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wow dear just read your entire fic and i totally love it; i wonder who the jerk was that broke kripa's heart

awesome part.....awww feel sorry 4 dah girls esp kripa....dey gna bi soo embarassed wen dey c dah video ....cont ssoon

awsom part

heyyy great jobb...i loved it...lol the grls were so funny especially kripa jumping around...aww they are in for it big time when they wake up the next day...i knew angad wud record it so they cud see wat they did...lol...haha...and the guys were scared of the girls..that was funny...i like ur decision of making angad and kripa friends first then falling in love...its good..take it nice and slow...it was very good...cant wait for the next part..continue soon

Very Good Love the way youyr story is flowing:) Keep It up:)

amazing part

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

wow dear just read your entire fic and i totally love it; i wonder who the jerk was that broke kripa's heart Hey i'm glad you love my ff, you'll know in the next 3-4 parts. 😊

lmao kripa however on the other hand is damn right hilarious; from bugging angad to the pranks and when she's high lol....awww angad is totally in love with her..... hehe.. yes I made Kripa a fun bubbly pranky girl even after a heartbreak.

josh and aaliya are very cute, prachi and aditya are hilarious especially with the gay incident lmao haha, yes i thought i'd make him the funny one since i can totally imagine him being like that, and i hpe veryone else can....anjali and kavya are damn right funny lol

and in the introduction for angad i was laughing hard i cant believe angad said that in his sleep lol i could imagine sujal's face lol and angad's when earthquake earthquake everyone hide happened lmao.... haha... thanks.. I so could imagine it too

i love your ff please do continue soon cant wait to read more...c=

as always Thanks and I will continue soon, the next part will be up by 2morrow night. 😊

sukhi :)

Originally posted by: sweet honey

awesome part.....awww feel sorry 4 dah girls esp kripa....dey gna bi soo embarassed wen dey c dah video haha yes they will, and yeah poor Kripa. ....cont ssoon The next part will be up by 2morrow night. 😊

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

awsom part

kripa was running around like a lil kid🤣 haha.. im glad you found it funny.. cuz i did too.. lol

continue soon next part coming up 2morrow night 😊

Originally posted by: Smileyface

heyyy great jobb...i loved it...lol the grls were so funny especially kripa jumping around...aww they are in for it big time when they wake up the next day...i knew angad wud record it so they cud see wat they did...lol...haha...and the guys were scared of the girls..that was funny...i like ur decision of making angad and kripa friends first then falling in love...its good..take it nice and slow...it was very good... hey thanks so much.. im glad you really liked it.. and yes kripa will be really embarassed the next morning... yeah i want kripa and angad to take it slowly and not jump into love...cant wait for the next part..continue soon the next party will be up by 2morrow night. 😊

Originally posted by: *PakiBeauty*

Very Good Love the way youyr story is flowing:) Keep It up:) thanks

Btw, There is no need for critize..too good:) thank you soo much, really appreciate your comments.

Continue Soon:) Cant Wait i'll post the next part 2morrow night. 😊

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part Thanks

cant wait 2 see the girls reaction after watching the video especially kripas haha oh the poor girl will be embarrassed

the last scene were angad picks kripa up was really cute i thought it was cute too😊

Originally posted by: teri_susan

Great part.It was fun😆.Angad recorded Kripa in her drunken state😆,really fun.Girls can't look after themselves in a drunken state😆.It is going to be more fun when they find about the video😉😆 haha.. yes it will be when they find out what they did last night.. especially kripa lol. Continue.... sure will.. next part coming up 2morrow night. 😊

Chapter 8A:

It's 10 a.m. the next morning and Kripa wakes up hearing a loud groan. She opens her eyes and sees Prachi.

Kripa: Kya hua Prachi?

Prachi: Di, sar (head) mein dard hain, aur hum yaha kaise poche... the last thing I remember last nite was drinking then heading to the dance floor.

Kripa: Mere sar mein bhi dard hain, and the only thing i remember last nite was having my last shot, chalo Anjali aur Aaliya ko dekh kar ate hain.

They both head to Anjali's room first and find Aaliya there as well.

