'Zindagi – Ek Safar'Ep:34(Above18yrs plz) - Page 16

Episode: 28

Parikrama:Hello.. (her breathe still had tears and pain) (it was VYom on the line but he didn't speak but felt Parikrama may be is crying… Etansh took the reciver..

Etansh: Hi Pariaunty..

Parikrama: Etansh.. kaise ho..

Etansh: main theek hun.. aaj Papa se ladaaee ki , aur kaha main Pariaunty key sath hi jaunga.. humne film plan ki hai na..

Parikrama (feelgin glad someone is with her she isn't alone) She cried keepign herhand on the reciver so that Etansh deostn listen to her cries…after composing herself she said

Parikrama: sure.. chalengey.. Main lene aungi.. theek hai…

Parikrama took Etansh from his home, while Vyom didn't even look at her and Parikrama went away with Etansh. As she went Vyom looked from the window and saw both of them,

Vyom: Parikrama.. Pari.. kya karun.. Mera naseeb hi kuch aisa hai.. Bete ko paane ki itni khushi thi.. uska bachpan hi bigad gaya.. tumse milne ki kitnii khsushi hoti hai.. lekin kehna chahu to bhi..nahi kehsakta... Pyaar ko paanaa chahun to bhi nahi paa sakta.. sathi ki chah nahi mujhe jarurat hai. Dil key khalipan , dard ko bantana chahta hun.. dard ka tufaan rukta hi nahi… ab to aur hi lenre tufaan ko baha rahi hai ..mujhe aur akela bana rahi hai.… Kaash main keh sakta….

"Zindagi – Ek safar hai.. Milgayi Nazar tumsey,

Safar ka aalam suhana lagne lagaa uss dinsey,

Iss tuttey dil mey Tumhe bahoo mey bharne ki arzoo thi,

Zindagi tumsang jeelun yeh kasak bhi uthi thi…"

As he truned around he saw a guy standing in front and looking at him..

Vyom asked him, "Excuse me… Aap kaun?" the man replied.. " Main Inder, Parikrama ka fianc.. (After a long pause he said).. fiance tha…"

Vyom looked at him with a guilt feeling as he had just said those words and felt if Inder must have heard those lines he would have got hurt.

Vyom; Sorry.. plzz aap ayi bethiye.. Aap inder hai… So good to see u..

Inder looked at him and kept starign at him wondering what is about Vyom that Parikrama liked so much loved so much..

Inder: U must be knowing Parikrama has called off the wedding..

Vyom was shocked and feeling Why did Parikrama do this..

Vyom: I told her to get married and go by her family's decision; I don't know how to make her understand.

Inder: Do u love her..

Vyom: I told her I don't.. plzz dont keep these things in mind.. there is nothing in between I mean.. I don't know how to put it.. I can feel how much hurt u must be after Parikrama said those things .. She is a nice gril.. Just give her strength and support to change hermind…

Inder: Why u r so concerned about her.. her family will do. (he said with a angry face)

Vyom kept quite…

Inder stood and walked around in the room…

Inder: Why did ur marriage didn't work out?

Vyom: It didn't work out. I don't find any reason to tell the reason to u .

Inder; U don't want to tell but let me tell u what I can understand… (he said with a smile and anger in his eyes) See.. u r among those people who after maraieg how long wil u be with ur wife day in day out… .oopps night in n night out.. u need a change right. Sooo Ur wife must have had enough of ur trygin to impress other grisl around.. She must hve caught u and told to stop and that's what u r.. . a *****

Vyom was very upset with those words but he tried to keep himself away dicussign much on it…

Vyom: U can think whatevr u want… Why did u come hear .. to tell me what I am?

Inder; I cam to ask u something.. as u know I will be getting married to Parikrama, aaj nahi to kal to samjh jayegi.. today her dad also slapped her.. she will change her mind I know.. (VYom looked at him with shock as he got to know Parikrama was slapped… He felt very emotional… he felt like going towards her and kissing her and making her feel.. there r people who just love her so much.. HE loves her so much.. )

Inder: soo I have come here to ask and be assured.. I mean.. Nothing physical happened na.. due to which she just is wanting to marry u…. (haan… he tried to push Vyom )

Vyom was terribly upset he held Inder's collar and said: U r PArikrama fiance u think she is that kind of a girl.. she is still rooted to her values.. How could u think about us like that..? She loves me with a pure heart… (he stopped himself from saying more, later loosen his grip and composed himself)

Vyom: Noo.. She just recently told me she loves me and I said I dont…after that we havnt met.. and Be assured I will not meet her nor talk to her.. Will try Etansh also tries not to call her up again..

