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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowowo reallyy amazing part plzz contuied soon
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wowowo reallyy amazing part plzz contuied soon
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amazing FF 👏
continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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take it slowly.. them falling in love but dont make it too slow.. its a great fanfic.. enjoyed reaading it
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really nice👏,

it's nice to see angad-kripa interacting with each other as friends on an equal basis, i mean i was getting rather tired of the rich brat/ nice but poor girl equations

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: chillingal16

hey thanks for the PM...wow dlwoly falling in love..wonder what happened with kripa...hahaa funyn iwth rakhi mam and misti..lol..continue soon pls..will b waiting for ur next PM 😃



Hey thanks soo much... and yes i'll def. PM u when i update the next part 🙂

Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*

lovely part; I loved kripa's teasing and bubbly behaviour. awesome. well I'd advise to take things not absolutely slowly but not very fast either 😳



Faiza.... thanks for liking my update... and why haven't u updated urs... im still waiting... but yes i think i'll take their relationship on a medium pace.. not to fast and not too slow.🙂


Originally posted by: rima791

brilliant part, loved it, too cute love kavya and angad sleeping thing 😆 aww the fanfic title is very suitable 😉 nice one faizy 😃 thanks god for making AK meet early, i meant thanks for not dragging the story
😆 plz do cont soon 😳



hi rima... thanks for liking my FF.. and yes i didn't want to lag on them meeting.. so i had them meet right away.. but it's not love yet... well Angad is falling for her.. but he hasnt realized that he's in love with her.. he thinks he really likes her a lot... and kripa... well she's attracted.. but she's confused.🙂

Originally posted by: iamsmart

lol....kripa is really naughty she told the teacher that angad will be the perfect life partner for her😆 poor angad. i think u should take it a bit slow for AK expressing their love. so that being really good frnds can help them later to understand each other. 😉 awesome part.


~Sana~



hey sana.. haha yes Kripa has lots of tricks up her sleeve to bug Angad and anyone else... just like Aditya.. hehe.. and yes i will def. take your advice.. thanks🙂

Originally posted by: sweet honey

great part...wonder if kripa has a bad past wid someone....loved her teasing... cont soon 😃 i tink u shud take it sloly wid dem since it be better if dey had a gd understanding 1st...



well yes she does have a bad past with someone.. but i won't reveal that as of yet... maybe later on in the story... and thanks for the advice🙂


Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

hey thanks 4 the pm

gr8 part... so glad kripa's angad's partner nd the chipkali aka mishti is out of thr way.. or atleast for now 😆

ufff, thr teacher... having a crush on Angad??? is that even legal 😆 😆 ...lolz... she shud keep herself off angad at all times, after all he belongs 2 krips right???lol 😳

hmmm.... abt ur questions.. yeh i think things shud b happening slowly, after all itz only AK's 1st meeting so angad shud take time 2 confess... he shud try nd impress kripa 1st,., flirt with her nd stuff, then confess.... anywayz, thtz up 2 u, as it depends how the story finally shapes up...lol


continue soon... nd thnks 4 commenting on ym fic 😉


Irsa



Hi Irsa.. .yes thank god Angad is Kripas partner.... and Mishti.. for now is out of the picture.. and I don't know if its legal for the teacher having a crush on him.. haha.. and yes he belongs to Kripa... and thanks for the advice.. i really appreciate it. 🙂

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowo reallyy amazing part plzz contuied soon



thanks soo much🙂

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

amazing FF 👏
continue soon!



thanks a lot🙂


Originally posted by: brainychild92

take it slowly.. them falling in love but dont make it too slow.. its a great fanfic.. enjoyed reaading it



hey thanks for the advice🙂

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

really nice👏,

it's nice to see angad-kripa interacting with each other as friends on an equal basis, i mean i was getting rather tired of the rich brat/ nice but poor girl equations



hiii.. thanks so much for your wonderful comment.. i'm glad you liked it.🙂
Edited by GuJu_Qt - 17 years ago
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Chapter 5:

It's 7 a.m. on a Tuesday morning and we can see the sun shine into the Khanna Mansion. Aditya and Kashish are chatting away while heading upstairs to Angad's room to wake him up. As they are about to open up the door to Angad's room they hear a whistling sound inside the room. Both Aditya and Kashish look at each other with a who-can-that-be look.

Aditya: (whispering) Bhabie, whose in Angad's room whistling early in the morning.

Kashish: (whispering) I don't know, it's too early for Angad to wake up (looking at her watch)

Kashish: Hmm I guess we'll just have to go inside and see for ourselves.

Aditya opens up the door and walk inside, both Adi and Kashish are in utter shock, they rub their eyes to see if they are dreaming. They see Angad in front of the mirror with only his tower wrapped around his waist whistling away while combing his hair.