Anjali: Kripa my head hurts so badly.

Aaliya: Me too.

Kripa: Chalo niche chal te hain, mein chai bana deti hoon, aur sar mein dard chala jayega.

They all head downstairs and find the boys eating breakfast. Right when the girls sit down at the table Aditya and Angad get up and start dancing to "don't touch me, don't touch me, don't touch me soniya," and the girls think they have gone crazy.

Kripa: Subha subha sharab?

Aditya: Huh?

Anjali: Have you guys drank alcohol early in the morning, is that why you two are dancing like retards?

Both Aditya and Angad look at each other and start laughing and Josh and Kavya join them two.

Aditya: You guys don't remember anything that happened last nite?

The girls shake their heads left to right in confusion.

Josh: Kavya, you want to do the honors.

Kavya takes out his phone and shows the girls their singing and dancing. The girls' mouths drop open and are embarrassed. The guys are laughing their butts off. After the video, the girls decide to leave, but are stopped by Angad.

Angad: Kaha chale tum log, abhi grand finale baki hain.

All the girls: (confused) Grand Finale?

Angad: Haan, yeh dekho.

He showed the girls the video of Kripa acting like a kid. Kripa was really embarrassed. When the video was over the girls came out of their shock and burst out laughing. The guys started laughing as well. Kripa chased behind Angad to grab the phone from him, he ran upstairs and into his room while Kripa ran right behind him. Angad was behind the chair and Kripa in front of it, Angad was waving the phone in front of Kripa and that's when Kripa got a chance to grab the phone and make a run for it. Angad ran right behind her and grabbed her shoulder, but tripped over one of his shoes which made both of them fall onto the bed. Angad right on top of Kripa crushing her petite body underneath his muscular and strong body. Both have an eye-locking session, but to interrupt the perfect moment Angad's phone rings and both come back to reality. Angad gets off of Kripa and she runs out of the room while Angad scratches his head with a goofy smile on his face. Angad looks at the phone and picks it up.

Angad: Hello, kaun bol raha hain?

Man: Tumhara baap.

Angad: Oh dad, haan bolo kyun phone kiya.

Dilip: Bas aise hi, check karne ke liya, ke sab thik hain na.

Angad: Haan dad sab thik hain.

Dilip: Good, acha kal kitne baje ghar tum log ayoge?

Angad: Kal hum bara (12) baje nikal jayege.

Dilip: acha thik hain, mein rakhta hoon.

Angad: Okie bye dad, yeh dad ko bhi abhi phone karna tha.

Saying that he walked downstairs where everyone was sitting and discussing what to do for the day.

Anjali: SHOPPING!!!

All the girls smiled while the guys just looked around pretending not to hear the word "shopping."

Prachi: Haan hum sab shopping chal te hain.

Josh: Woh na hum ladke nahin Aa sakte.

Aaliya: Kyun?

Kavya: Kyun ki uhh woh uhh, kyun nahin ja sakte Angad?

Angad: (glares at Kavya) woh hain na aaj woh hume woh karna hain.

Kripa: Kya karna hain?

Angad: Woh Aditya batayega, usne plan kiya tha.

Aditya: (scratching his head) maine kya plan kiya hain, aur kab plan kiya tha?

All the guys hit their head at Adityas stupidity, while the girls giggle.

Josh: Yaar yeh Adi bhi na, ishe kuch samaj nahin ati, pata nahin school mein kaise pass hua tha.

Aaliya: Tum logo ke excuses khatam ho gaye toh ab nah (shower) dho ke nikle shopping ke liye.

The guys nod their heads with a frown on their face while the girls jump out of their seats to get ready.

The group enters the mall and the girls shriek in excitement, while the guys know that the only reason why they are all here is to get their wallets empty.

Hey guys here's half of Chapter 8... i'll post the complete chapter in the next couple of days... sorry for the delay.. been busy with a few things.. and school starts next week too...enjoy reading it and please leave comments and criticize.

hey...awesome part...awww poor girls it must ave bin so embarassin 4 dem.esp kripa.....the boyz are funny...mkin all thses excuses to not go shopping...cont soon plz.....