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Pehli Nazar Mein

Hey guys I have decided to start a FF called Pehli Nazar Mein based on the show Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hain, after reading so many FF's I thought why not start one myself. This is my very first FF so please bear with me if I make mistakes. And feel free to give me ideas to put into the story or to criticize my writing. I feel, the more honest people are with my writing the better I can be at writing my FF.

Also I wanted to thank *F^a^i^z^a* in helping me to pick the name of my FF and helping me when I need her to.

Character Analysis:

The Khannas:

Angad Khanna: 23 years old who is lives in Mumbai with his family. Is not one of those guys who changes girlfriends every week. Girls love him and die to be with him, but has never looked at a girl in that way because he hasn't found his Ms. Right yet. A guy who believes only in love, but he hasn't found that girl to love yet. Last year in college and enjoys the company of his friends. He loves his sister and his Kashish bhabi the most.

Sujal Khanna: 25 years old who lives in Mumbai with his family. He is married to Kashish Khanna and helps his dad in business. Loves his family a lot and is a very sweet and caring husband. Spoils Anjali a lot since she is the baby in the family.

Aditya Khanna: 22 years old and is the twin brother of Anjali Khanna. The Shetan of the family you can say. He is full of life and masti and is in college as well. Him and Prachi are in love and are dating; everyone knows this but the parents. Is 1 hour older than Anjali and loves her a lot as well, but loves to annoy the crap out of her. Loves to annoy everyone and anyone he can possibly think of.

Anjali Khanna: 22 years old and is the twin sister of Aditya Khanna. Is 1 hour younger than Aditya. Is spoiled by everyone in the family. She is in College as well and is engaged to Kavya Sharma, the son of the Sharmas.

Kashish Khanna: 22 years old and is married to Sujal Khanna. She helps with the household work at home and loves her family a lot. Loves her Devars and Anjali a lot. Respects her in-laws to the extent.

Naina Khanna: The mother of the four kids. Loves her children a lot and will do anything for them. Is a house wife and is best friends with Gayatri Sharma.

Dilip Khanna: The head of the family and runs his business, The Khanna Industries. Loves his family as well. And is best friends with Surya Sharma and they are business partners as well.


The Sharmas:

Kripa Sharma: 21 years old and is the twin sister of Prachi Sharma, but they are fraternal twins which means they do not look alike. She is 3 hours older then Prachi. She is currently studying in London at London University. She has been living with her masi in London for the past 15 years. Her parents have called her back home to finish the last couple of months of her college in Mumbai. Is close to her brother and sister even though she hasn't seen them in person in 15 years. She talks to them every day. She has been heartbroken in love before; but still is looking for her Mr. Right.

Kavya Sharma: 23 years old and is the oldest sibling in the Sharma family. He is engaged to Anjali Khanna and loves her a lot. Best friends with the Khanna brothers and Josh. Is currently in the same college as the Khanna siblings. He loves his sisters to death and is willing to do anything for their happiness. Respects and loves his parents as well.

Prachi Sharma: 21 years old and is the twin sister of Kripa Sharma, but they are fraternal twins which means they do not look alike. She is 3 hours younger than Kripa. She is in love with Aditya; everyone knows that but the parents. Loves her brother and sister as well and respects her parents. The dearest of all the siblings to the parents. The Fashion Police in her family.

Gayatri Sharma: She is the mother of the Sharma kids and loves them to the fullest. Is a house wife and is the best friend of Naina Khanna.

Surya Sharma: The father of the Sharma kids and is business partners with Dilip Khanna and also his best friend. Loves his kids a lot, but really loves Kripa the most. Always wants the best for his kids.

Other Characters:

Josh Kapoor: 23 years old and is married to Aaliya Kapoor. Best friends with Aditya, Angad, and Kavya. Had to get married earlier than the rest because his mother was about to pass away which she did a couple months after Josh and Aaliyas marriage. Runs his parents business The Kapoor Industry. Is in college with the rest of the group and also manages his business.

Aaliya Kapoor: 21 years old and is married to Josh Kapoor. They love each other a lot. Her parents passed away when she was young. Her parents were really good friends with the Khannas, therefore the Khannas took Aaliya in, and raised her. The Khannas treat Aaliya as their daughter and Sujal, Angad, Aditya, and Anjali treat her like their sister. Also in college with the rest of the group.

Sheetal Gupta: She is Gayatri's sister and lives in London, she has one daughter and after her husband passed away she moved to London. Gayatri and Surya sent Kripa to stay with her when she was young. Loves Kripa and Sameera a lot and takes a lot of care of them.

Sameera Gupta: She is Kripas best friend and also her cousin in London. She has been there for Kripa through good times and bad times. They love each other a lot as well. Lives with Kripa and Sheetal.

Other characters will be introduced later in the story. If you are confused about anything please feel free to PM me and I will help you as much as I can. The story is going to take place in Mumbai as that is where the Sharmas and the Khannas live.

Note*: Angad, Aditya, Josh, Kavya, Kripa, Prachi, Anjali, and Aaliya are in the last year of college and will be graduating in the next few months. I did this so I can introduce Angad and Kripa in college and then move on with the story. Also none of the Khannas have seen Kripa but have heard of her and Kripa has never seen of the Khanna but has heard of them.

So guys let me know what you think of the Character Analysis and if you think I should change a thing or two feel free to PM. Also what do you guys think, should I go on and start this FF? Please leave comments so I know to continue or not.😊

-Meha😊


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Posted: 17 years ago
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great charachter sketch 👏 👏
sounds really intresting and the title sounds really good
cant wait 2 read the first part
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

great charachter sketch 👏 👏
sounds really intresting and the title sounds really good
cant wait 2 read the first part
continue soon



Thanks soo much.. I will post the next part as soon as I get enough comments.. 😊

-Meha


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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow love the character analysis! can't wait for the story this is gonna b verrryyy interesting! plz continue with the first part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thats good character sketch plz post the first part soon
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of course u should continue wid this fanfic. the character sketch is awesome. i really liked it. do cont soon. looking forward to read the first part.


~Sana~
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great intro. The story seems interesting can't wait for you to continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome charcter sketch meha; its sounds very nice. I'd love to read this story 😳 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: prabhi

wow love the character analysis! can't wait for the story this is gonna b verrryyy interesting! plz continue with the first part!



heyy prabhi thanks soo much for you comment!! i'll be posting up the next part in the next couple minutes!

-Meha
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Originally posted by: superstar15

thats good character sketch plz post the first part soon



thanks soo much.. then next part will be up soon!😊

-Meha

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