble to AK? Hmmm not sure yet, I'll decide as I write the next couple parts😕Waiting for the next part.Continue......... Will continue in the next couple hours

Chapter 7:

The guys are waiting downstairs for the girls to come down so they can head to the club, but as usual girls + getting dressed = a billion hours. The guys are getting really impatient.

Angad: Are yaar, yeh ladkiya kitna waqt laga ti hain tayar hone mein.

Josh: Sach mein, woh char pechle teen ghante se ek kamre mein tayar ho rahe hain, aur abhi tak niche nahin aye.

Then you see the girls coming downstairs one by one, and each and every guys mouth drops seeing them looking really gorgeous.

Anjali is wearing:
http:///images.windsorstore.com/images/products/1_74160_FS.jpg

Aaliya is wearing: http://images.windsorstore.com/images/products/1_73086_FS.jpg

Prachi is wearing: http://images.windsorstore.com/images/products/1_70301_FS.jpg

And Kripa is wearing: (I REALLY love this dress):http://images.windsorstore.com/images/products/1_74458_FS.jpg

While the boys are wearing jeans and Kavya's wearing a purple matching button up shirt, Josh is wearing a black button up shirt, Adi is wearing a pink button up shirt, and Angad is wearing a brown button up shirt. The guys are speechless and have no words to describe how beautiful the girls look.

Kavya: Aaa… Anju tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi hoon.

Anjali shys away while the other two compliment Aaliya and Prachi who blush as well.

Angad: Hey Kripa you look very beautiful.

Kripa: Thanks Angad you look handsome yourself.

Kavya: Abe oyee, meri behn pe line mar raha hain.

Angad: line nahin mar raha, compliment de raha tha aur mein bhi yeh keh sakta hoon tumhara bare mein, meri behn pe line mar raha hain.

Kavya: Hamari shaadi hone wali hain, I have a right.

Angad: ya ya whatever, abh chale der ho rahi hain.

They all hop into their expedition and head to the club, the clubs name is DV8 (it's not a real club in Mumbai, it's a club in LA, and I don't know the area and places in Mumbai so I have made everything up). They reach there in about 30-45 minutes and give their car in valet.

All of them enter the club and see that it's really crowded. They all head to the bar, there are only four seats so the men give the ladies the seats and stand next to them at the bar.

Kavya: Angad, aaj toh yaha bohot sari ladkiya hain, koi toh tujhe mil hi jayegi.

Angad: Yeah there are a lot of girls, but just look at them, half of them are probably grinding up on guys that they don't even know.

Adi: Who wants to drink?

All: ME!!!

The guys look at the girls like they have gone nuts or something. And the girls give them a confused look.

Angad: Are you sure you girls can handle the alcohol, I mean I've seen girls drink and then they all act like a bunch of crazy chicks.

Prachi: Angad, well we aren't those "girls" as you call them, so let's not under estimate us.

Angad: (whispers to Kripa) Tum chinta mat karo, drink as much as you want, main hoon na tumhara khayal rakhne keliya.

Kripa: (whispering back to him) don't worry I won't need anyone to take care of me, I can handle myself when I drink.

Angad: Ok we will see.

They all start taking their shots, 2 shots of tequila Prachi and Aaliya are drunk and hyper, 3 shots and Anjali is drunk. The guys are on their fourth one and so is Kripa.

Adi: Kripa are you sure you can take this next one.

Kripa: (kind of buzzed) Yes I can.

The guys shrug their shoulders and take the 4^th shot; that was all Kripa needed to get drunk. All four girls were going insane and bugging the guys to go dance with them. The guys tired of the blabbering and the constant stares they were getting gave in and took them to the dance floor to dance with. The girls were really drunk and started singing: Touch me from Dhoom 2: (The song has both the male and female singing, but just imagine only the female singing the whole song)

teekhi teekhi teri akhiyaan,

chhooke chhooke behkati hai,

dekh dekh naa yun mujhko,

hosh hosh le jaati hai,

deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,

humse khafa koi ho jaye naa

touch me don€™t touch me don€™t touch me soniyaa – 2

Prachi singing to Adi, who is scared out of his mind and is backing away from Prachi, but she keeps walking towards him.

chhod chhod meri raahon ko,

taubaa taubaa dar lagtaa hai,

aisi vaisi teri baaton se,

ishq vishk saa jagtaa hai,

deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,

humse khataa koi ho jaaye naa

touch me don€™t touch me don€™t touch me soniyaa – 2

Aaliya is dancing around Josh who seems like he's going to pass out in a second from shock since he has never seen his Aali like that.