Inder laughed: Vyom.. I know why Parikrama is in love with u … (Vyom loked at him with surprise) When I said those things about u and ur marriage why it failed u didn't get that angry it was about u.. but when I said something about Pari.. u started getting upset.. U respect her so much… more than urself.. U can't compromise on her dignity.. U r a very nice hearted person.. that's why Parikrama Loves u… and Vyom I heard those lines u said.. U love her.. Whats the problem.. really why u broke her heart.. she is under so much pressure..

Vyom just stood there and tears flowed from his eyes…a voice came along.. " Why.. Vyom I want to know Why? " Vyom looked in front and saw Vaibhav was standing..

Vaibhav: Inder wanted to meet u, I couldn't understand I should talk t u or not.. and just stood here behind the door… I heard everything.. tell me.. Why u rejected her love… For us? For her family?

Vyom silently said turned towards them and said: For her!

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wow bhoomi sorry couldn'comment earlier....wonderful dear!!!!!!

love
nihita

wow bhoomi u just know how to leave me speachless as always gr8 part cont soon

Originally posted by: nihita

wow bhoomi sorry couldn'comment earlier....wonderful dear!!!!!!

love
nihita

Hi Nihita... Glad to get ur response dear... fels nice u liked the parts... and no sorry haan.. can understnad...😃

Originally posted by: sanightingale

Diii!!!!!🤗
how r u??? sorry i'm commenting itna late!
story ekdum mast hai...the cricket scene was too good! 😃..n starting mein the chocolate n story scene ws cute too😊
pics n the poetic lines r gr88...perfect!! 👏 👍🏼
love these lines!! 👍🏼
"Zindagi – ek Safar hai, Badaa kathin yeh dagar hai, Safar mey haar na manoo agey rastey khulengey,Kadam to badhaoo agey hausley buland hongey, Zindagi - mey kal kya hoga humne nahi jaanaa, jo himmat na hare, salaam useey karta hai saraa zamana…"

as always, luv all the characters 😃..waiting fr the nxt part..i jst hope vyom ka koi badaaa problem nai ho...😕..

snapi will write to after her xamz.... luv you .🤗..Tc...Allah hafiz....Nida..

Hi nida.... pehle read kiya and I knew it was Nida.. btu u had nto edited then ur name.. btu muah muah nahi tha.. to knew San nahi hai... Nida hai... so glad to get response from u dear... hope u doign well... hey u liked the stroy so far na.. and Vyom ka problem... hmm that will be in the next part...and hope u liek it .... u liekd the lines.. even I like..😆but when i get comments such so feel confident that ya it worked...😳 will post the next part soon.... luv u dear.. and give soem dozen 5 star chocolates to San from my side... tumhe to main Jahppisss de ti hun..ekdam fresh..😳🤗

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow bhoomi u just know how to leave me speachless as always gr8 part cont soon

Hi Jyothi.... aree speechless kyun hojati ho... tumhari pyaari baatein mujhe achii lagti hain.. luv u and happy u r enjoyign reading..will continue soon.. 😃

Episode : 29

Vaibhav and Inder looked towards Vyom and his eyes which were emotional… his lips were wanting to say but voice had so much pain that words were not coming out… Inder held his hand on Vyom's shoulder…

Vyom: Aap correct hain Vaibhav.. I cannot marry her… I am not the right guy fro her, she can never be happy with me..

Vaibhav: Vyom, I have realised the depth of her love she has for u, I use to feel she just is in awe of u but noo.. she has understood herself and U. She cares for u. The affection she has for u is the path through which love for u came and she will not change her decision I know that.

Vyom: She has to forget me and marry Inder...

