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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 21

Around 7pm, Vyom called upParikrama, as she got the call she was surprised, as Vyom had never called her up, it was always she calling him and Etansh.

Vyom: Parikrama just plzz can u do me a favour?

Parikrama: Favour?.. what favour.. don't use such heavy words.. plzz bolo kya baat hai I will surely…

Vyom: I was coming back home and I met with an accident..

Parikrama was very very tensed: My God!! R u alright… where r u ? what happen..?

Vyom: Don't panic.. am fine.. Just a minor bruise and I think my arm needs a little bandaging, my bike skit and I fell off.. I am on the way to the nearby hospital, people here r heping me.. can u just go and be with Etansh , I always reach by 7:00 but today I will be late for atleast 2 hours.. plzz he will be scared .. don't tell him anything abt my accident..

Parikrama: Sure I will be with him, and u don't worry but if u need any help tell me I will tell Jijaji to be with u..

Vyom: No.. I will manage.. thanks..

Parikrama: what thanks we r close enough... we don't need such formalities… u just take care and I will be waiting for u along with Etansh… (silence was there in which he felt Parikrama said something) ………come soon… (she said with a voice which had love for him)

Vyom kept the receiver and felt the last words of Parikrama.. …… "come soon" had so much pain…and he felt tensed… thinking … 'Has Parikrama started to have some feelings for him?' but later he brushed that aside knowing she is getting married soon…

'Come soon'.. sirf itna hi to kaha hai,

Kyun dilko pyaar ka ehsaas horaha hai,

Naajane Zindagi ek safar ban kahan lejayegi,

Safar mey tutte dilloo ko kahin aur na toood jayegi?

Parikrama rushed to be with Etansh. As she reached Etansh asked who it is and after seeing through the pinhole only opened the door, he was very happy to see Pariaunty there.. Parikrama told him, his papa will be late so she has come to give him company... Parikrama and Etansh played for while, Etansh ate little and both sat on the bed chatting… Etansh asked...

Etansh: Pariaunty everyone who kows my Papa and Mummy got separted always ask me kya hua.. and so many questions why u didn't ask me anything anytime…

Parikrama: Etansh… main jaanti hun, u r not comfortable, u r not happy to tell, recollect... I can understand; u must be hurt with ur parents separation... Whatever it is. I just want to see a smile on ur face... Why should I ask these questions and make u recollect the bad memories...

Etansh kissed her on her cheeks…

Etansh: Pariaunty, I want to tell u and share… cry in front of u… …can I…

Parikrama looked at his face and knew it's the trust he has for her.. that he wants to share it… she also knew, the child had been keeping so much pain in his heart for so long that he wanted to let it.. out..

Parikrama: Etansh.. Pariaunty is always ready to listen what Etansh has to say.. And also knows Pariaunty's Etansh is the strongest and the best… U can tell me…but why u want to cry… My Etansh doesn't look nice when he cries.. when u smile u look just so handsome ( she touched his chin… and he smiled)

Etansh Parikrama par apne Vishvas ko jata raha hai,

Kitna dil mey dard le betha tha bayaan kar raha hai,

Ateet mey na jane kyun apne maa se yeh durr hua hai,

Ateet se juddna chahtahai ya ateet ko bhulana chah raha hai…

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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderful! 👏

It's nice that Vyom trusts Pari so much that she's the first one he thinks to call about his accident. Ooooh, good thing Etansh will reveal everything to her. He needs to let it out. Hope Pari knowing the truth will be a good thing for everyone.

Continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
can't wait Bhoomi ...ab jaldi se Vyom ka past rvl kardo.. n yes, I like Parikrama's maturity ..she knws she lovs him but she has full control of herself ..it's really appriciable.. n Vyom , Oh God, kya karoon main iska? I hope, ''this is not right, i cant have feeling for Parikrama, she has be with a person much bettr than me '' yeh sab na bolna shuru kare...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great vyom called parikarma for help. So he felt she has feeling for him and he brush aside it. Good to see Etansh wants to share abt his parents with Pari he trusts her.

