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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing part bhoomi witing 4 more cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

great part. vyom is so sweet trying to avoid the truth. he knows pari loves him and etansh is happy being with her still avoiding it. wat wl happen wen etansh tells him that u marry pari.

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Hi Golu,.. am so gald that u enjoyed reading this part.. heeh he wanted to not hear that all na.. Etansh tellign him... lets see how the sotry moves.. hey my parts will be a bit slow to be posted as was busy gettign set to watch Aamir and had les time to writet he parts..😉

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

amazing part bhoomi witing 4 more cont soon

Hi Jyothi.. am glad u enjoyign reading the parts... luv u ..will post but there will be adelay to post next parts.. may be..

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 24

In the morning, Parikrama was doing her routine work and she came and called her parents. Vaibhav and Anurama were listening to her conversation and were shocked when she said, she doestn want to marry Inder. She has found someone and she is in love. Her parents asked her they want to talk to him and also will personally come there and meet him. Parikrama didn't ell the details of who he is, but asked them to come and to tell Inder and his family about this. Her parents were worried . Vaibhav and Anurama went and spoke about the details of Vyom and they were very very shocked. Parikrama after listening to their conversation with her parents.. knew they will not calloff the wedding and it will not be nice on their part to inform this late.. she called up Inder herself..and told him,

Parikrama: Hi Inder..

Inder (was very very happy to get her call): Where r u my dear Pari… I was getting crazy to see u, talk to u.. but u didn't reply to any of my calls ?

Parikrama: Inder.. I wanted to tell u soemthing really important..

Inder: That I can understand or else I don't exist for u … I keep lookgin at our engagement pics and talk to ur snaps…

Parikrama felt really bad for him.. but she had to tell him the truth.

Parikrama: I have asked my parents to inform ur parents. To call off our wedding..

Inder: What!.... What r u saying.. No.. don't fool me..

Parikrama: I know I have hurt ur feelgins and may be ur family as well.. but I honestly was getting prepared to get into ur family.. before I came here In Jalandhar..

Inder: SO now what has happen? Why suddenly u don't want to be my life partner..

Parikrama: Inder… I came to Jalandhar and destiny made me meet Vyom.. I just met him couple of times but never felt he is a stranger to me.. slowly gradually I feel I want to be close to him, be an important part of his lfie.. I have relaised I love him… I really love him..

Inder: U r in love… wow!! U never thought about me..

Parikrama: I can just say… my journey from Mumbai to Jalandhar made me completely his, I could just think about him, his family… I don't want to hurt u . but I really forgot I was engaged indeed..

Inder: He proposed u…

Parikrama; No.. I have to propose him. I will..

Inder laughed listening this: He loves u .. that much u know right?

Parikrama: I don't know.. even if he doesn't, I don't see a problem.. but ya if he loves someone else I may really feel very very sad.. I love him and I am so happy to know that… if he loves me I will feel blessed..

Inder (sad for himself): Hmm I respect ur feelings and ur honesty …

He kept he reciver down but he was upset… though it was an arrange affair he had started visualising himself with her and trying to plan his life with her… He also was angry with God that why made Parikrama to meet Vyom.. why why…?

Zindagi – Ek Safar kahan manzil kiski kahan khabar,

Kissii key dil ki bekarari se koi rehjata hai bekhabar,

Sochta hai Safar mey kyun mood atey hain,

Kyun kuch raahi apni koi aur manzil talash karletey hain…

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey bhoomi
U hve becum expert in addin twists n turns in ur story...superb.....ab dekhna yeh hai aage kya hota hai;) cheti post karna next part...aur aake lassi ka glass pi jana ready rakhi hai tuhade liye;)
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mad_lovee

hey bhoomi
U hve becum expert in addin twists n turns in ur story...superb.....ab dekhna yeh hai aage kya hota hai;) cheti post karna next part...aur aake lassi ka glass pi jana ready rakhi hai tuhade liye;)

HI Himani. dear.... aww expert and me.. am to still nervous when i post my imp part of the story imp episode and wait.. ke did it made u all go rhoguh that emotion.. and cheti post karna. aree yeh Rajeev ke wajah se havnt written aajke parts.. but iwll do kal cheti and post..but littel wait this time.

