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Meha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Hey guys.. I'm so sorry for not updating.. I don't have internet at home for the past week so i havent been able to access internet. Hopefully it starts working tonite... Also my college started on Monday which I am super busy with. I am at college 6-7 hours a day Monday-Thursday. It's summer school so the work load is a lot. I won't be able to update regularly like I did, I'll update atlease once a week... maybe even twice a week if i get the time... And weekends, something always comes up so I don't have time on the weekends. I wake up super early and go to college an hour early in the morning so I can type up the next chapter, I am almost done with it, so I'll maybe update tomorrow and if not tomorrow then Friday for sure. I am soooooo sorry, please bare with me, I don't even have the time to eat since i am so engrossed in school. Sorry once again.

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nuts123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

hey

take ur time in updating... i'm sure v can wait till friday... being the latest!! lol 😆

nd thanks 4 the pm😉

Irsa

Edited by Ravishing_gal - 17 years ago

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

take your time updating, school comes first and take care of yourself too
tc 😊

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Meha

@N3ha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Hello everyone, thanks so much for the comments, and thank for your patience, as I said in my note eariler I will be updating once every week and sometimes even twice a week if i get the time, the college load is just too much since it's summer school and only once month of it. So please bare with me 😊

Chapter: 4

Angad and Kripa are walking to class and talking. Angad is telling Kripa how Rakhi ma'am is total fida over him, while Kripa is just laughing at him.

Angad: Kripa haso mat, she's always trying to flirt with me or she compliments me and stuff. At first I thought she was being nice, but it's a daily thing now and it's scary.

Kripa: (laughing) aaj class mein mazaa ayega, or thodi shetani bhi mein karongi.

Angad: Tum kya karenwali hoon?

Kripa: Just wait and watch.

They walk into the class together and Angad sits down at his original spot and Kripa is about to sit next to him when she slightly gets pushed by some girl and she sits next to Angad. The girl is wearing a short skirt with a short top and some heels, her hair is down and she has black hoops on, with make-up on, we see her face and it's Mishti Bose.

Mishti: (giving a kiss on his cheek) Hi Angad baby, I missed you so much, how are you doing?

Angad: (with a help me look on his face) I'm doing good.

While this is happening Kripa is standing there just looking at this chick all over Angad. Angad looks at her with a help-me-or-I-will-kill-myself look. Kripa giggles.

Kripa: (to herself) I think Angad is asking for help and I should help him, but how do I get rid of this chipkali?

Thinking to herself she has an idea, so she walks up to Mishti and taps her. Mishti looks at her.

Kripa: Excuse me, who are you?

Mishti: (with attitude) I am Mishti and who are you?

Kripa: (with attitude as well) I am Kripa Sharma, and what are you doing with Angad?

Mishti: (gets up and faces Kripa) He's my boyfriend so obviously I'm going to sit next to him and talk to him.

Kripa: (looking at her from top to bottom) you and Angad's girlfriend, Angad ke itne bhure din agaye.

Angad is just looking at Kripa in disbelief and covers his mouth with his hand to prevent the grin on his face.

Mishti: (angry) excuse you miss, but we are dating each other and as far as I know I'm the best thing that ever happened to him.

Angad and Kripa let out a little laugh.

Kripa: Well I think the best way to find out is to ask Angad himself.

Kripa: Angad, kya Mishti tumhara girlfriend hain.

Angad looks at Kripa with a I'm-dead-look, but puts up courage and turns to Mishti.

Angad: look Mishti, you're just a friend to me, I never thought of you as my girlfriend, because you're not the type of girl I'm looking for.

Mishti: Par Angad, I thought we were dating.

Angad: Exactly, you thought, you never came to me and asked me, you just started assuming, I'm sorry but you're not the one for me.

Kripa: Well Mishti (emphasizing on her name) I think you got your answer, now if you could move, I would appreciate it.

Mishti just looks in disbelief and feels humiliated, she moves and sits behind Angad while Kripa goes and sits next to Angad. Angad looks at her and shakes his head while smiling. Kripa just smiles and looks at him.

Mishti: (to herself) Yeh Kripa kaun hain, aur Angad ki side itni kyun le rahi hain, pata lagana padega ke in dono ke beech kya chal raha hain.

As Mishti is thinking about this Rakhi ma'am walks in, Angad looks up and his smile turns into a frown while Kripa is just giggling. Angad gives her a glare and she stops.