Aditya: Someone please pinch me.

Kashish pinches him and he screams out in pain. Angad turns around and smiles.

Angad: Good Morning guys.

Kashish: Angad aaj subha subha uth gaye.

Angad: Haan bhabie, woh mujhe neend mein sapna aya tha ke aap aur Adi mere oper pani dal ne wale the, isliya mein jag gayi, aur phir socha ke kyun na aaj tum logo ko surprise de do.

Aditya: Bohot bada surprise de diya Angad, I'm so proud of you.

Angad: Ya ya, now if you guys don't mind, would you guys leave I need to put some clothes on.

Adi and Kashish said their byes and left to go down stairs. Angad quickly got dressed into jeans and blue button up shirt with black stripes, and headed downstairs for breakfast.

Kripa on the other hand, was still sleeping. Kavya walks in and wakes up Kripa and tells her to get ready. Kripa gets up and walks into the bathroom. She comes out wearing a red long top with black tights underneath and wears black flip-flops with it as well. She rushes downstairs and has her breakfast and quickly leaves with Prachi and Kavya.

Both the Khanna's and Sharma's reach college together. They all great each other and walk to their usual spot chit chatting.

Josh: Guys what's the plan for this weekend?

Kavya: I don't know, haven't really thought of anything, does anyone have an idea what to do this weekend or where to go?

As everyone was talking about the weekend, Kripa was quiet because she exactly didn't know anything about the weekend. Aditya noticed this and asked Kripa:

Adi: Kripa, let me guess you're confused?

Kripa nods her head like a little girl and Adi laughs at this.

Adi: Well you see, all of us here plan to go somewhere on some weekends to hang out and spend time together. So we are deciding where to go this weekend, if you know any places, or would like to go anywhere then let us know.

Kripa smiles and nods her head again and everyone resumes talking to each other about the weekend plan and where to go. Kripa is silent since she really doesn't know anything.

Angad: How about we go to our beach farmhouse. They have a theme park and the mall there as well and also some night clubs that we can go to.

Everyone thought it was a good idea, but still Kripa remained silent because she wasn't familiar with the place. But the thought of theme parks, mall, and night club got her all excited in the inside. Angad looked at her and smiled.

Angad: We can go to the theme park and the mall, and even the night clubs, unless Kripa over here doesn't go to clubs.

Kripa (looking up): For your information, I have been to night clubs in London with my friends.

Angad: Oh Kripa and clubbing in London, that too with friends, what kind of friends are these exactly. Kavya did you know that your sister went clubbing in London.

Angad smirks now and Kripa gives him a deadly look.

Kavya: (all serious) who did you go to the clubs with Kripa? Were they good people? I hope they were good compny? Do you drink?

Kripa: relax Bhai, I feel like I committed a crime and you are a police officer interrogating me. I went with Sameera, my best friend in London Sahil, and his girlfriend Priya. And yes I drink, but I know my limits which I never crossed or will cross no matter what.

Kavya now relaxes knowing that he can trush his sister and that Sameera was there to take care of her.

Kripa looks at Angad and sticks her tongue out at him, while he laughs.

Kavya: so it's decided, we're going to the farmhouse this weekend.

They finish planning their trip and all head to class. The day goes by really quickly and all head back to their respected homes.

Preview: Weekend Trip

I know it's really short, but it's better than nothing right? 😜 I AM SOO SORRY for not updating in the longest time. I have just been so busy with summer school. It's my third year of college and there is so much to do. I have a 5 page paper due tomorrow that i haven't even started, then another 3-5 page paper due next week and then a 10 page research paper due the following week, also a big project due next week. So as you guys see I'm really busy. I will try to update ASAP.. Please bear with me. School ends July 31st and after that i have a month vacation off so i'll update on regular basis. I also have the whole FF saved on my computer, so if any of you ever need the whole thing, just PM ur e-mail addy and i'll e-mail it to you, but it's not the full story, it's just what i have updated so far. And once again sorry for the delay. If you guys are confused about something then let me know and i'll be glad to answer your questions🙂


Also I don't have the whole story planned ahead, I write the story as I go on.

Please leave comments and advice, also don't forget to criticize my work. 🙂

Edited by GuJu_Qt - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thanks for teh PM...wow a fun weekend...wonder wat will happen there...hope u finish ur wrk quickly...will b waiting for the nxt parts and ur Pm...thanks in advacne

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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely part meha. angad waking early surely was a shocker for everyone;and lol he was teasing kripa, lovely, continue when u can
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Welll you concentrate on ur studies but I think Im to late for saying but just cuahgt up with ur FF its the most cuteuest one i have ever read:)
love this one Im like copy pasting to print and keep it with me..hhehee
I fell like i have no life but its just to good to resist:D

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