Hi jyothi..ur applaus made me feel ncie that the story is gogin on teh rgiht path.. 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
Another great part. lets see wat does inder do now. and did u watch aamir how was the movie and how was rajeev's acting.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Another great part. lets see wat does inder do now. and did u watch aamir how was the movie and how was rajeev's acting.

Hi Golu... nice to know u enjoyed thsi part as well.. Inder kuch karega .. hehe cant say much..

ya i watched aamir and Rajeev just rocks in the movie.... movie was differnte in a documantary format and it was really good.. especilly it make one think as well...

will post the next part soon..

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 25

After listening to the conversation between Parikrama and Inder, Vaibhav got very upset with Parikrama. He went and told her,

Vaibhav: Main tumhara dushman nahi. Main tumhara jija sahi, lekin maine tumhe apni behen samjha hai.. maine tumhare parivaar ko apna sa manaa hai. Mera dil dukhta hai ki tum hamarey decision ko nahi manana chahti…

Parikrama: Maine kabhi appkey decision ko Naa nahi kaha, lekin aaj main apna decision lungi.. I feel I will cheat Inder and anyone else who comes in my life… When I am in love with a person how can I marry someone else.. how can Inder marry me when he knows I have feelings for somebody else in my heart. I don't want to hurt u jijaji nor didi.. mamma paappa ko to biilkul nahi.. lekin kya main aapsab ke liye sochu aur Anewali jhuti zindagi pe kadam Rakhun?

Vaibhav: Parikrama… jhutii zindagi? Tum hamare jagah pe raho and then tell me, where r we wrong? Inder is so succeful he earns really good I am not saying money is everything but we want ur life to be secured, he is handsome, good looking, his family is prestigious and they r quite well off. I know evrything about Inder and about his upbringing and am sure u will be happy there.. but when I think about Vyom I cannot understand how he can be a better choice than Inder? Vyom financically nothing closer to Inder, age wise Inder tumhari umra ka hai.. u both can understand each other… Vyom and his marriage… badnaami pure khandan key charoo aur hai… I dotn want it to each u and ur family.. our family actually. Vyom has also a chld, u want me to say Vyom se shaddi karlo.. how can .. how can we?We don't really know why they got separated who was right who was wrong? Takign care of someone else child.. why marry such a person… Parikrama jut compare and see Inder and Vyom .. from our point of view… we r just wanting ur happiness along with it a feelgin of a secured future for u… Tumhare mey koi kammi nahi hai… why u want to be a his second wife? The sound of it makes me worried…

Parikrama: Jijaji… main jaanti hun aap sirf meri khushi ke liye soch rahe hain… Badnami se mujhe koi darr nahi ab, jab main janti hun kaun sahi hai kaun galat.. aap ko bhi main galat nahi samjhti..shayad aap ke dil ko Vyom ki achaaee abtak nahi chuu payii… jab main Vyom ke baarey mey sochti hun to mujhe Inder kahin bhi nazar nahi ataa…Inder ke baarey mey sochuu aisa dil ko koi eshsaas nahi ho paya..

Vaibhav: Inder mey kya buraee hai kaho..

Parikrama: Buraee kaise bataun jab main Inder ko jaan nahi payee, jaaneki kasak bhi nahi uthi… Mujhe Inder kabhi bura nahi lagaa.. lekin pyaar planned nahi hota… love is not a game.. love is a magic.. the trick in it is something u get to know only when u have fallen in love.. aap mujhe Vyom se milney se rokatey the.. as u knew the happiness, the glow on my face was tellgin u that may be I will feel the magic…

Anurama came and told Vaibhav that her parents r coming to Jalandhar along with Inder's parents. They will have a discussion and decide what to do. Vaibhav was very tensed… Parikrama was feeling the tension they r having.

Koi aaj mere sath hai nahi,

Mere dil ki mohobat pareshani hai bani,

Kaise main mohobat ka jasbaa samjhaun?

Kaise main apnokey chehre par ki takleef bhi hathaun…

Parikrama wanted to meet Vyom and she called him up wanting to meet him while Etansh was at school…

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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 👏 Mindblowing and mindblowing bhoomi.
Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow ..ab aayega asli maza.....jaldi post karna bhoomi warna mein toh suspense ke maare mar jaongi..i really applaud parikarma for takin such a bold decision..as no one is takin her side n now she has to prove herself dat she is right...all da best to u n parikarma...dekhte hain aage bhoomi kya dikhati hai story mein;)

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