Rakhi ma'am: RM

RM: Okie class I just want to remind you guys that there are only a couple months left till graduation and we have one final project to do and it will be in pairs of two.
Mishti thinks this is the perfect chance to get Angad closer with this project. While Angad is praying to have Kripa as his partner so he can be close to her at all times, even though they will see each other often due to Anjali and Kavya, but still.

RM: You guys won't be choosing partners; the person sitting next to you will be your partner.

Angad is all smiles, while Mishti has a big frown on her face because she is stuck with the school nerd Champak. (Imagine Champak as Skreech in Saved by the Bell) Champak wears high pants with his shirt tucked in, and curly hair. He looks next to him and finds that Mishti is his partner so he's practically drooling while Mishti gives a disgusted look. Kripa looks at Angad and is happy within her that Angad is her partner. As the professor is lecturing, Angad and Kripa are passing notes to each other and talking. This irritates Mishti so she puts her head in between Angad and Kripa:

Mishti: This is a class, and people around you guys are trying to listen to the teacher, so now if you don't mind, can you guys shut your mouths.

Kripa: (sniffing around) Angad, I smell something burning, I wonder what it is? Ah it's Miss chipkali over here. Now if you're done talking, go back to where you were sitting and let us get back to what we were doing.

Kripa to Angad: God this chipkali hamesha tumse chipak thi rehti hain.

Angad and Kripa laugh while Mishti is cursing Kripa under her breath. She's really angry because no one has ever dared to insult her like this, because she's Prithvi's sister. They all get back to paying attention to the teacher.

RM: I will miss each and every one of you a lot when you guys graduate, you all have been wonderful students.
Kripa gets an idea to do shetani with the teacher related to Angad.

Kripa: (eyeing Angad with a grin) Ma'am aap sabse zyada kis ko miss karne wali hain.

Angad knows where this is leading to, so he looks at Kripa and gives her a I'm-going-to-kill-you-when-we-get-out-of-here look, whilst Kripa winks at him and grins.

RM: (blushing) Mein Angad ko sabse zyada miss karongi.
The class is laughing.

Kripa: Kya aap Angad ko pasand karti hain ma'am?

RM: (still blushing) jee bohut, I'm only 25 (not really, but she's just saying that to impress Angad).

Kripa: aur aap ki shaadi nahin huyi hain, right ma'am.

RM: jee haan, abhi tak Angad jaisa koi ladka nahin mila na.

Kripa: great ma'am, woh kya hain na, Angad abh graduate hone wala hain aur jo qualities Angad ko ek ladki mein chaiye woh toh aap mein hain.

RM: (blushing and all excited) Sachi.

Kripa: Sach ma'am, woh mujhe abhi keh raha tha ke Rakhi ma'am mein woh sab qualities hain jo mein ek ladki mein dhond raha hoon.

Angad is looking at Kripa in disbelief and he is surly going to kill her when they get out of this class. Rakhi Ma'am walks up to Angad and tells him to stand up. Angad stands up and she hugs him tightly. From the look of Angad he seems squeezed. Kripa and the whole class are laughing their heads off. Rakhi ma'am lets go of Angad and walks back up to the front. As soon as she is about to say something when the bell rings and everyone starts leaving. Angad is walking towards Kripa and he seems like he is about to strangle her. Kripa runs out of there and Angad is chasing her, she finally reaches the canteen and sits next to Anjali while Angad takes a seat next to Kavya.

Anjali: Bhai aap Kripa ke peeche kyun bhag rahe the.

Angad: (pointing to her) ishe poocho isne kya kiya.

Kripa: (laughing) you know how Rakhi Ma'am has a crush on Angad well'. (and she tells everyone the story.

The whole group is laughing their heads off and Angad has a frown on his face. They are having their lunch and enjoying their break when it's time to go to their next class. The day at college passes by and everyone are heading home. Since Kavya and Prachi wanted to spend some time with their beloveds, they decided to go in pairs. Kavya and Anjali went together, Aditya and Prachi went together, and Angad and Kripa had to go together since they had no choice. But Angad and Kripa were somewhat glad they got to go together so that they can spend some time together.

The car ride was silent, because both didn't know what to say to each other, when Kripa finally broke the ice.

Kripa: So Angad, I hope you don't mind me asking, but how come you don't have a girlfriend? I mean I see all these girls stare at you, and most of them are probably head over heels for you, so why not?