roke naa ruke, mere yeh kadam

tute naa kahin, jaanaa har kasam

rehne de zaraa, thodaa paas laa

paagalpan kare mann hai manchalaa

deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye na,

humse khafaa koi ho jaaye naa

touch me don€™t touch me don€™t touch me soniyaa – 2

Anju is tracing Kavya's face with her finger and singing to him and is twirling around him.

naa main hosh mein, naa tu hosh mein

behke naa kahin dono josh mein

sine mein kahin sholaa saa jale

yaaraa ishq pe kiskaa bas chale

deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,

humse khataa koi ho jaaye naa

touch me don€™t touch me don€™t touch me soniyaa – 2

Kripa is singing and looking at Angad, who starts walking towards him and Angad just keeps distancing himself from her so she doesn't get near him because according to him, Kripa has gone absolutely nuts.

All the guys gather together with one another and hug each other.

teekhi teekhi teri akhiyaan,

chhooke chhooke behkati hai,

dekh dekh naa yun mujhko,

hosh hosh le jaati hai,

chhod chhod meri raahon ko,

taubaa taubaa dar lagtaa hai,

aisi vaisi teri baaton se,

ishq vishk saa jagtaa hai,

deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye na,

humse khataa koi ho jaaye naa

touch me don€™t touch me don€™t touch me soniyaa

The guys decided to record what the girls are doing for the future in case the girls try to pull something on them. The girls come near the guys and as the girls are about to touch the guys Prachi and Anjali hit the floor and pass out. Aaliya runs to the bathroom to throw-up and Josh follows her to see if she's fine. Kavya and Adi rush to pick up the two girls and Kripa on the other hand is laughing and clapping her hands together.

Kripa: (clapping her hands and jumping up and down like a little girl) Yeh dono gir gaye, yeh dono gir gaye, yaaayyy.

Kripa is acting like a little kid and is running around Adi and Kavya, who both don't look happy at all because the girls are really drunk. While Angad is just recording away what Kripa is doing and finds it really amusing. Josh comes back with Aaliya who seems really tired.

Josh: I think hume ghar jana chahiye, the girls are drunk.Adi: I totally agree, Prachi and Anju are passed out, Aaliya looks dead, and Kripa that girl won't stop jumping around.

Kavya: Angad, can you get a hold of Kripa before she runs away.

Angad grabs Kripa by the arm and starts following the others out of the club, when Kripa pulls her arm away and stands there.

Angad: Kripa chalo, ghar chalte hain.

Kripa: (walking to Angad and in a drunken state) Angad mere per (feet) bohot dard ho rahe hain, mujhse nahin chal payega.

Angad: The car's right outside, it won't take that long.

Kripa: Nahin Angad, please mujhe apne godh mein le lo na, pleaaaaaaaseeeeee.

Angad: (sighs) thik hain.

Angad carries Kripa who puts one arm around his shoulder while the other one is resting on his chest with her head against his chest as well.

Kripa: (drunken state) Angad tum bohot ache hoon, tum mere sabse ache dost hoon.

Angad looks at her and realized she's mumbling in her sleep, they reach the car and put all the girls in the back. Kavya and Adi sit in the front, while Josh sits in the first seat in the back with Aaliya and Prachi, and Angad sits in the last seat with Kripa and Anjali. The girls have their heads rested on Josh and Angad's shoulders and are asleep.

They reach the beach house and take the girls up to their rooms and tuck them into bed. The guys come downstairs into the living room and fall onto the couches.

Josh: These girls are a handful when they are drunk, man.

Kavya: Sach mein, yeh ladkiyan toh bilkul pagal hain.

Adi: Kal subha bohot maza ayega.

Angad: (grins) haan bohot maza ayega, especially Kripa's video. Haha.

The guys have a big fat grin on their face and can't wait till the next morning to come. They all say their goodnight to one another and go to their bedrooms and fall asleep waiting for the next morning to come.

Preview: The next morning and the rest of the weekend at the beach house.

Hey guys, it's not all that great, but Angad and Kripa are just friends as of now, so I really can't have the romance between them. the next part will be up in a couple days, and it will be longer than this one. And please please do comment and criticize, it really helps me make the story better. Tell me what's right and what's not, tell me what i should put in there or take out. So please comment and tell me how im doing and criticize my work.