Waiting to see what etansh wants to tell pari so a part of vyom's past will b out

Cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow a lovely part bhoomi i just feel lucky toread such an amazing fic cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

wonderful! 👏

It's nice that Vyom trusts Pari so much that she's the first one he thinks to call about his accident. Ooooh, good thing Etansh will reveal everything to her. He needs to let it out. Hope Pari knowing the truth will be a good thing for everyone.

Continue soon!

Hi Rabia... ya true Vyom trusts her na and not only Etansh..heeh..jaisa baap waisa beta... Etansh reveals but what..? let see... Parikrama will know the truth ..what it will do to her mindset and will she be wantign to let her love out.. hmmm lets se...😉

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

can't wait Bhoomi ...ab jaldi se Vyom ka past rvl kardo.. n yes, I like Parikrama's maturity ..she knws she lovs him but she has full control of herself ..it's really appriciable.. n Vyom , Oh God, kya karoon main iska? I hope, ''this is not right, i cant have feeling for Parikrama, she has be with a person much bettr than me '' yeh sab na bolna shuru kare...

Hi SAra.... sweety a hug ur way..... woh kya hai kal se i was missign u much.. yunhi..pucho nahi kyun😳.... jaldi se post karungiii baaba u knwo i wont let u all wait for long... Ya Parikrama knows love isnt just abt feelgin what u want...but also u dont want to invade soemone else feelgins an right.. Vyom joo jooo tumne kaha woh kehta hai ya nahi.. yeh to episode mey dekhan padega.. waise love the way u described it.. ehheh Vyom wouldlook cute saying that..😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Great vyom called parikarma for help. So he felt she has feeling for him and he brush aside it. Good to see Etansh wants to share abt his parents with Pari he trusts her.

Waiting to see what etansh wants to tell pari so a part of vyom's past will b out

Cont soon

Hi Golu dear.... Etansh wanting ot share.. I was thinking abt u while postign my next parts.. i know amogn all the readers here I have always felt u were very excited to read and know abt Vyom n his past... his wife... hope u like the next part dear... 😊

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow a lovely part bhoomi i just feel lucky toread such an amazing fic cont soon

Hi Jyothi .... am glad u liked the part ... What yaar u r lucky..come on... U r lucky theek hai.. But I am very very lucky to get such great reders..if today i have posted and tried to attepmt such a fanfic its just with the encouragemetn u all gave me for my previous stroies.... luv u dear.. and u haev been really very sweet😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 22

Etansh: Pariaunty.. first I had my granny also staying with us.. she always told me stories .. like u do.. and she use to take care of me.. feed me and play with me. Run after me…I loved her the most.. more than my Papa..

Parikrama:Mummy use to go to office?

Etansh: Noo she use to cook and be at home, sometimes go to meet her friends.. and also go and stay at Nanaa's home… Mummy didn't like Granny.. always she use to tell Papa that the house is too small, how we all can live and granny should go and stay with bua.

Parikrama: So ur papa and Mummy fought on this…

Etansh: Papa use to be very busy.. bohat kaam kartey they.. he didn't had time to fight as well.. he would listen and granny would tell him to be quite.. We were staying in a rented flat, so papa worked hard to buy this flat..

Parikrama took Etansh close as he was thinking somuch and held her hand saying..

Etansh: I don't know what happened… one day Mummy took me away from the house and Papa tried to stop her. I went to Naana's house and later Papa came and took me from there… after that court was the place where they would pick me up.. and also fight… (Etansh had tears in his eyes)

Parikrama took him close and wiped his tears while he hugged her… and said,

Etansh: Pariaunty… I loved to be with Papa and also mummy.. but Papa always took care of me, why Mummy was very angry I don't know... the judge said I have to stay 15 days with papa and 15 days with mummy… and many times Mummy would not come to take me… at some day she would come and take me away from Papa and I would get tensed.. Papa asking why now.. why didn't she come after 15 days… Pariaunty.. mujhe bohat darrr lagney lagaa tha jab khantii bajti.. aisa lagta someone has come to take me away from papa…

Parikrama was now understanding why he would get so scared to see his father not around him, the day it happened in the train....