Angad: Well there are so many girls in our college that may be good looking and they might be head over heels for me, but those girls aren't my type. I feel as if they just 'love' me because I'm rich and for my looks. I want a girl who loves me for who I am not for my money, and I'm just waiting for my pari.

Kripa: (smiling) Well I hope you find the girl of your dreams.

Angad: (to himself looking at Kripa) I already did.

Kripa: Tum ne kuch kaha.

Angad: errr'. How about you, do you have someone in London.

Kripa: (sad) No.

Kripa got a little teary, she wiped her tear away before Angad saw, but Angad had already seen this.

Angad: Kripa tum thik hoon?

Kripa: Haan mein thik hoon.

Angad: If you want to talk I'm here for you.

Kripa: (smiles at him) thanks Angad.

Angad smiles at her and they continue talking and getting to know each other. Angad feels more attracted to her as he gets to know her more, and Kripa feels like he's someone who she always dreamed of, but is scared to believe because she doesn't want to get hurt again. They all reach the Sharma house at the same time, once they are dropped off the Khanna's leave to go back to their house and to get ready for dinner at the Sharma's.
While Kripa is helping her mother cook dinner and help set up the table and stuff. Kavya has made a mess in his room because he doesn't know what to wear and Prachi is just getting frustrated because she has nothing to wear.

Prachi: Di!! Aap yaha aye na, please.

Kripa: Abhi ayi.

Kripa walks into Prachi's room and sits on her bed.

Kripa: Kya baat hain.

Prachi: (turns to Kripa) Di I have nothing to wear, what should I wear.

Kripa gets up and goes to her closet, after looking around she takes out a nice red salwar kameez with a matching dupatta, it's a spaghetti salwar with silver embroidery.

Kripa: Hmm I think you should wear this.

Prachi: Traditional clothes aur mein?

Kripa: Prachi you always wear western clothes everywhere, you should wear this and I'm sure Aditya will be impressed.

Prachi: (thinks for a bit) thik hain Di I will wear this.

Kripa leaves Prachi's room and goes into Kavya's room. As she opens his door one of his shirts land on her head. She takes it off and looks around the room, it's a pigs sty in there.

Kripa: bhai aap ne kya halat bana rakhi hain apne kamre ki.

Kavya: Kripa aaj Anjali ane wali hain, aur mujhe pata nahin mein kya pehnu.

Kripa: Lekin woh toh har roz aap ko milti hain, kya aap aise hi problem mein ajate hain.

Kavya: Nahin, par aaj Anjali ke mom aur dad bhi yaha pe ane wale hain, isliye.

Kripa: Acha, lao bhai mein aap ki madat kar deti hoon.
She walks to Kavya's closet and helps him find something to wear. Kripa takes out a black dress pant and a nice sky blue button up shirt.

Kripa: Yeh loh bhai, I think this color will suit you.

Kavya: Thanks Kripa I'll wear this tonight.
She smiles and then leaves to her room to get ready. While she is getting ready the Khanna's have arrived. Sujal is wearing black dress pants with a white shirt and Kashish has a matching salwar kameez on, Anjali has a black salwar kameez on with silver and gold embroidery, Angad is wearing jeans and a green polo, and Aditya is wearing jeans with a yellow polo. Everyone is there to greet them, except Kripa since she is getting ready upstairs. Aditya sees Prachi in a traditional dress and his mouth drops; Angad sees this and closes his mouth with a grin on his face.

Dilip: Kaise hoon Surya?

Surya: Thik hoon mein, tum kaise hoon Dilip.

Dilip: Same as always.

Both men laugh and walk into the living room while the rest follow. They all sit down and start talking.

Naina: Are Gayatri, Kripa kaha hain, ushe hum milna chate hain.

Dilip: Haan hum bhi dekhe humare Kripa kitni badi ho chuki hain.

Gayatri: jee mein abhi bula ti hoon. Kripa!! Niche aao beti.

Angad's eyes instantly fall onto the stairs, and we see Kripa coming down in a beautiful churridar dress that's green and blue with silver embroidery. She has matching dangling earrings on and her hair is down straight, she also has payals on her ankles. Angad's mouth drops on the sight he sees; Kashish sees this and nudges Angad.

Kashish: (whispering) Angad, apna moh band karo, tumhara dil ki baat saaf dikh rahi hain.