Inder: But why will I marry her... she loves u, u love her... she is ready to be called ur second wife and take care of ur child as her. Why r u underestimating her?Etansh will accept her then whats the problem…

Vyom: Yesterday my son Etansh came to me… he told me, Papa, pariaunty is very nice.. I want her to stay with us; she loves him so much he wanted Pari aunty to become his Mammaa… I scolded him, that Parikrama can't become our family part.. I can't marry her and not to talk like this again… and he went silently inside… later I tried to cheer him, but he had tears in eyes and told.. Papa.. Pariaunty loves me I love her.. I can share so much with her without feeling any fear of asked about the same thing in the court… He is a child, but I cant be selfish.. thinking baotu my happiness and taking my problems over to her…

Vaibhav: If we agree u will marry her?

Vyom: How can u agree..? Even if today I tell Parikrama I love her what is the future to this relationship... she will get nothing but character assignation by the people from many corners… I am not yet got separated from my wife legally... I have filed for divorce years back but 3 years passed by we still r fighting on the custody battle… I cannot marry anyone until my divorce isn't done.. And I really don't know when this divorce w ill get over.. I cant let Parikrama be with me without getting married, what will the society think of her?..and what will her parenrts feel?.. not only this as the base of filign the divorce was the affair Kaya had with a Asim…. they will not spare Parikrama if they get a hint of my love for Parikrama.. She will be unneseccarily pulled into the muddle… my divorce proccedings have got to the ugliest and I dont want Parikrama to get in it ..

Uss Kaya sey durr rehney ki kasam khatta hun,

Bacchaa mere sath rahe main yeh chahta hun,

Badnami kya hoti hai main janta hun,

Parikrama ke charitra par ungli uthe nahi sehsakta hun…

Vyom kept silent and so did Vaibhav and Inder…Vyom silently walked and holding his fist with fear in his eyes… he said,

Vyom: My child Etansh is suffering from a heart ailment. Tthat's the reason his mother Kaya hasn't come to meet him, couple of times he has fainted and she had to go around hospitals she dosnt want to take go round the doctors, I have taken loans for his operation which will be done in Hyderbad.. and financially I can just do everything for my son… but nothing for Parikrama..

Pyaar Ishq, Mohobat naam kitne Hasseen hai,

Zindagi ke Safar mey Mushkiloo Ki Zameen hai,

Kehney ko Sochley Pyaar se badkar kuch nahi,

Kya Zindagi jeene ke liye Astitva ki jaroorat nahi?

Vaibhav and Inder were silent they knew that practically its very difficult for Vyom to marry Parikrama, don't we know our court cases go on for years. Emotionally he will say he loves her, his true feelings but Parikrama will get into the darker side of Vyom life, his divorce battle and Etansh ill health not to foorget the financial struggle to add…

They went away knowing Vyom will never disclose Parikrama that he loves him. He is a matured man and knows the problems that may rise for Parikrama.. Vaibhav felt really proud of Vyom but at the same time really sad for Parikrama… Inder too had the same feelings.

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hi bhoomi! i'm a silent reader...... i read many of ur stories... but this is the one which is very touchy and moved my heart.........
3 cheers for ur awesome skills 👏........ keep up the good work.......
take care....

Oh my God poor etansh. feeling bad for him. This part made me cry felt very sad today. 😭

U have written it beautifully. i have just loved it.

sorry, i can't write long reviews right now because there's too much going on in my life. But I read all the chapters, and they are wonderful! I feel so bad for Vyom, Etansh and Pari.

Oh No .......howwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy... i m feeling so bad ....i knw love is not abt just luk into ecah othrs eyes n spnd the life happily ...reality or practically cms in between n shttrs the beautiful dream...whatever Vyom said was abslty right,there is just no othr way but dil ka kya karein?

Etansh ..oh poor kid... i m feeling like giving him awarm hug ... Beautifully written Bhoomi .. but i also knw that Parikrama too is mature...she 'll undrstand the circmtnces...lets see what happns next ... yeh pyaar itna dard kyon lata hai apne sath?

just finish last 3 parts bhoomi i am speeechless you done awesome 👏 Last part make me cry i feel realy bad 😭 😭 😭 bhoomi you are awesome writer 👏