Parikrama: Ur mummy also loves u na… and u love her… is there chance that papa and mummy will be together.. if u want I will try to bring them together.. (she told this with extreme caution and extreme feelings towards Etansh and only thought abt his happiness)

Etansh: No… Mummy doesn't love me… mummy is not mummy … I don't like to talk about her.. Papa hates her…

Parikrama wondered how a child could say that about his mother… she felt may be Vyom has put these thoughts in him…

Apni Maa kaa naam bhi nahi lena hai,

Kya huaa aisa ke baacche ka dil rota hai,

'Maa' se to mamtaa, pyaar mehsus hota hai,

Isskey naseeb mey iss nam ke sath dard kaise judta hai?

Etansh: Pariaunty don't tellanyone this.. but I will tell u what happen in the court one day…(Parikrama was listening carefully)

Etansh: When I was with papa he use to be with me always and love me so much.. but when I use to be with mummy she would leave me with a servant and don't know where she was.. she use to tell me she is goign to meet a lawyer .. so that Papa is taught a lesson… She alwas told me bad thigns about Papa. Papa never discuseed abt Mummy when I was with him… Papa is very caring and understanding…

Etansh went close to Parikrama keeping his head close to her…

Etansh: One day Mummy took me to the court and I saw papa sitting with so many other members of my family , even my granny was there… aap ko pata hai na… court room to bahot daraawana hota hai.. sab mujheii dekhtey hain… aur sab gussey, tension mey hotey hain.. Court mey baatey ho rahi thi… aur jab mujhe bulaya aur Pucha ki main mummy ke sath khush hun, to maine , ' haan ' kaha… Papa meri aur dekhe magar naaraaz nahi hue.. ' Main kaha 'lekin papa ke sath main aur bhi khush hun' yeh sunkey mummy bohat naraaz hue… mummy ki badiii badddi ankhen dekh key main darr gaya…

Phir unhoney puchaa ki ' Etansh mummy tumhare papa se pyaar nahi karti hai kya?' Maine kaha, ' main to karta hun' phir judge ne pucha,' Papa mummy se pyaar kartey hia kya nahi'.. main kaha 'Papa sabse pyaar kartey hain, mummy se naaraz kyun hai pata nahi' phir judge ne pucha ki kya main Asim uncle ko jaant ahun, ' main kaha haan , maine kuch hi din pehle apne kamrey mey soo raha tha aur aisa lagaa papa bularahe hain. Main neend se utha . papa ko pukarkey royaa aur mummy nahi thi.. bahar gaya .. mummy ke roommey mummy ke pass jaakey soo jaun socha.. tab maine dekha mummy apne kapdey badal rahi thi… aur uncle bhi… woh clothese change kar rahe hain dekh ke main room se bahar aa gaya… aur bahar sofa pe beth ke wait kiya ki mummy aye to main unkey pass jaunga… ' Judge bohat shock they unhone puchaa, ' Asim uncle kya kar rahe the ander tumne nahi socha?' maine kaha ' Main soch raha tha.. uncle ko kya unkey Papa ne nahi samjhaya jaise mere papa ne samjhaya hai.. ke jab koi change kar raha hai to bahar wait kartey hain… mummy bahar nahi aye.. aur main sofey pe wait kartey soo agya..'