Angad: (closes his mouth and looks away) Bhabi aap kya keh rahi hoon mujhe samaj mein nahin a raha.

Kashish: haan, haan, mujhe sab pata hain.

Angad smiles at his bhabi, because no one knows him well enough then her and hugs her from the side.
Kripa comes and takes ashirwad from Dilip and Naina, and she gets introduced to Sujal and Kashish. Gayatri then tells everyone to come and eat dinner, everyone is seated at the table and the order is Gayatri, Naina, Prachi, Anjali, Kripa, and Kashish on one side and across from them is Surya, Dilip, Aditya, Kavya, Angad, and Sujal. While everyone is eating, Kripa gets up and goes to the kitchen to get something for someone, she comes back with a bowl of achar and hands it to Kashish.

Kripa: Yeh loh bhabi, aap ke liye achar, maine suna hain ke jo ma bane wale hain unko achar bohot pasand hain, isiliye mein aap ke liye layi hoon.

Kashish: Thank You Kripa, lekin tumhe kaise pata.

Kripa: Woh maine Anjali aur Prachi ko baat karke suna tha isliye.

Kashish smiles at her, and they all continue eating and talking to one another. After dinner Prachi, Anjali, and Kripa clean up.

The elders are sitting in the living room, while the youngsters are sitting in the opposite room talking.

Kripa: Bhabi, so how many months are you?

Kashish: do (2) mahine.

As Kripa and Kashish are talking, Angad is staring at her and how she has gotten comfortable with his family, he just can't take his eyes off her. The night goes by pretty smoothly and the Khanna's leave.

Angad lies in his bed staring at the ceiling and thinking about Kripa. He asks himself what's happening to him and why he can't stop thinking about her. He asks himself if this is love or just a mere attraction. He tries and tries to find answers to his questions, but he just can't seem to figure out his feelings towards Kripa. While on the other hand Kripa is there thinking about Angad as well. Thinking about their earlier conversation in his car, she keeps thinking what effect Angad is having on her.

They both fell asleep thinking about one another.

Preview: College?? (not sure yet)

Hey guys.. just a reminder that yes Kashish is 2 months pregnant, and also give me your opinions on what i should do, after the next chapter should I go right ahead to Angad and Kripa falling in love and Angad expressing it, or should i take it slowly, well let me know your opinons and leave comments and criticize please. 😊

Edited by GuJu_Qt - 17 years ago

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Kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

hey thanks for the PM...wow dlwoly falling in love..wonder what happened with kripa...hahaa funyn iwth rakhi mam and misti..lol..continue soon pls..will b waiting for ur next PM 😃

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Faiza

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

lovely part; I loved kripa's teasing and bubbly behaviour. awesome. well I'd advise to take things not absolutely slowly but not very fast either 😳

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Rima

@Rimsie.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

brilliant part, loved it, too cute love kavya and angad sleeping thing 😆 aww the fanfic title is very suitable 😉 nice one faizy 😃 thanks god for making AK meet early, i meant thanks for not dragging the story
😆 plz do cont soon 😳

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cheeselova

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

lol....kripa is really naughty she told the teacher that angad will be the perfect life partner for her😆 poor angad. i think u should take it a bit slow for AK expressing their love. so that being really good frnds can help them later to understand each other. 😉 awesome part.

~Sana~

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sehar

@sweet honey

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Posted: 17 years ago

#59

great part...wonder if kripa has a bad past wid someone....loved her teasing... cont soon 😃 i tink u shud take it sloly wid dem since it be better if dey had a gd understanding 1st...

Edited by sweet honey - 17 years ago

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nuts123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#60

hey thanks 4 the pm

gr8 part... so glad kripa's angad's partner nd the chipkali aka mishti is out of thr way.. or atleast for now 😆

ufff, thr teacher... having a crush on Angad??? is that even legal 😆 😆 ...lolz... she shud keep herself off angad at all times, after all he belongs 2 krips right???lol 😳

hmmm.... abt ur questions.. yeh i think things shud b happening slowly, after all itz only AK's 1st meeting so angad shud take time 2 confess... he shud try nd impress kripa 1st,., flirt with her nd stuff, then confess.... anywayz, thtz up 2 u, as it depends how the story finally shapes up...lol

continue soon... nd thnks 4 commenting on ym fic 😉

Irsa

Edited by Ravishing_gal - 17 years ago