'Zindagi – Ek Safar'Ep:34(Above18yrs plz) - Page 22

Originally posted by: mad_lovee

Amazing ending...thankgod i mean thank u bhoomi for making a happy ending of this story...i m so sorry cudn't give u feedbck on time as my net was givin so many probs from last 2-3 days..u know wht i really njoyed all the parts n especially the last 2-3 parts were just awesome....So miss writer when r u starting ur new story n make us engross in dat? cheti cheti likho taaki saanu tuhadi story padhne ko mile....Is baar toh lassi , prantha sab milega....waise bhoomi i cud feel dat frm the story itself dat u love pranthas n lassi too tabhi story jalandhar mein bana di...hehe;)
neways keep up the gud work.
God bless u

Himani

HI Himani... oyeee tumhari lassi aur parathe da swad kuch asaa chadaaa ki episdoe likhti gayi likhti gayi aur dekho..endign bhi hogaya...Taunnu changey laggey aur menu tauda replies ekdam sonna lagta.. hun wait kardi rehndi... aur luv u for reading it and ecnoruaging me so much..

Haan parathe da asar story pe bhi hogaya.. haan bahana to nahi parathe to hun USA vich bhi le jau...😆hey will see when i can write the next .. nothign yet.. btu love the way u have appreicated me throguh out.. writing and postign this ff was so much fun due to all this.. luv u dear.. and GOD bless u too...tc

really an awesome stry bhoomi...it was so beautiful that i read the whole thing in one go..loved the way u tackled some real life issues adding ur own unique style 👏 👏 👏 nd love the way u end teh episodes with a poem 👏 👏 😛 gr8 job 👏 looking forward to ur next stry. r u gonna write anything on sk again...would love to read one 😛

Originally posted by: Paru_M

really an awesome stry bhoomi...it was so beautiful that i read the whole thing in one go..loved the way u tackled some real life issues adding ur own unique style 👏 👏 👏 nd love the way u end teh episodes with a poem 👏 👏 😛 gr8 job 👏 looking forward to ur next stry. r u gonna write anything on sk again...would love to read one 😛

Hi Paru.... Am so gald that u liked this story Paru,,,and found it beautiful enough... yup i try to make it look less fictionl and more real to enjoy and feel it can happen for sure.. Oh i have an unique style.. 😃feels so good to know that... ending iwth a poem i just cant help it u see...😆but so happy that u enjoy reading thsoe poems.. aww feels so ncie that u al look forward ot my next story .. i reall dont kow when will i post my next.. And Sk.. chance r too less as i dont lke repeatign mysel often ... but lets see.. lu vu dear for all ur appreciaton and kind words.....tc..😳

Originally posted by: ssh57

This time I decided I would comment only after reading the whole story. It was really very nice and becoz of he pictures I felt as if I was watching a movie (not a tv serial becoz I read it in 1 shot)'

The best character was Etansh- what a rare name. Your choice of names is cute (Parikrama, Vyom, Anurama). He's so chweet, intelligent, sensitive and understanding.

The last few parts especially at the hospital where Pari explains her love to Vyom was fantastic. In this story u have taken up the cause of HIV and explained HIV & AIDS r 2 different things. That's really impressive. U have also depicted the trauma faced by children while their parents go thru a divorce. That too was excellent. The verses as usual were fantastic and in right nos. Just one at the end of each part.

The only thing missing was a character to potray some humour like your anshu, asit or Kinnari. Of course I liked it verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry much.

Hi,

This story is more real in nature.. and have met such people i was quite sensitive to deal with it... I am glad u liked the names.. i wanted the name to brign out the feel of the charcters as well. This story was with a perspective that its not that only men cheat women but certainly there are certain women too who cheat men... The basic part was to touch sentive issues with an interst while reading... HIV part I wanted to include it and not make it look like a lecture but somewhere as a adult writer here why not try my bit of awareness.. i tried and sooo happy my readers have truly appreciated , this makes me more comfortable to touch such tpics more with more confidence.. I pics were also searched and posted I am glad u liked reading and felt as if it was movie.. The 30th and 31th part are the emotional ones.. and yes my readers have mentioned how moved even they were while reading. that makes me feel good as with my style i cant be more descriptive in detailing but still if u feel sooo touched by certain scene make me feel very nice...

Yes , there was less of humour element.. but for the same reason..i had started thinking together by chance after this... immediately after i finsihed this I wrote together by chance to make smiles come acroos more n more.. 😃..

thanks a heap for ur wonderful comments...