Parikrama was very emotional to hear this.. she understood properly that Etansh didtn relaise what he said meant what ?… his mother was sleeping with someone else? Oh God she felt how Vyom must have gone through all that…

Etansh: Mujhe nahi pata.. maine yeh kaha too mummy bohat gusse mey ayiiii maine kcuh jhutt nahi kaha tha… phir bhi… jab judge ne kaha main Papa ke sath arahun aur mummy mujhse se akey chuttiyo mey miley.. mummy ke pass gaya kaha mummy I will miss u.. royaa bhi.. mummy ne mujhe apne pairoo se dhakka maraa aur duuur hath.. apne Baap ka jasus hai kaha… (etansh was crying..) Main mummy mummy karke peechey gaya pata nahi phir bhi chali gayii… Jab main beemar huaa to bh mujhe dekhne nahi ayi… papa mujhe khud unke ghar le gaye.. lekin mummy ne papa se kaha maine suna.. 'Etansh ke kharchee ke paise doo phir rakhungi ussey apne ghar mey' Yehan tak ke jab Granny ko heartattack aya… tab Papa ne Kaha mummy se ke Etansh ka khayaal rakho ..chutti ka din hai. Main bohat darr gaya tha Pariaunty. Ek grannyse to main sabse jyada pyaar karta tha.. woh bhi duurr chali gayi… woh God ke ghar chali gayi… lekin mummy nahi ayi… isliye main stories nahi suntaa tha.. unki yaad mujhe aur Papa dono ko ajati thi… Aur chocolates bhi isiliye nahi achii lagti thi.. kyunki mummy court mey chocolate hi deti thi.. judge ke samne.. pata nahi kyun.. main jaanta hun sab paisoo ke liye hai… mummy mujhse nahi pyaar karti.. Papa sirf mujhese pyaar kartey hain…

Etansh was crying and Parikrama hugged him, kissed and held him close tightly.. Assuring him that she will never let him feel lonely again..She was always with him.. Etansh smiled with her words..

Etansh: Pariaunty.. aap jantey ho.. usdin main darr gaya to raat ko aapne mujhe goud mey liya…train mey?

Parikrama: haan (smilgin as Etansh had tears in his eyes but smile on his face)

Etansh: uss din mujhe sapna ayaa koi Papa sedoorr mujhe le jaraha hai... aisa lagaa kuch dard bhi horaha hai.. kuch darr tha kuch takleef… jaise hi aapne mujhe pass mey liya na.. main aapke goud mey ayaa to sab gayab hogaya.. magic… aur main kab soo gaya mujhe nahi malummm… Aap isliye hi meri Pari..hain.. Meri Pariaunty…

Parikrama was very touched with his words… and tears just flowed

Etansh: aap shaddi karke pune jayengey Papa nekaha..

Parikrama: Pata nahi..

Etansh: Shadii kartey hain jiskey sath to wahi rehna hota hai… To aap Papa se shaddi karloo.. phir yehan hamarey sath rehna na..

Parikrama just looked at his innocent face, the tears still in his eyes and the love in his words. She took him close and both of them slept knowing… the bond they have developed is too precious and pure…

Kya kuch nahi isss Bachchey ne hai Jhela,

Kya kuch nahi isskey masum dil pe hai beeta,

Badoo ke jhagdo mey isska bachpan barbaad ho raha tha,

Duniya dekhey tamasha; Etansh ka dil chupchap roo raha tha…

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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh God.. this is disgusting..how can a female go to this extnt? Extra marrtl affr toh phirbhi samjah mey aati hai ..that's her poersonal life [thought i hate this ] but i cant imagine that she is bng so rude n heartless with her kid .. peyeryon se dhakka marna , den asking for money of taking care of him ..gosh..this is rdcls...whn i was reading that part..felt ke usko dhakka marke bulidng se neeche giradoon..

now Waiting for Vyom n parikrama's convo abt all these, Vyom 's take on it ..uff, what he must have gone thro na..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey bhoomi..
I m so touched by ur story...i hope no kid in today's world has this kinda childhood with so much pain n fear.But this is kalyug n anythin can happen...its so unpredictable in today's world....These days people only think abt money n relations hve come on 2nd place..no one is bothered abt others ..their feelings.No body cares abt other's emotions...only thing in their mind is money...

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